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5、pression. A mass of unemployment, housing problem and difficult business conditions for enterprises and housing problem have influenced our lifelives in many aspects. Therefore, just as the saying goes, “A fall in a pit, a gain in your wit”. , We we must draw lessonslearn from this crisis and spare
6、no efforts to take some measure to solve this problem. As we knowActually, that there are many steps which can be taken adopted to undo deal with this problem. First of all, the government would should introduce establish various policy measurerelevant policies to help graduates and migrant workers
7、find jobs and provide offer more government-funded jobs in public service. In addition, another way contributing to the success of the solving the problem is to help the enterprises overcome the difficult period . Such as government implementwith the structural tax cut and enterprise encourage techn
8、ical innovation and so on. At the same time, the government would is bound to increase spending in housing project to help vulnerable groups have a residethe residence in both urban and rural areas.Above All in all, to solve the problem of financial crisis, both the government and ordinary people sh
9、ould join hands to carry out effective measures.we should find a number of various ways. As a big responsible and developing country, china China should act in an active and responsible way during this crisis to keep the steady and fast growth of chinas its economy, and contribute our power for glob
10、al financial stability and world economic growth.评论：写作还是需要使用书面语和适当地使用一些常用句型，特别是在开头和结尾。建议特别注意词汇的搭配和词组的使用。Above all是“首先”，不是“总而言之”，如果要表示总结归纳就要换成all in all。二、信息技术（利弊型议论文）Information TechnologyNowadays, there is a widespread concern over the use of information technology. In fact, there are both advantag
11、es and disadvantages in information technology. Generally speaking, it is widely believed that there are it has several positive aspects as follows. FirstlyFirst and foremost, the internet, a typical application of information technology, presents an opportunity for the advancement of acquisition an
12、d application of knowledge. And secondlyWhats more, the internet provides people with a virtual existence which is far more appealing than the traditional life. For instance, people are able to watch various TV programs or even movies, instructive or entertaining, after a days hard work. In addition
13、, with the help of frequently used softwares like msn or QQ, it is also very convenient for us to contact with our relatives and friends even if they are thousands of miles away from us.However, we cannot deny the fact that the information technology also has its side effects. Just as a popular sayi
14、ng goes, “Every coin has two sides”, the using of information technology is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, the problem of information security is undoubtedly the most serious and threatening. Some malicious hackers would take advantage of the technol
15、ogy to invade our computers and steal our private information, such as our ID card numbers and the password of our e-bank accounts. For examples:Whats more, some youngsters could not resist the temptation of sexy photo gates, which is obviously harmful for their psychological health. south Last but
16、not the least,China tiger and human flesh search and so on. In addition, many people have difficulty coping with the increased social and technological complexity and the overload brought forth by the information technology. Internet waste them vast energy and time.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of the information technology into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely
