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1、YY8640 写作 老师王菲四级考试作文的结构要求1 引言段：表明文章话题，吸引读者兴趣，暗示正文内容l 用数字：Nowadays tens of thousands university students are graduated from school, and they allwant to be successful in this modern world.l 用问题：Do you know any university students who does not want to succeed in the society? Whatdoes it take for them t
2、o succeed in the modern society?l 用引语：“Success comes not only from perspiration and inspiration, but also from sati factoryperformance in interview.” commented Dr Kenly in his book.l 开门见山式In the modern society, almost all university students look forward to successl 驳论式As the modern society puts mor
3、e emphasis on personal difference and personal values, itprovides more opportunities for students to seek success. However, the fact is that noteveryone can succeed. Success calls for certain opportunities, but more importantly, it callsfor many personal qualities.2 正文段的写法：（1）第一部分：（2）第二部分：（3）第三部分：3
4、结论段的写法（1）总结的写法（2）评论的写法四级写作构思文章（一）（二）1 expert testimony2 statistics3 example4 personal experience5 logic and reasoning6 known facts7 analogy例 例 1 主题句：Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation .1 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.Dr. David from Harvard university declared aft
5、er a nation wide survey “Americans get lesssleep than they used to.”2 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.When in college, I used to sleep about nine hours every day, but now I can sleep for six hoursif I want to finish my job on time, I usually feel tired at work.3 Lack of sleep has
6、become an epidemic in the nation.Its well known that people around us consider sleep the least important item on their list ifthey faced with heavy pressure from work, family or friends.4 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.From the poll of 18 th and 19 th ,sleep scientists have concl
7、uded that the average person usedto sleep about 9.5 hours at night, By 1950s and 1960s , sleep schedule had been reduceddramatically, to between 7.5 and 8 hours ,and most people had to wake to an alarm clock.5 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.The president, for example, used to adm
8、it that he found his job hard to deal with, becauseamong other things, he could only sleep for four to five hours a day. Besides , manyemployers complain that their staff cant work efficiently in the afternoon, for they cant getenough time for sleep the day before. And the police also reports more t
9、raffic accidentsbecause many drivers concentrate on the problem of lack f sleep.6 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nationWe may have found that in spring when trees and bushes come in full blossom, bees usuallyspend less time in their hive. Because they have more honey-making jobs to do.
10、Similarly,when people have more work to do, they tend to sleep less, and this has come true for us.7 lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.Nowadays, the step of life has become increasingly fast, and people are expected to shouldermore responsibilities at work. Besides, as social intera
11、ctions become more convenient andbroader, people have to spend more time keeping friends and other acquaints in frequentcontact. As they cant find more time in one day, all they can do is to borrow the sleepingtime.例 例 2 ：主题句：Education is also very important for elderly people.1 Education is also ve
12、ry important for elderly people.Prof. Wang from Beijing university reported in his study that many elderly people attendvarious trainings after their retirement, and this is not only helps them improve their skillsin these fields, but also provides them with an opportunity to communicate with othere
13、lderly people, making their free time more interesting.2 Education is also very important for elderly people.A recent study by the municipal government reveals that more than 88 percent of the retiredpeople attend different kinds of training programs provided by the elderly university. Thisstudy als
14、o shows that 92.5 percent of these elderly university students agree that thesetraining classes not only teach them useful skills, but also help them to kill their free timemore easily.3 Education is also very important for elderly people.According to our school newspaper, most old people in the res
15、idential area near ouruniversity attend many kinds of training classes such as painting and singing. This helpsthem to spend a richer and more meaningful life. Mr. Ma even comments that his retired lifeis better than his working life before.4 Education is also very important for elderly people.Both
16、my grandparents are active participants in the elderly university in my hometown. Mygrandpa learns how to paint Chinese painting, and my grandma learns how to cook. Thestudy keeps them busy and happy, and they used to tell me that this study experience is veryimportant for them.5 Education is also very important fo
