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1、 2022年下半年商务英语(BEC)考试高级写作预测与此同时，试题结合商务实战的特点，要求文章必需包含特定信息点，或者是通过供应信息源，以及考题中的标注，规定考生写作的详细范围和内容。所以审题是关键，全部已知条件都必需充分利用，换言之，假如遗漏已知条件，就会因信息表达不完整而导致失分。以下是对我的一名学员习文进展点评。PART ONEYou have been informed that next Wednesday your company”s computer system will be closed down so that improvements can be made.Write
2、 an email to all staff in your department: saying what time on Wednesday the system will be closed down suggesting how staff should prepare for this saying how the system will be better after the improvements Write 40-50 words 学生作文：From: Jenny XuTo: All StaffDate: 5 April 2022Subject: Computer Syste
3、mI want to tell you that our Intranet based on Linux will be closed next Wednesday at 10 oclock. I want to suggesting that you should save all your important documents. The computer system will be faster because we will use a newer SAP system. The new system is according to ISO900 and we will benefi
4、t from that. 作文解析：BEC作文解答时，审题特别重要。题目中给出的要求就好比是解代数题中已知条件，都要用到。小作文处理的时候，大家不妨可以把每一个已知条件扩写成一句句句子，同时兼顾句子之间的连接。通常学生犯的错误是：1. 漏掉题中给出的已知条件。2. 给出的已知条件没有表达清晰，用词过于口语化，没有条理，暴露出语言功底薄弱。3. 切忌过于花哨的发挥，多说多错。这篇学生的作品是比拟典型的案例。有肯定的英语表达力量和工作阅历，但文章中所暴露出来的缺乏也是明显的。写作不能从细处下笔，而是先要搭建框架。以这篇习文为例，在详细语言的表达的雕琢上可圈可点，比方说第一个句子中based on引
5、导的过去分词做后置定语，但是显而遗忘了这篇文章的主要目的，那就是通知同事公司电脑系统要升级，但update这个词始终没有在文章中消失，因此读下来以后，可能同事还不是特别清晰，为什么computer system will be closed down, 尽管后面提到了improvement，总让人觉得有些如鲠在咽，言之不尽;因此，思路不清楚是这篇习文的问题。此外，本文还有以下一些问题：1. 有些用词过于口语化，比方说，文章开头, I want to tell you, 文中you should save这样的用语;2. 建议Linux, 将SAP, ISO900等唬人术语统统除去，诚然BEC涉
6、及到根本的商务学问，但是真正考核的还是语言功底，语用力量;商务学问好比是盖浇饭里面的小炒而已。3.里面还有一个明显的语法错误，I want to suggesting.，固然阅卷者不会刻意去搜寻语法错误，而是综合考量语法得分，但由于小作文篇幅较短，那么这个错误就显得特别明显。范文：Please be informed that our computer system will be closed next Wednesday at 12 o”clock for system upgrade. The closure will last for at least two hours. Make
7、sure that you have saved all your documents before that time. The whole system will run on a new server, much faster than the current one. PART TWOl You work for PJT Ltd, a manufacturing company. You need more staff in your department and your line manager has asked you to write a report explaining
8、why.l Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.l Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your report.l Write 120-140 words.学生作文：The purpose of this report is to explain why we need more staff in our department.We compare the number of staff in our de
9、partment between 2022 and 2022, it only increased five staff. But the average number of ordered units grow up from 202200 to 400000 between 2022 and 2022. Our sales department has announced a big new order from an international company recently. It will bring us much more workload. And the annual ho
10、liday increased to 5 weeks per year. That means that we have more workload and less working days.If we had more staff the order should be on time. We should save our companys reputation. And the workflow will be作文解析：BEC中级的大作文题型一般以写报告、书信为主，因此，这些必考问题的详细格式必需把握。英文商务报告的格式有五个局部组成，其中包括报告的Subject, Introduct
11、ion (This report aims/sets out to)，Findings (it was found that)， Conclusions(It was decided/agreed/felt that)， Recommendations (It is suggested that.) 括号中是每段开头固定的表达方式，考生不宜自己去制造。同样写信也有格式化的表达方式，再此恕不绽开。 和第一局部一样，大作文的写作审题是第一步，全部给出的已知条件必需用足。本文中：1.考生的习文字数恰当。但没有把报告应有的四个局部写完整，这将导致大量失分。 在以上的习文中，考生表现出了不错的语言驾驭力
12、量。2.在审题上还有一些欠缺，比方 Another reason for more staff is that we will have fewer delays. 在题目中给出的已知条件中，有一份客户的投诉信件，应当作为佐证被引用，否则order should be on time无从谈起。3.除了没有根据报告的固定格式外，考生语言太随便。比方说，our sales department has announced a big new order，没有出处，而依据文章中给出的已知条件，这是公司Newsletter所通告的，那么依据报告的要求，应当指出信息来源。4.中国学生还普遍特殊敏感的就是
13、企业的信誉，因此常常会看到学生动辄就是喊口号的语言，比方说文中We should save our companys reputation. 这样空洞无物的话应当避开。5.还有就是细节处理，句子和段落之间连接忽视了。比方说，It will bring us much more workload. And the annual holiday increased to 5 weeks per year. 以及最终一句话And the workflow will be improved.其中的and 这个词用在这里显随便了些，可以考虑用Meanwhile 有“祸不单行”的意思。后面的And 应当删
14、除。That means that we have more workload 这里两个that离的太近，可以考虑把后面一个去掉，同时时态应当是we will have。 范文：Report on: More staff in our departmentDate: 27.03.2022IntroductionThis report aims to explain why our department needs more staff.FindingsStatistics show that there exists a big gap between the number of staff
15、in our department and staff workload. While the number of ordered units grew up from only 202200 to 400000 in 2 years, the number of staff grew only by 5 people. According to the Staff Newsletter dated February 2022, we have won a big new order from an international company. That will bring us more
16、work. At the same time, annual holiday has been increased to 5 weeks per year, meaning there wont be enough staff for all the work. Our customer service department recently received a complaint from one of our clients about a tremendous delay in our delivery. ConclusionThere are many reasons which explain the need of more staff. It is especially
