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1、戴云写作讲义写作训练方法8 u. g& p( e0 I+ b15篇 不限时写作 结构完整 300字以上6 h5 E4 7 a: c% I* W2 ?610篇 1小时 350字以上 结构完整 q6 s7 : R% 5 I: r5 要求：检查语法、拼写错误 跑题、表达不清问题! F( Q0 h( B0 r8 e# K1120篇 半小时 400字以上% _% g. / P( x- n, R要求：检查语法、拼写错误 跑题、表达不清问题 润饰文章- ) Y0 L O3 N: z0 ?) f理由不能太具体 否则不容易展开 要擅于利用“万金由”5 c) Z% c+ : f I各个理由的关系，必须是并列关系，
2、排列顺序由段落长短来决定。( M* k, Q8 d1 Jj8 q开头1 背景论题各方观点的理由作者论点和理由, q: L, e; m( Z背景论题反方观点（反方理由）过渡作者观点作者理由 & u+ c- ! N/ ! y! Z; K开头段写理由的好处, ?- ?# v8 B2 V怎样写背景：3 H* C- t+ l _ o X提出一种普遍的或值得关注的现象（紧扣论题）作为背景9 g; B6 % # Z, Q$ y8 Y从远到近，由大到小，谈论紧扣论题的社会观点作为背景9 O$ s IP: ; 官方、权威数据，调查研究结果 h$ ?, KQ- M% f% w) f4 n! t开头2 事例论题各方
3、观点（和理由）作者理由和论点+ L: A# d9 U( q+ m% a( y 媒体（电视、电台、报纸、杂志和网络）的报道9 q4 Z: ?8 g# U0 W: U 朋友、邻居、同事的故事8 % 8 u7 K0 L* T 1 C3 P! L) d ( h开头3 问题论题各方观点（和理由）作者论点和理由+ c) t- v# L3 a6 l3 W g2 |9 把背景用问题方式提出 连续提问（煽情式提问）0 G) j2 d2 c0 NW0 u8 / n ! l+ Z2 M) g# _+ U i7 a开头4 “引语”论题各方观点（和理由）作者论点和理由2 D* E9 C8 N% # ; ) & _主题句
4、0 c / D) C& - r* g必须是陈述句 必须表面观点 不要直接写事实 由观点到事实. B+ + e$ c, h; M2 L态度必须坚决 每段都要有主题句 通常位于段首或段末* i! |4 N8 5 , p2 f# P G7 & o6 d! nE4 U+ k2 w2 q; O1 0 a/ O结尾9 _2 s+ . e$ F9 d2 F$ f# y总结全文（论点各方观点）重述论点和理由提出建议/解决问题/深化意义; b* 3 h, d1 v5 z把对方的优点移植到己方，把己方的观点消灭掉，提出实施方案和注意事项/ c/ b& + n l s8 l: x+ % Z深化意义展望未来对国家社会
5、的好处0 N* H( s4 Z6 b$ % g黄金规则一 The longer, the better( t& ; y3 V/ i( v. _0 X0 W 每一个论点都要有理由* I: g- gc! i6 v% + L 每一个理由都要有例子 z+ I- h1 5 I_8 XU5 x& c 每一个例子都要有细节! Y! r L% ! J9 . v l* w6 p! r1 r& S黄金规则二-“万金由”黄金规则三 重述语意的技巧7 z& v9 & e* r* v9 s/ 6 / C使用同义词进行替换- ?+ l0 g9 f5 l B4 O* J使用同根词进行替换/ F& I: B3 i# P$ c
6、 - b1 O+ : xOppose-opposition# ! T: q1 v: t! Q! Iq6 o4 X9 eBuild-building) A0 |* D. U2 c; j* J7 nAnnounce-announcement2 M+ r: F; kV( x! u6 uExplain-explanation: iK0 v0 O7 T/ L. M4 ) Y使用短语进行替换! k$ w/ w* Q; v( k; c5 Xx6 j(Support) argue for/vote for/be in favor of& i3 g3 g0 G; l6 H& g Z2 t(Oppose) arg
7、ue against/vote against/object to/be opposed to2 2 Q: X s5 J$ r5 B使用全新的表达法进行替换2 A$ r8 g6 n, ?2 L6 T5 JA company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near the community.$ g2 a/ J3 E: k0 H+ T( v-a large factory is supposed to built near the community according to the announcement issu
8、ed by a company. L( H0 P* |8 K* ZDiscuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.! Y+ E; H/ ze/ z% -There is a growing awareness of both the positive and negative influences that the construction plan brings to our community.# kl J& S+ B- _4 Y6 Y! N8 |4 T; h0 Y黄金规则四黄
9、金句型 priceless sentence patterns9 X0 _( w% ?0 k E$ S# h超酷超炫超难句型大比拼4 r9 C: 1 z. H 3 c8 C j注意：主题句 尽可能21格式 细节提升& d M( f; s8 g F) e/ r/ f每个段落开头 v* A* Y! d0 k7 x2 z* b a1, # ( G/ P$ Y/ h K强调句（12）. a9 G; Q: p4 K5 * n) N2# v, a) + Z7 zL. vThe more,the more (12)q% A0 l, 7 RThe more frequently we communicate
10、with family members, the more harmonious the relationship in the family between us is.(只要涉及交流都可以用)* y( M; E- k/ _0 L3. 倒装句（23）$ Y5 M1 i2 B9 CSothat.以至于6 & O) ch, p* Y/ p! w% T: LSo big is the classroom that it may hold ten thousand people. t, w! m6 b; n0 x* O( MSo fast does he run that the train cou
11、ldnt catch up with him. Tm0 f4 f8 DZ Asas(morethan) 比较结构H1 A6 $ j7 C1 Y6 EI run as fast as he did-I run as fast as did he.7 s3 M) N/ E* f表示地点、位置、范围、处所的状语或表语提前至句首) p; mN D3 _0 OMy sister is among those students.-Among those students is my sister./ x! f3 Q6 z* M. ?% V, M( ?分词或形容词短语提前至句首+ U2 J& p5 I8 k
12、|. h! 主语（定语）be形容词/过去分词/不及物动词现在分词介词名词& R; S& 4 y, N4 s主语（定语）be及物动词现在分词n.! O& Q V7 _% ( J& d& iE.g. Contrary to/coincident with the opinion of many people is my heartfelt (忠心的) objection to/agreement with the idea that students should study together with classmates.6 f: S% s ) hThose people/parents wh
13、o hold the opinion that money is the only symbol of success are satisfied with/contented with/interested in/worried about/opposed to their children finding a high-paying and long-working job.-Satisfied with/contented with/interested in/worried about/opposed to their children finding a high-paying and long-working job are those people/parents who hold the opinion that money i
