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1、中考优秀英语作文评析（一）记叙文 1【习作要求】根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯，符合逻辑的英文文段。所给英文提示词语必须都用上；每组英文提示所写的句数不限。彼得只有五岁，和他的祖母住在一起。一天他的祖母得了重感冒，彼得急得直哭，后来他 (1) Peter, five (2) live, grandma (3) have, cold, worried, cry (4) idea, find, parents telephone number, call (5) news, hurry, home, hospital 【参考范文】 Peter is only five (years ol
2、d). He lives with his grandma. One day his grandma had a cold. Peter was so worried that he began to cry. Then he had an idea. He found his parents telephone number and gave them a call. When his parents heard the news, they hurried back home and took Peters grandma to the hospital. 【名师点评】 根据中英文提示可理
3、清需要进行表达的大致情节是：彼得只有五岁，他和他的祖母住在一起，一天他的祖母得了重感冒，他急得直哭。后来有了一个主意，他找到了他父母的电话号码，他打电话给了他们，当他的父母得知这一消息后迅速地赶回家，把祖母送进医院。须注意前面介绍的是一般情况用一般现在时，后面叙述的是过去发生的事用一般过去时。动词的运用及动词的时态是在进行书面表达时尤其要注意的。（一）记叙文 2【习作要求】请根据下面所给李玲的个人小档案，以My good friend为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍李玲的基本情况。要求条理清楚，语句通顺，体现表中的全部内容，不得少于12句话。 中文名：李玲 英文名：Susan 性别：女 年龄：15
4、祖籍：青海 学校：第八中学 年级：三 班级：二 特长：数学、英语 爱好：唱歌、看电视、打排球 优点：友好，善良，乐于助人，学习努力 【参考范文】 My Good Friend I have a good friend. Her Chinese name is Li Ling, and Susan is her English name. She is from Qinghai. Li Ling is fifteen years old. She studies in No. 8 Middle School. She is in Class Two, Grade Three. Li Ling i
5、s good at maths and English. She likes singing and playing volleyball very much. And she sings quite well. She likes watching TV, too. Li Ling is very kind and friendly. She studies very hard and always likes helping others. What a good girl she is! I like her! 【名师点评】 这是一篇记叙文，内容要交待清楚、全面，要注意中英文的表达习惯，
6、如汉语中年级在前，班级在后，而英语正相反；首尾句要格外留意，要保持短文的完整性。 (1) 格式：人物介绍 (2) 人称：第三人称 (3) 时态：一般现在时 (4) 短语：have a good friend, English name, to be from, No. 8 Middle School, in Class Two, Grade Three, to be good at, like singing and playing, sing well, like watching TV, study hard, what a good girl (5) 句型：陈述句与感叹句（一）记叙文3【
7、习作要求】根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给的英文提示词语必须都用上，句数不限；中文提示内容不必逐句翻译。 一个雨天，李莉乘出租车回家。在车里她发现司机在学英语。他对李莉说了些什么? 此事对你学习英语有何启发? 为支持北京奥运你打算做些什么? (1) one rainy day, go home, by taxi (2) in the car, find, was learning English (3) said to Li Li, I, weak, English, when at school, now work hard, to help with th
8、e Beijing 2008 Olympic Games (4) I think. to show support （n.支持）for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games 【参考范文】 One rainy day, Li Li went home by taxi. In the car she found (that) the driver was learning English. He said to Li Li: I was weak in English when I was at school. Now Im working hard at it to he
9、lp with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games. I think I should learn from the driver. English is very important to us because it is widely used all over the world. As a student, Ill do my best to learn English well at school. And Im going to speak English as much as possible to show support for the Beijin
10、g 2008 Olympic Games. 【名师点评】 第一句很重要，以便确定全文时态。句与句之间要连贯。关键句要用上，如：Im going to speak English as much as possible to show support for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games. (1) 格式：简介 (2) 人称：第三人称 (3) 时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时 (4) 短语、句式、句型：短语与句式已给出，句型包括简单句、直接引语、宾语从句（二）应用文 1【习作要求】假如你的名字叫王磊，你有一位美国朋友杰克(Jack)今年暑假要到西安来参观，你
11、写信告诉他，你住在西安市南大街65号，从火车站乘10路公共汽车到历史博物馆下车。到时你将在车站等他。此信写于2004年5月1日。 注意： (1) 数不得少于50个。 (2) 求意思完整，语句连贯。 【参考范文】 Xian, China May 1st, 2004 Dear Jack: Im very glad to hear that youll come to visit Xian this summer holiday. Now I would like to tell you how to get to my house. I live at 65 the South Street, X
12、ian. When you arrive in Xian by train (or by plane), you can catch (take) the No. 10 bus and get off at the History Museum. Ill wait for you there. Yours, Wang Lei 【名师点评】 完成这道书面表达题应从以下几个方面着手考虑： 首先，这道题属于书信文件，所以应注意书信的正确格式。其次从提示的内容来看，主要是说王磊的一位美国朋友杰克于暑假要来西安参观，王磊写信告诉他行走的路线及到时在车站等他等细节，应采用一般现在时和将来时态来叙述。最后，
13、同学们应结合所给的主要内容，用所学过的词（组）及句型来完成此文。 参观 visit 今年暑假 this summer holiday 想要 would like to do到达 get to/arrive at/reach 乘坐公共汽车 catch/take a bus 下车 get off 等等。 （二）应用文 2【习作要求】假如你叫Han Meimei，你的笔友Mary现在上海三中学习。她邀请你去参加聚会。请你用英语给Mary写一封信。信的要点如下： (1) 你很抱歉，不能去。 (2) 你母亲病了，医生叫她卧床几日。你要照料母亲。 (3) 谢谢寄来的漂亮的明信片(postcard)，很喜欢
14、，将放在书桌上。 注意： (1) 信要通顺、连贯。 (2) 词数60字左右。信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 (3) 如写不下，可写在横线下空白处。 No.3 Middle School Shanghai April 20, 2004 Dear Mary, Thank you very much for inviting (邀请) me to your party. _ _ _ _Give my best wishes to your family. Yours, Han Meimei 【参考范文】 No.3 Middle School Shanghai April 20, 2004 Dear Mary, Thank you very much for inviting me to your party. I am very sorry, but I cant come. My mother is ill.
