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1、2014年11月高一英语期中考试作文评讲 李永平 11月18日假如你是李华，最近你的外国笔友Michael 写信询问你的近况。 请你根据以下提示用英语给他回信，告诉他你的学习和生活情况。（注意：词数 120字左右，不必按提示逐字逐句翻译，可适当增减细节。）1. 进入高中快两个月，已经适应了高中生活 2. 与新老师和同学相处的很好。 .3. 学习上取得了很大进步。 4. 老师们在学习和生活上都很关心我们。 5. 在英语学习方面还有些困难，希望他能给你一些学好英语的建议。6.渴望受到他的来信。 .(参考词汇:get used to doing sth ; get along well with s
2、b; make great progress in sth; care about; have difficulty in doing sth; give sb some advice on how to do sth; look forward to doing sth; hear from sb)Dear Michael,I am glad to receive your letter . You asked me about my life and study in high school.In this letter I will tell you something about my
3、 new life in high school. . Yours , Li Hua本次作文出现的主要问题 ： 一，时态要会灵活使用：例如;1. I am getting on well with my new teachers.2. I am looking forward to hearing from you.3. I have made some progress in.4. I have got used to / have suited the life here.5. I have been a high school student for 2 months.6. It is
4、/ has been 2 months since I came to/ entered this school.7. Now I still have some difficulty in my English study.二，书写要漂亮（平时要加强对照字帖练字）；卷面要整洁，切记随意画圈，涂改(学会打草稿，写的过程中万一出现错误，用简单的斜线划掉即可)三，最好采用三段式。(尽量避免使用一段式或多段式)好词好句摘抄欣赏：1. As we all know ,life in senior high school is very different from ever before. But n
5、ow I have got used to everything here.2. At first , I found it hard to make friends with my new teachers and classmates.3. Actually, my new teachers and classmate are easy to get along with.4. I love my teachers and classmates , because they all care about me a lot in my study as well as my life.5.
6、Teachers love us very much as if they were our own parents.6. The teachers are willing to help us when we have difficulty in life and study.7. As far as I am concerned , I am getting on well with my new teachers and classmates.8. I have a large circle of new friends and I am getting on well with the
7、m at the present time.9. I will be grateful if you can give me some suggestions on how to learn English well.10. I hope you are in good health.本次作文高分同学优秀习作欣赏：（一）Now I am in good condition. In my view, life in senior high school is not that hard to suit. I have made a number of friends. And I am gett
8、ing along well with my new teachers and classmates, thanks to whom, I have made great progress in my study and life. My teachers all care about me .But now, I still find it hard to learn my English well. I know English is very important. When it comes to English, many people hold the view that witho
9、ut starts ,the night sky wont be so beautiful ; Likewise, without good English, my life wont be so wonderful! So, I will be very grateful if you can give me some suggestions on how to learn English well.On balance(总而言之，总的来说), what has been referred to above can come down to the following: I am in go
10、od condition now, and I am waiting to hear from you.Best wishes! (高一10班覃昆博 29分作文),（二）Firstly, I have been a senior high school student for 2 months, and I can suit the life here very well. The new teachers and classmates are very easy to get on well with. The teachers here are willing to help us whe
11、never we have difficulty in study.But my English is still poor now. I found the words are too hard to remember and the grammar is difficult to understand. There are always so many new words to me when I read some English articles that I have to look them all in the dictionary. I really want to improve it! So I turn to you for help. I wish you could give me some advice on how to learn English well.I am looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! (高一10班 彭朝辉 28分作文)同学们，你的作文呢？也拿出来秀一秀吧 ！要不然，就赶紧背诵或者日积月累吧!
