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1、2023托福独立写作文章构造细节讲解托福独立写作文章构造细节讲解ETS官方如何定义托福独立写作文章构造?在托福官方指南OG中有一部分关于organization的说明，通过几个问句提醒同学们一篇完好的文章应该要包含几个部分：开头段，主体段和结尾段，并且要分段，构造要明晰。同学们往往对于每部分要写什么毋庸置疑，但在准备的过程中，往往重视形式大过内容。原那么上，在不影响主体段发挥的前提下，开头和结尾的方法以及长度随意(OG中介绍了6种开头方法以及5种结尾方法)，保证关键的信息给出即可;但从大部分同学的实际考试情况来看，开头和结尾总倾向于事先准备好的模板句型;相反，最重要的主体段没有留足够的时间和精
2、力。结果往往捡了芝麻丢了西瓜。所以除非可以灵敏运用OG介绍的方法，否那么建议同学简化开头和结尾。OG实例提示考生简化开头结尾段我们看一下OG书上的一个开头段例子：The importance of the issue raised by the posed statement, namely creating a new holiday for people, cannot be underestimated, as it concerns the very fabric of society. As it stands, the issue of creating a new holiday
3、 raises profound implications for the future. However, although the subject matter in general cannot be dismissed lightheartedly, the perspective of the issue as presented by the statement raises certain qualms regarding practical application.这个开头段的前两句都在强调话题(create a new holiday)的重要性，属于赘述(redundancy
4、)，第三句并没有很直接给出立场，不符合评分标准中的“有效答复以下问题”。为了获得一个高分，我们需要防止赘述(redundancy)和偏题(digression)。其次OG中有个2分的文章，截取每段的第一句话：In the following, I will illustrate my opinion by two reasons.First of all, honest make the trust stronger between friends or colleagues.Secondly, telling a lie always makes things worse not only
5、in work but also in family life.On the contrary, sometimes it is better to tell a lie to others, such as telling a lie to a patient.作者想给出2个理由，从正反论证说实话在人际关系中的重要性。而第三段的on the contrary， 看似是比照论证，然而并非是描绘”扯谎的弊端“，所以构造上会引起困惑。托福独立写作构造训练建议分享关于构造明晰，一方面建议大家不要大片背诵模板句式然后进展堆砌。今年的两场考试中，已经有明确要求Do not use memorized e
6、xles.假设不能将模板句式巧妙结合所写文章纯熟混迹在自己的语言表达之下，那么建议踏踏实实审题。另一方面，平时可以结合历年真题，多训练开门见山的思维方式，然后根据不同的话题补充相应的词汇短语等语料表达，不至于无话可说。托福写作解析:Children and sports托福写作题目：Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and exles to
7、support your answer.参考分析p ：优点：对身体安康有好处;有助于培养与人和睦相处的才能;缺点：耽误学习，instant pleasure costs long-term benefits.花很长时间搞体育的优点(1)身体安康(2)促进团队精神(3)交很多朋友花很长时间搞体育的缺点：耽误学习参考范文：Children and sportsCurrently some young children spend a great amount of their time in practicing sports. Most parents feel quite happy beca
8、use sports are good for their kids development and team work spirit,however they are quite worried about some negative effects such as practicing sports occupies too much time, distracts their attentions on school work and loses certain interests on other activities. In my opinion, everything has it
9、s good side and bad side. The important thing is to handle it properly.Admittedly, practicing sports can help childrens physical development, which makes them grow faster and stronger than before. As we know, during childrens development periods, especially from 10 to 16 years old, sports are really
10、 helpful for children to develop. Sports can create a strong body that reduces the possibility of contracting some diseases easily. Definitely we believe that children benefit from sports.Another good thing is that sports teach us to learn how to corporate with other members in a team. Most sports a
11、re team work. If we want to play them well, we must master some skills to care about what our team members are thinking and how to adapt each other to achieve a mon goal. Sports are not an individual activity, it needs corporation and mutual understanding. This is not easy to master. Of course, for
12、parents they are delightful to see their children to get this skill from sports.托福写作模板：不同话题经典模板句式1 We may cite a mon exle of2 A general /recent survey /investigation conducted by officials/ scientists indicates /reveals/ suggests that比较1 Although the monly-accepted belief/ idea is that X.X.X, a curr
13、ent/ recent study/ survey indicates that2 It is true that X.X.X, but it does not mean that原因1 The reasons/ causes for X.X.X are varied/ plicated and perhaps (probably) that they lie in the fact2 Another contributing factor/ cause of X.X.X is that开头1 There is a general/ public debate/ discussion nowadays on/ over the X.X.X. Those who criticize/ object to X.X.X argue that2 They believe that X.X.X, however, people who advocate/ favor X.X.X argue that结果1 As it turns out / Indisputably/Accordingly2 Considering all the factors above, we may safely draw the conclusion that第 页 共 页
