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1、现象解释模板试题八一、题目：Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic：The Impact of Pesticides on Public Health and the Environment. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1随着城市的扩展与日益拥挤，广大
2、农村也成了各种农药的肆虐之所； 2农药对人们健康及生态环境的影响和表现；3我的看法。二、类型：现象解释型三、方法提示：1审题：第一步：结合提纲推断题意：这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步：根据题目给出的提纲可知文章应包含如下三个基本部分：现象部分：随着城市的扩展与日益拥挤，广大农村也成了各种农药的肆虐之所；解释部分：农药对人们健康及生态环境的影响和表现；表明作者态度部分：我的看法。完全符合现象解释型作文的结构。2选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。3结合题意套用模板：现象解释四级作文模板。四、范文与点评1.模板一：It is true that _. Nowadays,_. What impr
3、esses us most is _. Of course, _.There is also a growing concern over _. The main reason for this is _. 推荐精选What is more, _. As a result, _.Considering all these reasons, personally, _. On the one hand, _. (11) On the other hand, _. (12) In a word, _.2.范文范文点评The Impact of Pesticides on Public Health
4、 and the EnvironmentIt is true that over the past thirty years or so the quality of many peoples lives has deteriorated in some respects because of technological progress. Nowadays while towns and cities have become larger and overcrowded due to the growing urban population, the countryside has also
5、 been affected by the large-scale use of pesticides. What impresses us most is that there are more than 1 million human pesticide poisonings and over 20,000 deaths each year according to a WHO report. Of course, if urgent measures were not adopted to limit the use of pesticides, more and more people
6、 would become victims.There is also a growing concern over the contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. The main reason for this is that fruit and vegetables sprayed with chemicals may have some poisonous effect upon the people who eat them. What is more
7、, large use of pesticides will pollute the groundwater and surface water. As a result, the people, domestic animals, fish, birds, plants and wildlife living in and using the water would be greatly endangered.Considering all these reasons, personally, despite some beneficial effects on the agricultur
8、al industry, large use of pesticides would do considerable harm to our health, wildlife and the environment. On the one hand, the killing of insects has resulted in a loss of balance in the ecology, because首句通过deteriorate指出一个与人们生活密切相关的问题：在某些领域，科技进步恶化了人们的生活质量。使用连词while点出城市和农村的现存问题，对首句进一步具体化。世卫组织提供的确切
9、数据令人信服地表明问题之严重。urgent measures点明了问题的迫切性起到了承上启下的作用;该句运用了虚拟语气。推荐精选 insects, although a nuisance to farmers, provide food for birds. (11) On the other hand, research indicates that long-term effects of pesticide exposure can lead to cancer, mutations（异变） and congenital defects（先天缺陷）. (12) In a word, th
10、e farmers should limit the use of pesticides to the minimum and we all should preserve the environment both for our children and ourselves.分词结构sprayed with 与定语从句the people who 用得不错，做到了句型的多样化。endanger进一步阐明的严重后果。表让步关系的介词despite令作者的观点更加客观全面。，(11)从生态及人类健康两方面再次总结出农药的危害。(12)总结全文，提出呼吁。3.模板二：Nowadays, where
11、ver you go, _. As is known to all, _. In a word,_.There are plenty of contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. First, _. Second, _. And consequently, _. And finally, _.In fact, _ in the long run. Besides, _. (11) And whats more, _. (12) Therefore, lets r
12、emember that _.推荐精选4.范文范文点评The impact of pesticides on public health and the environmentNowadays, wherever you go, you will find that the quality of many peoples lives has deteriorated in some respects because of technological progress. As is known to all, while towns and cities have become larger a
13、nd overcrowded due to the growing urban population, the countryside has also been affected by the large-scale use of pesticides. In a word, if urgent measures were not adopted to limit the use of pesticides, more and more people would become victims.There are plenty of contributing causes among whic
14、h, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. First, fruit and vegetables sprayed with chemicals may have some poisonous effect upon the people who eat them. Second, large use of pesticides will pollute the groundwater and surface water. And consequently, the people, domestic animals, fis
15、h, birds, plants and wildlife living in and using the water would be greatly endangered. And finally, the killing of insects by pesticides has resulted in a loss of balance in the ecology because insects, although a nuisance to farmers, provide food for birds首句通过deteriorate指出一个与人们生活密切相关的问题：在某些领域，科技进步恶化了人们的生活质量。使用连词while点出城市和农村的现存问题
