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1、考试作文样本分析2009年的全球金融危机使得中国的求职市场愈加激烈就业形势愈加严峻。假如你是某大学应届毕业生，针对目前全国大量大学生面临就业的严峻形势，你班同学展开了热烈的讨论，请你根据以上提示及下面表格中的内容，介绍本次讨论情况并谈谈自己的看法。70%的同学不要期望太高的收入，及早就业，减轻家庭负担；到西部、农村等地区，寻找更多的发展机遇。20%的同学继续深造或去职校学习实用技能，为今后择业做更好的准备。10%的同学自己创业你的看法（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点）注意：1. 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇： 职
2、校：vocational school常见错误一：叙述口吻不对文章要求我们介绍班级讨论情况并谈谈自己的看法。所以尽量避免使用太多的祈使句According to the discussion, 70 percent of the students hold the views that dont expect too high incomes.观点呈现不应该使用这样的祈使句型。we shouldnt expect too high incomes.Seventy percent of my classmates think that we shouldnt expect too high in
3、comes. Find a job as soon as possible to reduce family pressure. , but find常见错误二：时态把握不准本题看法呈现题，应该以一般现在时为主。The students who thought that we shouldnt expect too high salaries.There are 70 percent of the students suggested that上面的表述中，观点是一贯的，不应该是暂时的，用过去时不恰当。应改为who think thinking that常见错误三：断句不准，纠缠不清70 pe
4、rcent of the students think we shouldnt look forward to high incomes, and should find a job as soon as possible, relief the familys pressure, can think about going to western cities or going to the countries, so that you can seek more chances to develop.常见错误四：不能整体把握句子，瞻前不顾后。句子的表达，要顾全大局，不能顾此失彼。The st
5、udents who thought that we shouldnt expect too high salaries, and we should find a job as soon as possible so that we can reduce the pressure on our families.只有一个名词,不能成为句子.佳句欣赏However, there are 10 percent of the students who plan to go on with their further education with the intention of making be
6、tter preparations for applying for a better job.The rest, accounting for 10 percent, As far as Im concerned, I would go further study to equip myself better for the future.In view of the present situation, we can go to the west or the country for there are more opportunities to develop ourselves. fr
7、om 周 娟最佳个人观点表达Personally, again and again, we take a high salary for granted, but facing this financial crisis, we might as well see the hard times as an experience, from which we can learn a lot, including the attitude towards life.The global financial crisis of 2008 has contributed to a more fierc
8、e competition in job markets. Increasing numbers of college graduates are finding themselves in a situation where too many jobseekers are fighting for survival. Our class has had a heated discussion on this problem. Students have different ideas.70% of them think it makes sense that they realize an
9、early employment by lowering their income expectations, thus reducing the burden on their families. They also believe therere better opportunities for development if they go to work in the west or rural areas. 20% of them consider full employment an unrealistic goal, so they choose to continue their
10、 further study or go to vocational schools to learn some practical skills to make better preparations for future careers. Finally, the rest 10% determine to set up their own businesses.As for me, I think after a series of timely measures taken by the government, we are confident about and capable of
11、 overcoming the current difficulties and challenges and the employment prospects for graduates will be better soon. So all we need to do now is plan and act in ways that reflect the reality, to assure that we make full use of our talent and skills.老师的话：目前高考英语作文，对我们来说，要求并不太高。只要平时能够注意积累，认真总结，多看多背范文，把最常见，常用，却又很地道的句型和词汇用起来，你的文章一定会神采飞扬！相信通过努力，大家高考作文一定都能达到20分以上！第 1 页 共 3 页
