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1、四级写作思路及冲刺范文指导2021年12月四级写作思路和冲刺范文指导(2)作文话题：AdvantagesandDisadvantagesofCellPhone的利与弊的好处。的弊端。我的看法。作文种类：纲要式各抒己见对照论文。考点解析：“的利与弊属纲要式各抒己见类谈论文。也有书把此类写作模式的作文归类于般配对照类或比较对照类作文。写作的套路是“一些人以为;而另一些人以为。我的看法是。本文恰吻合这个写作套路：一些人以为有很多好处;另一些人却以为也有很多弊端。我的看法是：跟着中国入世，花费会随之大大降落，最后的利将远远大于弊。理应指出的是各抒己见类作文与对照比较解析类作文极其相似，其主要差异在于：
2、前者最后一段是论述我的看法，此后者不过得出一般性的结论。各抒己见类与对照比较解析类写作套路是四、六级作文种类中最常有的，因此应要点掌握。审题构思：这是篇纲要式谈论文。依据纲要提示，文章可采纳三段式行文，也可开篇引出导言段后，再采纳四段式行文。经解析，文中所给的三个汉语提示均可视为该段的主题句。全文框架以下，第一段主题句为：Cellphonesaregettingmoreandmoreimportant;二段主题句提点：advantagesofhecellphone;disadvantagesofthecellphone;第三段的主句提点：尾段的主句：Myviewis。其全文及各段落框架详尽构思
3、以下：全文构思Thecellphonesaregettingmoreandmorepopularandimportant.AdvantagesofthecellphoneDisadvantagesofthecellphoneMyviewis段落构思第一段：TopicSentenceThecellphoneplaysamoreandmoreimportantrole.DevelopingSentenceIthasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.第二段：TopicSentenceadvantagesofthecellphoneDevelopingsentence1fa
4、cilitatepeopleslifeDevelopingsentence2convenientforbothcallersandcalleesDevelopingsentence3canbeusedasatooltogetonInternet第三段：TopicSentencedisadvantagesofthecellphoneDevelopingsentence1expensivetobuyanduseitDevelopingsentence2mightbeharmfultopeoplehealths第四段：TopicsentenceMyviewisitspositiveaspectsou
5、tweighitsnegativeaspectsDevelopingsentenceIthasabrightfutureindevelopment新词拾贝IT(informationTechnology)信息技术cellphonecellularphoneusers用户e-commerce电子商务getonInternet上网wirelessmobiletelephone无绳挪动精选词汇caller打者callee受话人viaInternet经过因特网conducte-commerce从事电子商务工作multifunction多功能aroundtheglobeservice世界通信效力pock
6、etcomputer袖珍电脑绝妙连接Nowadaysbutlikeeverythingelse,.First,Second,Mostimportantofall,However,Tomakemattersworse,worstofall,Lastbutnotleast,Inmyopinion,And优异初步Nowadays,withtherapiddevelopmentofIT,cellphonesplayamoreandmoreimportantroleinpeopleslife.Nowadays,cellularphonesaregettingmoreandmorepopularinChi
7、na.However,ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Withthedevelopmentofinformationindustryanditsservicelevelsbeingimproved,moreandmorepeoplenowadaysusecellularphones.Asausefulcommunicationtoolandagoodcompanioninmodernlife,cellularphoneshavebothpositiveandnegativepoints.Asiswellknown,everythinghastwoside
8、s.Likewise,cellphoneshavebothpositiveandnegativeaspects.成功收口ItwillbedevelopedintoInternet-enabledmobilephones,whichwillbeasusefulaspocketcomputersinthefuture.Inaword,theadvantagesofthecellphonegreatlyoutweighitsdisadvantages.WiththerapiddevelopmentofChinastelecommunications,theexpensesofthecellphone
9、willbegreatlyreduced,sothateveryonewillbeabletoaffordone.组段成篇读读范文，看范文的篇章结构，先用前言段引出既有益也有弊，接着对其利与弊实行对照解析，最后提出自己对利与弊的看法。范文：Nowadays,withtherapiddevelopmentofIT,cellphonesplayamoreandmoreimportantroleinpeopleslife.But,likeeverythingelse,theyhavebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.First,itsuseful.Asawirel
10、essmobiletelephone,itseasyandhandytocarryitwhereveronegoesandcallthecalleehoweverfarawayheis.Therefore,itgreatlyfacilitatespeopleslife.Second,itsconvenient.Wheneveronemeetstroubleorsomethingurgent,onecanmakeacallimmediately.Mostimportantofall,itsaveryhelpfulcompanion.Withamultifunctioncellphoneinhan
11、d,onecaneasilygetonthenet,browsingtheusefulinformation,conductinge-commerceanddoingwhateveronecandoviaInternet.However,justaseverythinghastwosides,thecellphonealsohasmanydisadvantages,.Tobeginwith,itsexpensivetobuyandcostlytopaythebills,esp.thatofglobalservice.Tomakematterworse,itsalsoeasytoloseandc
12、ostlytogetitrepaired.Worstofall,itsnotasclearasafamilytelephoneandsometimesthenumberdialedisoftennotavailable.Lastbutnotleast,itsallegedthemicro-wavesinitmightdoharmtopeopleshealth.Inmyopinion,withitsexpensesgreatlyreducedafterChinasentryintotheWTO,.SomedaymostofthemwillbedevelopedintonewInternet-en
13、abledmobilephones,whichwillbeasusefulaspocketcomputers.AndIbelieveitsadvantageswillnotonlyoffsetitsdisadvantages,butalsofaroutweighthem.范文赏析：这是篇谈论文，文章开篇入题，一步到位。先由的重要性直接引入议题，虽在人们生活中愈来愈重要，但也是利害掺半，并以此承上启下，自然过渡。接着在第二段文章论述了的好处：方便、快捷、便于携带，能够用它上网等等。随后，作者用“世上任何事物都是一分为二的完成段落的过渡，从而引出的弊端，如自己价格昂贵、花费难以承受、易于丧失、有时因音量过小不清楚等等。最后，衡量利害，经过“Inmyopinion作者亮出自己的看法：跟着中国入世花费的降落，“利会远远超出“弊“，且未来的趋向会向掌上电脑型睁开。
