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1、短文改错1This morning I was riding a bicycle on my way to school while suddenly a shower of heavy rain began to pour down. The wind is blowing hard and the road became very slippery. Just then I saw an elderly woman walking with difficult in the street. She was on her way back to home after shopping, ca
2、rried a large basket full of vegetables. Suddenly she fell down in the mud. And she was very worn out that she couldnt get up. Seeing this, I immediate rode over to her and tried my best to support her up. Then I helped picking up the vegetables, and put them into her baskets. After that, I took off
3、 my raincoat, put on her and took her home.2.Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” T
4、hat is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he misse
5、d us just as many as we missed him.3.Im writing to tell you about a shocked incident that happened in Beijing Zoo in the afternoon of Feb 23rd. I was visiting the zoo that afternoon while I heard bears roaring terribly. I hurried to the place where the bears lived at. I saw the black bear badly inju
6、red and one of them roll on the ground painfully. It was hurt too serious to move a foot. The people around was shocked, angry and blaming the wrongdoer. I learned that was a student from a famous university in Beijing who caused the trouble. He pulled sulfur and acid onto the bears or pretending to
7、 feed them. What an shame! Animals are our friends and something must be done to prevent them from being injured.Sincerely Yours Li Hua4.As summer vacation are coming soon, my classmates are trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far fro
8、m home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When they came here, I will show them around my university and the city just as well. I have decided to buy them some nice gifts. It will be a big surprising for them. My parents have done
9、a lot for me, but I think it is high time that I did anything special to express my thanks. 5.Some Americans judge success on the length of his vacations. The man who gets a months vacation each year consider himself more successful than the man gets two weeks. Many people want to be teachers becaus
10、e it are teachers who can get three-month vacation every year. Some college teachers who teach the three classes consider themselves less successful than that who teach only one or two, or none in all. In short, the less work Americans do, the less successful they consider themselves.6.Dear Editor,I
11、m the only daughter of my parents. So they worried about everything I do. For example, when I ride my bike, my parents wont let me to ride it by myself. They are afraid I might fall off my bike and hurt me. They are taking great trouble to support a bike, with my mother even carrying a first-aid box
12、. Im not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not let me ride alone?” Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything for our children. This do no good to them. Too many love from parents may prevent children from being independent. In my opinion, parents should let their children
13、 do that they should do alone. Lucy7Last year, I was addicted with playing computer games. I found it hard to breaking away from the bad habit. My teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to promise not to play those games again. I tried hard, but I found it uselessly. The moment my
14、 fingers left the keyboard, I would feel very uncomfortable. Because I was determined to forget the games, I still could not concentrate on the lessons giving in classes.Fortunately, psychological advisor in our school came to know this. He talks with me about his problem. At last, he offered his ad
15、vices on how to get rid of the addiction. Now I can manage to control myself. 8.When my father bought me a computer as a birthday gift in last year, I felt very exciting. As we all know, computers are getting more and more usefully now. Much information can be stored in them. We can also learn that has lately happened in the world on the internet. In the past, people have to do the work which was very dangerous. Now, but, computers can do instead. When an exam is coming, I often did some exercises on my computer. Then it will correct them and tell me
