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1、 2022年12月大学英语六级写作：变化才是真变化才是真简短未必是美德很多人将简洁与简短混为一谈，其实二有很大区分。简洁的主旨是用完量少的词汇叙述整个故事，简短的主旨则是为保持文章篇幅短小，细心撰写或随便删除文中的某些词语或章节。简洁并不意味着总写短句子。事实上，假如句式缺乏变化，文章就会显得支离破裂，缺少联系，让人觉得写作技巧贫乏。句式的变化能令文章协调而流畅，会让读者感觉到对主题把握得游刃有余。虽然短句没什么语法错误，但用得太多会使本应合在一起的意思分别开来。记住：不要使用一串串短的、支离破裂的句子。要理清自己的思路，尽量使句子长度有所变化。例:Before: The Art of Str
2、ategy was written by Sun Tzu. It is a fifty-six-hundred-word Chinese classical work. The writer put forth a set of principles in a very tightly compressed manner. They deal with how to defeat oppositions and win battles.这种表达的问题在于： (1) 简洁的“主语+谓语”构造太多；(2) “written“和“writer“,“The Art of Strategy“和“ It“
3、，“set of principles“和“ they“为重复用语；(3) 读起来很单调。After：In his fifty-six-hundred word classic, The Art of Strategy, Sun Tzu put forth a tightly compressed set of principles for achieving triumph over opposition.介词构造+同位语+主语+谓语的形式比拟好，由于将“Sun Tzu“ 放到了最重要成分-主语的位置，其他成分按规律排序居次要地位。整个句子很流畅。再看下面各例Choppy: Of cours
4、e, the weapons at Sun Tzus time were quite primitive. The armies were very large. They were nearly as large as those in World War Two. The devastation and human sufferings were just as profound as in World War Two.Better: Compared with World War Two, the weapons at Sun Tzus time were quite primitive
5、, but the armies were nearly as large and the devastation and human suffering just as profound. Choppy: Proverbs are short sayings. They are drawn from long experience. Better: Proverbs are short sayings drawn from long experience.Choppy: People change and places change as well. Jennifer felt this s
6、trongly. She had been away for eleven years.Better: On returning after an eleven-year absence, Jennifer had a strong feeling of how people and places change.Choppy: Beijing streets are crowded with taxis, company cars and private vehicles owned by the newly affluent. The number has been rising rapid
7、ly in the last few years. The latest statistics show there are now 1.2 million vehicles in Beijing alone.Better: Taxis, company cars and private vehicles owned by the newly affluent have crammed Beijing streets in rising numbers in the last few years - 1.2 million vehicles at last count.Choppy: Moby
8、 Dick is a book. It is a long book. It is about a whale. A man named Ahab tries to kill it. Herman Melville wrote it.Better: Herman Melville wrote a long book called Moby Dick. It is the story of a struggle of a man against a whale.Choppy: Thousands of buildings met the same fate. This alone is now
9、being preserved. It marks the center of the nuclear explosion. It is being preserved as a symbol. It symbolizes our wish that there be no more Hiroshimas.Better: Of the thousands of buildings that met the same fate, this alone, marking the center of the nuclear explosion, is now being preserved to s
10、ymbolize our wish that there be no more Hiroshimas.Choppy: I have always had a dream. My dream has been to be a famous writer. Everyone would read my books. I would become very wealthy.Better: I have always dreamed of being a wealthy, famous writer, read by everyone.Choppy: This is a wreck. It was formerly the stately Imperial Garden. It is preserved deliberately as a reminder and symbol.Better: This wreck, formerly the stately Imperial Garden, is preserved deliberately as a reminder and symbol.
