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1、2013江苏高考英语书面表达最后的冲刺1.书面表达的考试说明的要求要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的，对象、时间、地点、方位、关系、内容、数据等；提供情景的形式如图画、图表、提纲、信函等。考生应能：根据特定语境准确使用英语语法，选用恰当的词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇、清楚，连贯地表达自己的意思。题类项目题量计分答题参考时间（分钟）第五部分书面表达125252.写作的步骤1）认真读命题者所给的“情景”。正常的情景3部分：开头介绍话题、正文要点陈述（多少不等）和结尾的注意事项。例如1：开头话题背景介绍2004年（江苏卷）书面表达(满分25分)假如你是李晓华，住在江城
2、。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。 自然情况位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住 成 就经济发展迅速 / 正文要点展示新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。 存在问题水、空气污染交通拥挤结尾注意事项对江城发展的看法(内容由考生自己拟定)注意：1回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。 2词数100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。参考词汇：经济economy n例如2：2005年（江苏卷）第二节：书面表达（满分25分） 假设你是李晓平，是“江苏中学”的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英
3、语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。 要点提示：1人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心 2人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助 3人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护 4你的态度：（内容由考生自己拟定）注意：1词数：100左右。倡议书的开头、结尾以及提示句已为你写好，不计人词数。2内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。A Letter to High School Students in JiangsuDear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build a “harmonious society” （和谐社会）.I think it is every
4、citizens duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As high school students, what should we do?As for myself,Dear fellow students ,lets start fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day ,every hour, and every minute!Li XiaopingFrom Jiangsu High School例如3：2011年（江苏卷）第五部分：书面表达（满分25分）81.下面这幅照
5、片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1. 描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2. 结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；3. 举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意：1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。2）分段展出文章的框架结构，要分开头、正文和结尾。注意西方人常见的思维模式。如概括到具体等。结尾正文开头One possible version:Dear Bob， Its very kind of you to wri
6、te me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng. The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses an
7、d roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its po
8、pulation should be brought under control so that well have a better hometown in future. Yours, Xiaohua3）围绕中心主题，合理选择“所给”或是“自己的”观点或是思想。例如2004江苏的中心主题：家乡江城的情况。例如2005江苏的中心主题：围绕“建设和谐社会的主题例如2006江苏的中心主题：以“Dos and Donts for the 2008 Olympic Volunteers”为题所以写作时务必不能跑题。4）列出要点，运用一定的词汇、句型和语法，翻译成好句子，最好是地道的句子。位于长江边、
9、风景优美、适合居住经济发展迅速新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people.5）
10、采用多种衔接手段，注意过度和常见语句和词汇的运用。例如：One possible version:Dos and Donts for the 2008 Olympic VolunteersFirstly, they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world, and avoid improper behavior. Secondly, they should stick to their posts, offering good services, satisfying
11、any reasonable needs and being ready to help those in difficulty, and never fail to do their duty. Thirdly, they should introduce the Chinese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know China better, and never say or do anything that harms the image of our Conflicts with others are commo
12、n in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.To be honest, it was Su s fault but Li was also to blamethey were not calm enough an
13、d both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forg
14、ive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others place.Dont be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.6）根据文体方向，适当修改和润饰。这就是评分标准中的句式多样化，甚至尝试所谓的高级词汇和句型，采用一定的修辞手法。比如记叙、描写、说明和议论等。例如：简要描述事情的经过打篮球碰撞争执,等等To be honest, it was Su s fault but Li was also to blamethey were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing.Last Sunday,
