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1、全国各省2021年高考英语书面表达总分值范文共18套附解析及专家简评一、2021全国卷I、海南、宁夏卷假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括： 1外出购物 2替房东还书 3Tracy 来 留言：1咖啡屋Bolton Coffee见面取消 2此事已告知Susan 3) 尽快回电 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Mrs Wilson, _ Li Hua 【参考范文】 Mrs Wilson, Im going out shopping, and wo
2、nt be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about tha
3、t, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Li Hua 【解析】 作文题仍然同去年一样，属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条，是学生比拟熟悉的题材，表达了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原那么。应注意下面几点：1注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给房东第二人称写便条；2注意时态的正确使用：从试题的
4、内容上可以看出在表达要点1和2时应用将来时；而要点3中的几个方面那么需要注意时态的替换，会用到一般过去时，现在时和将来时。3注意恰当使用逻辑词语，是各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比拟通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。【专家简评】依然保持全国卷I短文写作的老套路：人物李华自1999年以来，中间除了02年，统统都是李华同学在写信，历时十年，众多效尤者，话题为简单的外语外事活动，形式为写信邮件或留言，实那么依然是短文写作，控制程度较高，体裁以陈述说明为主。二、2021.全国卷I
5、I假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容： 1. 简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺； 2. 位置：天安门广场南面； 3. 交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线； 4. 特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。 参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street 当当车 trolley car 地铁 subway 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。Dear Sarah. Thank you for y
6、ou letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street. Here is something about it. 全国各省2021年高考英语书面表达总分值范文(共18套附解析.ETmeet 瘴涟绪卑计缄埠噪巨妆愚苇逆喜馒淤废楷咏跳嚷强揣着厩阁鲸一碳骚瘩膛匿茸译驭榨埔彩彼闻靴汀邯色镭瘦虚沙信虑耪卯战睦负撼兼斑氏滦砧靠阑_【参考范文】Dear Sarah,Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it. Qi
7、anmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tiananmen Square, its very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No. 17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop
8、there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. Im sure youll like it.【解析】 本文是书信格式，给出四个要点，属于常规文体，学生只要把四个要点写全，注意上下文，句与句之间的合理过渡即可。【专家简评】人物李华，简单的外事活动。
9、体裁属于陈述说明性质。话题是介绍前门大街改建情况。但这个话题对全国卷II考区的考生多少有些歧视。这种歧视可以理解为城乡歧视和信息歧视。因为该考区学生对前门并不熟悉，所幸试题控制很严，只当是翻译了。另外，试题所提供的名词类词汇缺乏考试的实际意义，只是照抄而已，对考生并无挑战。三、2021.北京卷第一节， 情景作文20分假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60提示词：郊区 subur
10、bs第二节 开放作文15分请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.第一节 情景作文20分一、 内容要点：1、 骑车去植树2、 植树3、 安插提示牌4、 照相二、说明：内容要点可用不同方式表达【参考范文】Green Action in Our ClassApril 12 is memorable bec
11、ause our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After gett
12、ing the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【解析】本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。题材贴近学生实
13、际，学生只要注意理清思路按照活动的内容和时间来写即可。【专家简评】在全国卷和地方卷中，08年只有北京卷是记叙文，09年又是记叙文。有趣的是，都是“红星中学高三一班的学生李华。场景设置几无二致，形式更是何其相似乃尔。如果追索源头的话，全国卷NMET时代的连环画看图说故事便是始作俑者了。NMET1998年书面表达题跟北京卷有得一比。四格或六格连环画的形式，多少让人回到了九十年代。一个是红星农场，一个却是红星中学。就话题而言，08北京是春游活动，09北京是植树主题，而NMET1998那么是参观活动主题，话题显然高度相关。第二节 开放作文15分【参考范文】What an interesting pic
14、ture! A Western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think its a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that
15、chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we dont need to copy others ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【解析】本文是开放性
