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1、广东省高考英语基础写作范文选登* 基础写作经典背诵范文(第1-2篇)1. 基础写作(调查“谁是你的偶像”) 【写作内容】 上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。 以下是调查数据：偶 像( idol ) 女 生 男 生伟 人 18 % 18 %父 母 25 % 11 %影视明星 50 % 14 %体育明星 6 % 48 %（没有偶像） 1 % 9 %根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象； 2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；3“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异； 4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；5你的偶像及理由。【写
2、作要求】 1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 One possible version： Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols, while 48% of the boys prefer sports stars. As the data shows, “p
3、arents” rank the second for the girls, but the forth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for me, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.2. 基础写作(介绍奥运中的射击项目)写作内容 你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责
4、编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断1928：中断1932：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【基础写作范文1选登】Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19t
5、h century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and the 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympics in shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olymp
6、ic Games to 17 today.【基础写作范文2选登】t was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Yet, twice in history (1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics. It returned to th
7、e Games in 1932, and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968. The sport has been growing steadily from 1896s three events to todays seventeen. 【基础写作范文3赏析】 Shooting was originally a tool of peoples survival, which developed into a sports event at the end of nineteenth centu
8、ry (定语从句). In 1896, it became one of the Olympic events for the first time(简单句). In 1904 and 1928 Olympics, it was stopped, after which it returned in 1932(定语从句). It was in 1968 that women were allowed to join in the shooting competition for the first time (强调句) . From then on, the event is developi
9、ng steadily and smoothly with the shooting competition number increasing from 3 in 1896 Olympics to17 by now(简单句中使用“with+复合宾语结构”作为状语).【专家点评】 这篇基础写作的内容看上去很多,要在规定的句数内完整地描述射击这项体育运动的发展过程, 如果全部使用简单句, 就无法在规定的句数内完成整体的写作。但考生经过对全部内容的合理安排, 使用简单句、并列句和复合句,就可在规定的句数内把这篇文章出色完成。这样在各个句子之间, 合理地使用了连词,保证了句与句之间的紧密衔接, 使得
10、这篇基础写作显得非常的紧凑与简洁。基础写作就是考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力, 具体地讲检测考生提取信息、分析信息、构筑信息、处理信息和表达信息的能力。这篇基础写作主要考查了考生构筑信息和表达信息的能力，因为在写作内容中已经把全部信息按照条目列举出来了。范文的作者恰到好处地把全部信息按照时间分割成：最初进入奥运进入奥运后的发展现状，四个阶段，然后按照这条时间线索进行信息的构筑和行文。* 3.基础写作经典背诵范文(第3-4篇) 成语故事基础写作(1) 画蛇添足请用英语解释一下“画蛇添足”这个成语故事。古时几个人分一壶酒。他们都想独自喝完那壶酒，所以就定了一个规矩：每人在地上画一条蛇，谁画得
11、最快，这壶酒就归谁。有一个人很快就把蛇画好了。他正打算喝这壶酒时，看见别人都还在忙着画，就决定给蛇再画上几只脚。结果，他的蛇脚还没加完，另一个人已经把蛇画好了。那人一下把酒壶夺了过去，说：“有谁见过长脚的蛇？”。这个故事告诉我们这样的道理：做得过分和做得不够都是不对的.写作内容1）请按内容要求写这个成语故事，要写标题。2）这个成语故事必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整和连贯。Drawing a Snake and Adding Feet to ItLong long ago, several people h
12、ad a jar of wine among them and all of them wanted to drink it by himself. So they set a rule that every one would draw a snake on the ground and the man who finished first would have the wine. One man finished his snake very soon and he was about to drink the wine when he saw the others were still
13、busy drawing, so he decided to draw the feet to the snake. However, before he could finish the feet, another man finished and grabbed the jar from him, saying, Who has ever seen a snake with feet?” The story of Drawing a Snake and Adding Feet to It.” tells us going too far is as bad as not going far
14、 enough.成语故事基础写作 (2) 刻舟求剑请用英语解释一下“刻舟求剑”这个成语故事。故事大意为：楚国有个人坐船渡江时，他不小心把自己的一把宝剑掉落江中。他马上掏出一把小刀，在宝剑落水的船舷上刻上一个记号。船靠岸后，那个楚人立即从船上刻记号的地方跳下水去捞取掉落的宝剑。他怎么找得到宝剑呢？船又继续行驶，而宝剑却不会再移动。像他这样去找剑，真是太愚蠢可笑了。写作内容1）请按内容要求写这个成语故事，要写标题。2）这个成语故事必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整和连贯。Making His MarkA man
15、from the state of Chu was taking a boat across a river when he dropped his sword into the water carelessly. Immediately he made a mark on the side of the boat where the sword dropped, hoping to find it later. When the boat stopped moving, he went into the water to search for his sword at the place where he had marked the boat. As we know, the boat had moved but the sword had not. Isnt this a very foolish way to look for a sword?4. 基础写作（“我与奥运”活动）假如你在春节期间到北京大学参加了一个为期十天的冬令营活动。以下是你参加本次活动期间所写的部分日记摘要。写作内容你拟向某英文杂志“我与
