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1、九年级英语unit6作文指导及范文Unit 6 I like music that I can dance to 生活中,每个人都有自己的爱好。 中学生关于爱好的交流非常常见,是一个十分重要的内容。 即使同样喜欢听音乐的人,也会有不同的偏爱,有的喜欢古典音乐,而有点喜欢流行音乐。本单元谈论的话题就是谈论个人偏爱。 兴趣与爱好这一话题是英语课程标准要求初中学生掌握的重点话题之一,也是这些年来各省、市地区中考命题的热点话题。它涉及到的内容广泛,如体育运动、美术、音乐、旅游、集邮、绘画、收藏、爬山、垂钓、看书等。本单元话题是在初二年级谈论兴趣爱好的基础进一步深入,帮助同学们更加精准、深刻的谈论自己的
2、兴趣爱好,说出自己的兴趣爱好和它给你带来的无穷乐趣,感悟生活的愉悦与精彩。 该话题的命题形式通常采用 “Guided writing”形式,有中、英文提示的形式,有图画、图表形式等。通常采用记叙或描述性话题作文形式, 写该话题时要注意文体,通过联想将这些画面的直观内容转换成传神达意的文字形式,用于反映图中所表现的思想内容。 写作时要重点突出,确定好人称和时态 ,记住一些固定的习语和句式的使用,培养遣词找句的能力并背诵大量范文,达到熟悉这些地道的句子结构。 1. 写作本话题常用的句型有: I like music that I can dance to. My favorite music is
3、 I prefer music. I like singers who write their own songs. I like groups that play quite and gentle songs. It makes me It helps me to It is good for 2. 开篇展示文章的主题,说清自己的爱好或偏爱是什么,下面的叙述内容就要围绕这个中心话题展开。 3. 本单元话题谈论的是兴趣与爱好的日常话题,因此一般选用一般现在时。表示兴趣爱好的持续,则用现在完成进行时,它通常和“for+段时间”或“since+点时间(也可以是从句)”的时间状语连用。 4. 提示性
4、作文一定要按照题目要求去写,要做到内容完整,层次清晰,段落清楚。 5. 注意连词、代词的使用,行文连贯流畅,表意清楚。 A I like music that is quiet and gentle. When I am stressed out, I always listen to music to relax myself. My favorite music is country. This music is great,because it has great lyrics. I dont like music that is too loud. I cant stand rock
5、music. As for musicians, I prefer musicians who can write their original lyrics and I like singers who can sing the words clearly. So Jay Chou isnt my favorite though he is great. My favorite singer is John Denver. You can listen to his songs at night with your bedroom light on. He is really wonderf
6、ul, I think. 1 B Different preferences bring about problems My brother and I like music very much. It seems that we have the same hobby. Actually, we also have a problem. I like music that is gentle and quite. My brother likes music that is loud and energetic. I always feel a bit tired after school,
7、 so I usually play Bandaris CD to get relaxed. While my brother doesnt like it, he says the music that I like makes him feel like sleeping. Whenever I play the CD,he would ask me to turn off the recorder. If I dont agree, he will be angry with me. When I take out My CD, he will play his Rock-and-rol
8、l music very loud. Then he wont listen to anybody speaking. I just cant stand noisy music. But I dont want to argue with him. I came up with an idea to solve the problem. I will buy a pair of headphones for my brother as a birthday gift. C My Favorite Books I like reading very much.,and I enjoy read
9、ing books that tell magic stories. Of course, Harry Potter series are my favorite books. In books, there are many unbelievable things. The imagination is really great. In the books, there are many strange animals, the brooms that can fly,magic hats and magic wands. When I was a child, I really wante
10、d to have a kind of magic power, then I can do every thing. Harrys magic world is every childs dream. That is why teenagers are crazy about the books and its movies. In the books, Harry Potter is a courageous, honest and confident boy,and he is handsome. I like him very much, and I can learn somethi
11、ng from him. Every teenager wants to be friends with him Now the new book is going to come out. I cant wait to read it. A原汁原味 1. I like music that I can dance to. 我喜欢能跟着跳舞的音乐。 2. I prefer music that has great lyrics. 我更喜欢歌词很棒的歌曲。 3. I like musicians who write their own songs. 我喜欢能自己写歌的音乐家。 4. The mu
12、sic reminds me of Brazilian dance music. 这音乐让我想起了巴西舞曲。 5. What do you think of it? 你认为它怎么样? 6. I cant stand music that is too loud. 我不能忍受太喧闹的音乐。 7. .they dont interest me as much. 它们同样唤不起我的兴趣。 8. I prefer quiet, traditional music so the concert suited me just fine.我更愿意听安静的传统的音乐,因此音乐会更适合我的胃口。 B精彩例句拓展
13、 1. My father prefers swimming to playing basketball. 我爸爸喜欢游泳,而不喜欢打篮球。 We prefer living in the suburbs. 我们宁愿住在郊区。 I prefer to stay at home rather than go to the noisy party. 我宁愿呆在家里,也不愿去参加那嘈杂的聚会。 2. I like singers who sing clearly. 我喜欢吐字清楚的歌手。 3. The pictures remind me of my school days. 这些照片使我想起了我的
14、学生时代。 Remind me to write to Mother. 提醒我给妈妈写信。 4. How do you like the fish? 你觉得这鱼如何? 2 5. Can you stand the pain? 你受得了这疼痛吗? 6. The story does not interest me. 这故事引不起我的兴趣。 7. The dress suits me well. 这衣服很合我身。 假如你叫Li Ming, 是一名中学生,经常收听由英国主持人Philip主持的音乐节目。请给据内容要点提示,用英语给主持人写一封信。 内容要点:1. 你很喜欢这个节目,特别是节目播放的歌
15、词很棒的英语歌曲; 2. 你学习很忙,疲劳时,会打开收音机听这个节目; 3. 从节目中你学到了很多新单词; 4. 告诉你最喜欢什么类型的音乐,请他帮你介绍一些相关的歌手和CD。 要求:1.意思连贯,符合逻辑,书信格式正确。 2. 不要直接翻译内容提示。 分析: 这是一片提示性作文。要求写四个方面的内容。写作前应仔细审题,将这四个方面进行整合,可分三个层次来写:一、表达对节目的喜爱;二、节目对自己的帮助;三、请主持人给你介绍你所喜欢的音乐类型的歌手和CD。 在写作主要内容之前要用一两句话简单的较少一下自己。然后有条理的把主要内容呈现出来,注意使用恰当的连词或表示过渡的词组。为了是习作更加饱满,可
16、是适当增加细节内容。写作时要注意书信的格式。 习作 1: Dear Philip, My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I like listening to music, so I often listen to your program at night, and I like it very much, especially the English songs. I like English songs that have great lyrics. As a student, I am busy with my schoo