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1、写作指导 (9) 应用文日记日记是用来叙述一天生活中所发生的事情或用来抒发自己对当天某些事情的感受以及将来的打算的一种应用文体。写好英文日记要注意以下几点:1日记的格式:主要指日期、天气情况和正文。日期一般写在正文的左上角,它包括年、月、日和星期几,天气情况一般写在正文的右上角,常用词汇有:sunny,fine,rainy,windy,cloudy,snowy等。2日记的时态:由于日记是对当天所发生事情的回顾,故常用一般过去时。在发表议论或感想时,也可使用现在完成时或一般将来时。3日记的人称:因为日记是记载自己的亲身经历,故应用第一人称,语言尽量口语化,按照事情发生的先后顺序,清楚、准确、连贯
2、地把事情表达出来。2009年5月3日,你参观了一个农场。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。注意:1.日记须包括所有图画的内容,可以适当增加细节,使日记连贯;2词数:100左右。案例分析本文是一篇看图作文,考查从图中获取信息及写作日记文体的能力。根据题目要求可知写作要点如下:1 集合,出发;2.到达;3.参观;4.野餐;5.娱乐;6.告别。May 3,2009SundayFineToday we visited a farm.Early in the morning,we met at the school gate and went there together.The farm workers
3、 gave us a warm welcome.Then the head of the farm showed us around.How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well.At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine.After a short rest,we had great fun singing and dancing,telling jokes or stories.Two of us even played a game of chess.The ti
4、me passed quickly.Before we knew it,we had to say goodbye to the workers.假如某英文杂志将举办“中学生一日行”征文活动,请写一篇英文日记来参与这项活动。包括如下要点:1时间:2009年12月10日,星期日;2为了能在西湖上泛舟,你和你的同学一大早就赶到了西湖公园;3后来在湖边捡到一个精美的背包,内有照相机、护照以及一大笔钱;4在警察的帮助下,用了两个半小时你才找到了失主:一位外国朋友(Mr Woodhead);5外国朋友很感激;6你的感受。注意:1.不要逐条翻译,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2词数:100左右。【参考答案
5、】December 10,2009SundayFineThe students in our class planned to go outing to the Xihu Park.We got there early in the morning so that we could row boats on the Xihu Lake.But as soon as we arrived at the lake,we found a nice bag with a camera,a passport and a lot of money in it.With the help of a policeman we found the owner,Mr Woodhead,a foreign friend after two and a half hours.Seeing his bag,he was very glad and grateful to us.Though we didnt row boats on the lake,we were very happy to help others. 第 1 页 共 5 页