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1、概要写作序号题型真题Part 1解密高考考点综述 备考建议Part 2对点解密考点精准说1. 真题对点析1. 对点模拟练1.Part 3强化集训真题模测、典题模测Part 1解密高考【考点综述】概要写作是一种“阅读+写作”的复合型任务,测试学生的阅读理解、概括归纳和书面表达方面的综合能力。选材上，提供一篇350词以内的短文，一般以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主，要求考生写出一篇60词左右的内容概要（注意：少于40或多于80词扣两分），而新写的语篇，既要做到在结构、衔接和连贯性等方面与原文保持一致，又要做到简明扼要、意义完整、结构严密和语句通顺。【备考建议】概要写作的步骤：（一）细读每段文章，画主题
2、句，圈关键词，辨别主次信息在阅读原文时，首先找到该段的主题句或中心句，并圈出重点信息词汇，分清主要信息和次要信息，把修饰成分、细节内容、举例说明等次要信息删掉。（二）用自己的语言，写出该段要点概要写作要求学生用自己的语言准确地转述作者的要点，因此，不要整句抄原文，可以采用以下表达方式：1.替换法：同义词替换；单词替换短语；短语替换句子等2.转换法：词性转换；句式转换；语态转换等3.合并法：把几个信息合并在一个句子中表达；将原文多个简单句整合成一个句子等（三）选用恰当的衔接词，把每段要点串连成篇概要写作要求学生有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要逻辑连贯，衔接自然，结构紧凑。常用的衔接词有
3、：表递进关系besides, moreover, furthermore , in addition, whats more, whats worse, worse still表因果关系therefore, thus , consequently, due to， owing to， thanks to表转折关系however, otherwise, anyway/ anyhow, although，even though 表对比关系similarly, instead, on the contrary, on the other hand表时间顺序关系eventually, finally,
4、 gradually , immediately ，afterwards, meanwhile/ meantime, in the meanwhile/meantime表总结关系in a word, in short, in conclusion, in brief, in summary, in general, to sum up, on the whole表情感关系luckily, unfortunately, to ones great joy/satisfaction/surprisePart 2对点解密【真题对点析】1【2020江苏卷】请阅读下面有关中国题材纪录片(document
5、ary)的对话，并按照要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的文章。Su Hua: Hi, Li Jiang! Did you see the BBC documentary on CCTV 9 last week?Li Jiang: You mean Du Fu: Chinas Greatest Poet? Yes, I did. Fantastic!Su Hua: Just think an English actor recites Chinese poems.Li Jiang: I dont really understand every line he recites, but I beli
6、eve he truly loves the poems himself.Su Hua: Right. It is reported that the film is well received outside China.Li Jiang: Yeah, Its my first time to hear Chinese stories told by an English speaker.Su Hua: In fact, documentaries about our country are plentiful both at home and abroad. These films can
7、 help foreign friends better understand this land-Chinese literature, geography history, food.Li Jiang: I couldnt agree more.【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上述对话的主要内容；2.谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因(至少两点)。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。_【范文】CCTV 9 broadcast Du Fu: Chinas Greatest
8、 Poet, a documentary produced by BBC. This well-made film provides foreign audiences with a fresh way of better knowing Chinas past and present.Documentaries about China, produced either in China or in other countries, are becoming increasingly popular among foreigners. For one thing, the overall de
9、velopment over the past decades has been so striking that they feel eager to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China.For another, China enjoys a long history and rich culture. It has always been an attraction for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese. These documentaries prese
10、nt a splendid picture of China in front of their audiences-it history, landscape, art, food, or even traditional Chinese medicine.Because of these films, some foreigners have begun to think of coming to China. In this way, they can form a true picture of China themselves.【解析】这是一篇读写任务。【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目
11、的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。要求阅读中国题材纪录片的对话，写一篇150个词文章。包括两部分。(一)、用30词概括对话内容。(二)、谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因。要求至少两点原因。第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段，概括对话内容。第二段和第三段，中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因。第四段，总结因为电影吸引外国人想来到中国。第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: produced by, providewith, eitheror, be keen on, present , because of, in this wa
12、y, the overall development，so striking that，feel eager to familiarize themselves with.第四步:确定较为高级的句子: 非谓语动词结构a documentary produced by BBC； 定语从句的运用:It has always been an attraction for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese.第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: for one thing, for another.第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁
13、，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: 非谓语动词结构a documentary produced by BBC； 定语从句的运用:It has always been an attraction for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese. 状语从句和宾语从句的运用 the overall development over the past decades has been so striking that they feel eager to familiarize t
14、hemselves with what is going on in China.这些高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力【对点模拟练】1阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。New research aimed at understanding the impact of screen time and social media on adolescent brains found in early testing significant differences in brain chemistry for kids who had at l
15、east seven hours of screen time a day, compared to kids who used screens less.Psychologist Lisa Damour explained that social media is incredibly appealing.“We know it triggers(触发) the reward centers in the brain.And this is true for grownups too, not teenagers and kids, ”Damour said Monday.“We also know that d
