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1、宜兴市高中英语书面表达写作指导之漫画作文主讲人 陈良模Tasks:1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writingLead-in The characteristics of cartoon writing:幽默嘲讽(humorous, satirical)生动夸张(vivid , overstated)寓意深刻(thought-pr
2、ovoking)Task1. Difficulties in writing about cartoon: 1. 读图 2. 解意 3. 谋篇Step1 读图 Describe the picture -Lets practice! Picture1 Picture2Step2 解意 Theme-to the point 注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues), 切记要认真阅读!Example1 Example 2Picture1Lets have a practice: JPicture2Picture3Picture4Step 3 谋篇 Three parts:1) descr
3、ibe the picture2) interpret its meaning3) give your opinions about the phenomenonPart 1 Describe the pictureThe picture is talking about/showsThe picture shows a common phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.In the picture, there are/is (are) doingThe picture above is about Lets
4、 look at the picture above/first.Part 2 Interpret the pictureThe picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection ofThe picture indicates that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon thatThis is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon amongPart 3 Give your opinions I
5、think/believe that As far as Im concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view,It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./Immediate measures should be taken toThe government should make laws toThe media should appeal for We should raise peoples awareness ofEveryone shou
6、ld make great efforts toOnly in this way can.Enjoy this excellent personal point of view!In my view, this phenomenon is no good to us, nor to our society. Its time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same zone can be organized to have some activities together. We should ca
7、ll on people to be friendly to each other. As a popular song says, “ If everybody gives a little love to each other, the world will become the sea of love.” (step1 读图 picture1)From my point of view, reducing the childrens heavy burden requires efforts from the schools, the society as well as the par
8、ents. Education that breaks the rules of childrens development in body and mind is bound to fail. Thus, parents together with teachers should become active supporters of all-around character education and work closely with each other in guiding the students towards a balanced development. (step1 读图
9、picture2)Task2: Lets have a go at a whole essay! 上图反映的是网络时代父母子女间所出现的一种问题,你根据这幅漫画的理解写一篇150字左右短文,描述一下他们的做法并发表你的看法。Part1 描述图片Part2 找准寓意 Why do sb do sth? _ _Point out reasons: _ _Make comments: _ _Part 3 表达观点或对策: “情”方面的对策 _ “理”方面的对策 _“趣”方面的对策 _Task 3: Writing an essayStep1. When writing an essay, pleas
10、e remember 1.To use linking words if necessary表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not onlybut also.表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, though, otherwise, while表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand.表示因果关系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, th
11、anks to. 表示时间、顺序关系 first, second , then, next, finally, for one thing . for another, in the end,表示递进、强调关系besides, whats more, in addition, worse still, above all表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in
12、 conclusion2. To use complicated structures if possible (一) 使用非谓语动词(to do, doing, done)1.面对能源短缺,我们有必要合理有效使用能源。 _the lack of energy, we need to make use of energy properly and effectively. 2.一旦沉溺于网络世界,人们就很难专注于现实生活.Once _ to the Internet, people will find it hard to focus on the reality.3. 学生参加社会实践是为了了解社会,获取经验 _society and gain experience, students tend to take part in social practice.(二) 使用从句,包括定语从句,名词性从句, 状语从句1. Some boys learn to smoke. It does harm to their health. (改写为定语从句)_2. 我们应重视食品安全和自我保护意识。 (使用名词性从句)_3. He is crazy about computer games and fails in his study. (改写为结果状语)_(三) 使