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1、高考书面表达精讲精练专题 资中外语组唐勇编写高考英语作文应注意哪些点1尽量用短句，慎用长句。2.多用高级词汇，避免误用。3.字迹清晰，尤其注意要工整，不能涂改，必须打草稿。4.多留意范文的开头与结尾。注意借鉴5.注意总结，对各种类型的文章最好能背上一二篇范文如何算是一篇好的文章？ 1、覆盖了所有的要点。 2、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。（词汇、句型【高级】和语法多样化【较复杂】） 3、有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。考场作文TIPS 一，取悦评卷人 有清晰的整体脉络 有自然的段间衔接 经典的用词用句 有整齐美观的书写 二，润色文章原则 用词“老辣” 用句经典:
2、 倒装、强调、虚拟 名人名言高考作文评分细目1.对内容的要求全面2.对句式的要求多样3.对词汇的要求丰富4.对语篇的要求流畅，顺畅的连接和转折5.对书写的要求正确，工整6.对目的的要求符合写作要求1. 英语书面表达考查的是考生的综合能力。一篇好的书面表达不仅是紧扣主题、要点齐全、意思连续，还要应用较多的语法结构和词汇。使用复杂句式，可增强写作效果。高考常见书面表达句式结构，主要有以下几种：一、简单句、并列句、复合句错落有致，增加文章节奏感。1我对你取得的进步感到吃惊。a. You have made progress. Im amazed at that. ( 简单句 )b. You have
3、 made progress and Im amazed at that. (并列句 )c. Im amazed at the progress youve made. (2009 湖北) (定语从句)2大家都知道，中国是一个历史悠久的国家。a. It is well known. China is a country with a long history. (简单句)b. China is a country with a long history and it is well known. (并列句)c. Its well known that China is a country wi
4、th a long history. (2009 山东) (主语从句)二、被动语态的使用。主动为主，被动为辅，使句式表达多样化。1如图所示，其中许多学生都戴眼镜。a. Most of the students are wearing glasses. You can see that in the picture.b. As can be seen in the picture, most of the students are wearing glasses. (2007天津)2她们一到那里，李月和张华就受到了热烈欢迎。a. Upon their arrival, they warmly w
5、elcomed Li Yue and Zhang Hua.b. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed. (2009 浙江)三、使用短语使句式简练。1令我高兴的是，父亲把我送到一所著名的医院去体验护理工作。a. I felt delighted. My father sent me to a famous hospital to experience nursing.b. To my delight, my father sent me to a famous hospital to experience nu
6、rsing. (2009上海)（短语）2大约在下午一点钟，Tracy打来了电话。a. At about 1 oclock this afternoon,Tracy called.b. At about 1 oclock this afternoon,Tracy made a phone call. (2009全国I)(短语)四、it的使用 it代替动词不定式、动名词、从句等，作形式主语或形式宾语。1我认为保护和美化我们的环境是我们的职责。a. In my opinion, it is our duty to protect and beautify our environment.b. We
7、feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment. (2009 年北京 ) (it作形式主语)2我认为，通过和大家一起生活，对学习共同生活是有教育意义的。a. In my opinion, it is instructive to learn to live together by living together.b. I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. (2008福建) (it作形式宾语)五、非谓语 不定式、过去分词、现在分词
8、及动名词的使用，可使句式多样化。1我想申请护理工作，当一名护士。以便能提高护理水平。a. I want to apply for nursing and become a nurse. And I want to improve my nursing.b. In order to improve my nursing, I want to apply for nursing and become a nurse.(2009上海) (不定式短语作目的状语)2鼠标是一个有用的装置。人们用它来和电脑进行对话。a. The mouse is a most effective device.It is
9、used by people to communicate with acomputer.b. The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer. (2009 江苏)(过去分词短语作定语)3看见一个年轻老师进了教室，我的学生开始吵闹起来。a. When my students saw a young teacher enter the classroom, they began to make noises.b. Seeing a young teacher enter the
10、classroom, my students began to make more noises. (2009 湖南 )(现在分词短语作状语)4感谢你给我寄来的信。在信中你询问改建后的前门大街的情况。a. Thank you for your letter. In it you asked about the rebuilt Qianmen Street.b. Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. (2009全国II)（现在分词短语作定语）六、从句 定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句的使用，可体现扎实的
11、语法功底。1定语从句1)我们要做的主要的事，就是到农场帮农民摘苹果。a. We will do the main thing. We will help farmers pick apples on the farm.b. The main thing we will do is to help farmers pick apples on the farm. (2009 辽宁)(限制性定语从句)2) 我经常浏览你们的网站，从那里我知道你们正在征集讨论话题。a. I often visit your website, and from it I know that you are collec
12、ting topics for discussion.b. I often visit your website, from which I know that you are collecting topics for dis-eussion. (2009 重庆 ) (介词提前的定语从句)2状语从句1)到了志愿者们离开的时候，老人对他们的好意表示感谢。a. It was time for the volunteers to leave.The elderly people thanked them for their kindness.b. When it was time for the
13、volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.(2009浙江) (时间状语从句)2)现在我很兴奋，非常想和你一起分享这次难忘的经历。a. Now I am excited. I cant wait to share with you an unforgettable experience.b. Now Im so excited that I cant wait to share with you an unforgettable experience. (2009湖北) (结果状语从句)3名词性
14、从句1)你的心情好坏其实由你自己决定。a. Do you have a good mood or a bad mood? It depends on yourseff indeed.b. Whether you have a good mood or a bad mood depends on yourself indeed. (2009江西) (主语从句)2)我想，我一定能学会如何处理严重事故。a. I m sure to learn how to deal with the serious accident. I must say it.b. I must say that Im sure
15、 to learn how to deal with the serious accident. (2009上海)(宾语从句)3)你真正想说的是：这些天你没事可做。a. You have nothing to do these days.You were really trying to say that.b. What you were really trying to say is that youve nothing to do these days. (2009湖北) (表语从句)七、倒装语序 可增强说服力1通过这种方法我能获得更多的自信。a. I can gain more confidence in this way. b. Only in this way can I gain more confidence. (2009 福建) (介词短语提前)2我们很少知道国内外发生了什么事。a. We seldom know what is happening both at home and abroad.b. Seldom do we know what is happening bot
