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1、说句心里话襄阳市届第一次统考英语网上阅卷感想13说句心里话我也想给你高分但文不对题事例不典型给你高分公理不允说句实在话你常训练心中要有(那个)作文的模式作文的模式来来来来来既然来写作来来来就知怎么写首段解题中段切题末段结题经典三段要牢记说句心里话我也想给你高分但词不达义句不连贯给你高分有失公平说句实在话你常练习完成句子心中要有(那个)正确句子结构 出彩句的基本句式来来来来来既然来写作来来来就知优秀作文的基本要素学会使用高级词语三个不多五个不少学会运用复杂句式三句不少五句嫌多牢记作文模板功在平时利在高考确保分借鉴优秀作文写出真情实感争取分说句心里话你也不傻但为何卷面不整洁字迹潦草说句实在话我也有
2、同情心但没耐心你马马虎虎写我马马虎虎阅二档三档快速点来来来来来话虽这样说来来来练好字才是硬道理照字贴一笔一画练在英语本上规规矩矩练在试卷上工工整整写书写工整美观清晰练好字确保得高分备注： 月日，在市三中阅完英语多份作文，我深有感触，我想对同学们说句心里话。三档作文（分）所占比例很大，但也不乏分甚至分以上的作文，下面选取篇优秀作文供同学们欣赏、背诵、模仿，除个别少数的同学具有英语语言天赋，既能从作文范文中吸收高分作文的应具备的要素，又能从阅读短文中模仿、借鉴优秀作文应具备的语言的地道性和鲜明的个性。大多数同学是靠高三严格的训练，无外乎在三个方面：内容、语言和书写，下面从这三个方面来分析这篇作文。
3、 有些同学第一段和第三段自己写，中间一段写的是事先背诵的短文，甚至抄阅读短文，所以文不对题，一经发现，就判为低分或零分。 对近几年湖北省高考作文题，采用三段来写已经为绝大多数考生所接受，也为大多数阅卷老师所认可。第一段直入主题，用一句长句，或两三句点题，解释题义，即解题；第二段例举事例，用事例阐明主题，这一段是记叙，也是阅卷老师评判的重点，想得高分的同学们一定要重视这一段的描述、记叙。记叙一般要遵循记叙文叙事的基本程序：发生、发展、高潮和结局。第三段与第一段照应，首尾呼应，升华主题。 一篇作文就能决定一个考生的语言基本功，这基本功集中反映在高级词语和复杂句式的使用上，下面例举篇优秀作文中高级词
4、语和复杂句式使用的情况：高级词语：象号作品中，Eventually, I made a marvelous acquaintance in my study and achieved my goal. 象号作品中，There is a consensus among us that- The goal functioned as an alarm that reminded him to work hard, 象号作品中，My study was in an arbitrary condition where all the efforts were in vain. I swallowed
5、the bitter fruit as a consequence of my hopeless practice.- One of the recipes for success is setting a goal and sparing no efforts to achieve it. 象号作品中，It is no exaggeration to say that- , embrace a bright future, 象号作品中，As has been illustrated above, 象号作品中，Its self-evident that-, Im fully convinced
6、 that-, embrace a promising future,象号作品中，Its an indisputable fact that-, which can arouse our motivations to-, priority is supposed to be given to setting a goal, 象号作品中，which allows you to excavate your superiority-, 象号作品中，The absence of a goal did harm to my study, making me have a slim chance to r
7、ank first in my class.象样卷中，illustrate my illumination, -but bombed on his first exam-, Not withstanding, he was so determined that nothing could weaken his resolve. Harvest his final success, 等等。复杂句式：） 并列句（and, but ,so, not only -but also ）： 号中，I was not as hard as before, and my grades became behin
8、d others. Generally speaking, a goal is important for us, and every one of us need to set a goal for themselves to guide them in the right direction. 3号中，Set a goal, work hard and youll succeed. 6号中，As a consequence, not only did Nick make his own career take off, but also he spread the great spirit
9、 to those in need, gaining peoples recognition. 号中，Without a goal, never will we succeed in the competitive society, nor will we have enough motivations to make our dreams come true. ） 复合句（主语从句、宾语从语、表语从句、同位语从句）号作品中，What we can learn from the experience is that a goal prevents us from being at a loss
10、 and being washed away by the flood of the times.3号作品中，All of us held a view that he wouldnt be admitted to an excellent university, whatever great efforts he made.9号作品中，There was no doubt that my study got worse and worse.号作品中，There is no denying that he achieved a lot, enjoyed much glory and won m
11、uch respect.） 其它类从句（定语从句、状语从句） 1号作品中，There was a time when my mind always wandered in class, which resulted in my failure in many exams. 2号作品中，When I was a middle school student, I studied very hard to meet the requirements my parents set for me, as a result of which , I always got high marks. 3号作品中
12、，When asked the secret of how to make such great progress, he said it was his setting a goal that motivated him to put all his strength to studying. 13号作品中，I was aware that once you had a goal in your mind, there is no doubt that you will spare no efforts to pursue it and to achieve it no matter how
13、 tough it is. ） 非谓语动词9号作品中，Never thinking of setting a goal, I gradually lost my interest in studying. 5号作品中，Confused and frustrated, I nearly gave up studying English.14号作品中，The absence of a goal did harm to my study, making me have a slim chance to rank first in time.16号作品中，Inspired by her words,
14、I came to understand that a goal is of vital importance. Then I made up my mind to go to a key university as my goal, thus motivating me to work hard.5)强调句型 号作品中，It was the transformation from studying aimlessly to studying for a certain goal that helped me get out of the dilemma and make amazing pr
15、ogress in my study. 为了高效备考，提高考生英语写作的能力，分析高考作文的规律，剖析优秀作文必备的要素是十分必要的。近几年湖北省高考作文的特点是：开放性作文，尽管要求文体不限，但仍然是以记叙为主，夹有议论。要求考生做到内容与事例的统一性、词汇语句的多样性、上下文的连贯性和语言表达的得体性。从高考作文的特点和要求来看，我们要用辩证的思想来看待作文的模板，对于还停留在二档、三档的考生来说，借鉴优秀作文中的写作技巧：高级词语和复杂句式的使用，开头语和结尾语，叙事的程序和议论的模式，是简单易行，行之有效的方法。对于粗步掌握写作技巧考生来说，借鉴优秀作文，更进一步完善自己的写作技能，写出具有个性的短文，也是十分必要的。第一段剖析：象样卷中，开头语：There is a consensus among people that a goal is what it takes to obtain personal success. A goal is to individuals what a compass is to a travelling ship, under whose guidance we can find the right
