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1、短文改错 语篇训练(1)When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of
2、 studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, well live to re.gret it【参考答案】1. thinkthought考查时态，我认为我在大
3、城市会快乐，描述过去的动作，应用一般过去时。2. in countrysidein the countryside 本题考查冠词，in the countryside 为固定搭配。3. orand 考查连词，需要判断前后句关系，前后为并列而非转折。4. onwith 考查介词， with 表示伴随。5. 去掉 been 考查谓语动词中语态问题，研究与表明之间无被动关系。6. seriouslyserious考查形容词与副词，形容词用来修饰名词或代词，或者放在be动词后 作表语，副词修饰形容词或动词。7. airsair考查名词，air表示“空气”时，为不可数名词，无复数形式；airs表示“气
4、氛，样子，天空”。8. muchmany考查形容词辨析，much后加不可数名词，many后加可数名词复数。9. foundfind 考查动词， must 为情态动词，情态动词和助动词后用动词原形。10. yourour 考查形容词性物主代词，分析行文逻辑，该处指的是我们的环境，而非你 们的环境。2)Last Tuesday,the Students Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthday
5、s.All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas. Some choose to write a letter saying its best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that Theyve already grown up.As for me,I wa
6、nt to do up hair and wash feet for my parents.By doing which my parents have been doing for me, I can really know how much theyve devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should be responsible for us.【参考答案】1. shallshould考查虚拟语气，advise为“建议”时，后跟
7、从句要用虚拟语气，即(should+) 动词原形形式。2. speciallyspecial 考查形容词，形容词修饰 something, anything, nothing,等不定代词 放在后面，副词不修饰不定代词。3. respond与it中间加to考察动词短语，respond为不及物动词，后需接介词to,表示“做 出反应，响应”。4. best前加the考查冠词，形容词最高级前若无其他限定词时，一般要加the。5. appreciationsappreciation ，考查名词， appreciation 表“感激”时为不可数名词，无复 数形式，表“(书面的)鉴定，鉴别，评论”时为可数名
8、词。6. 去掉 will 考察时态，根据上下文，这里应为一般现在时，而非一般将来时。7. whichwhat 考查宾语从句的关系词，这里要用 what 来的代指所做的事。8. bringbringing考查非谓语中的动词固定搭配，devote to doing sth，这里的to为介词， 后接动名词。9. meanmeans 考查谓语中的主谓一致问题，动名词或动词不定式在句中充当主语且表示 单数意义时，谓语动词要用单数。10. usourselves 考查人称代词和反身代词，当人称代词作主语，且宾语所指为同一对象 时，宾语应当用反身代词。（3）How I became a good badmi
9、nton player is freshly in my mind.The first day I go to school,I found some of my classmates playing badminton. Amazing at how skillful they were,I made up my mind to be good at it.Late on,I often watched him carefully to learn their techniques,and kept practicing after I felt confident enough to ch
10、allenge the good players in my class. In middle of the term,I became one of the best player in my school. I take great pride of this experience because it not only helps me realize that I can achieve my potential through hard work,but makes me to know the proverb “Practice makes perfect”.【参考答案】1. fr
11、eshlyfresh考察形容词，放在be动词后作表语，而副词修饰形容词或动词。2. gowent考查时态，根据语境和in the first day说明事情发生在过去，应用一般过去式。3. amazingamazed考察非谓语，amaze逻辑主语为I , I是amaze的动作承受者，应用 过去分词表示被动含义，也可理解为形容词作状语， amazed“ 感到惊奇的”。4. latelater 考查 later on 为固定搭配，且 late 通常作形容词，表示晚的， later 常表示“稍 后”；lately表示“最近”；latest表示“最新的”。5. himthem考查人称代词，通过后文中t
12、heir techniques能判断前面应该为复数they。6. afteruntil 考查连词，通过行文逻辑，判断应该是“我 ”一直练习直到足够有自信去挑 战。7. In middle 中间加 the 考查冠词固定搭配， in the middle of 为固定短语。8. layerplayers考查名词，one of +形容词最高级后加可数名词复数，表示最之一。9. ofin考查介词固定搭配take pride in.表示为感到骄傲，等同于be proud of.10. 去掉to考查非谓语中动词固定搭配，该处为make sb do sth “让某人做某事”。（4）Dear Peter,Ho
13、w greatly it is to hear that you would come to China！I am happy to be of help in finding some informations about Camellia Hotel for you.Camellia Hotel will be a good choice because its clean environment,first-class service and comfortable facilities. Locating in downtown,it is convenience for you to
14、 get around. And the shopping malls,cinemas and museums are both within walking Distance.You can pay by either credit card and cash at a reasonable price,but you need to make a reservation on the line or by calling them at 8618998710001.Looking forward to your come to our city.【参考答案】1. greatlyfgreat
15、考查形容词，形容词用来修饰名词或代词，或放在be动词后作表语；副 词修饰形容词或动词。该句型为How引导的感叹句，所以形容词在be前。2. wouldwill考查时态，通过行文逻辑，该处为一般将来时而非过去将来时。3. informationsinformation 考查名词，information表示信息，为不可数名词。4. because 后加上 of 考查连词词组， because 后面要加句子；该处为名词短语，所以用 because of。5. locatinglocated考查过去分词，locate逻辑主语为后面句子中的it,双方为被动关系， 用动词过去分词的形式表示被动含义。6.
16、convenienceconvenient 考查词性转换，该处应用形容词，构成 it is +adj+for sb to do sth 的句型，表示“对于某人来说做某事是的”7. bothall考查不定代词，both的范围局限于两者，该处所指为购物中心，电影院，还 有博物馆，为三者或三者以上的范围，应当用all。8. andor考查不定代词词组，either.or.表示“两者其一，要么要么”9. 去掉the考查冠词，on line为固定短语，中间无需冠词，表示在线，在网上。10. comecoming 考查动名词， your 为形容词性物主代词，其后应当用动名词。5)Recently wildlife protection has become the i
