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1、The Girl with Freckles on Her Face原原文文：When I was a kid about twelve years old,I had a lot of freckles.I had reached the age when I had begun to really look at myself in the mirror,and I was underwhelmed.Apparently my mother was too,because sometimes shed look at me and shake her head.I had a cousin
2、 whose name was Janette Elizabeth.She looked exactly like her name sounds.She had a flawless peaches-and-cream complexion.I couldnt help comparing myself with her and thinking that my life would be a lot different if I had beautiful skin too.And then,in the back pages of Janette Elizabeths magazine,
3、I found the answer:an advertisement for freckle-remover cream.I knew that I could afford it if I saved my money,and I did.The ad assuredme that the product would work well.For three weeks I went to the mailbox every day precisely at the time the mail was delivered.I knew that if someone else in my f
4、amily got the mail,I would never hear the end of it.There was no way that they would let me open the box in private.Three weeks later,my package finally came.I went to my room with it,sat on the edge of my bed,and opened it.I was sure that I was looking at a miracle.When I got up the next morning,I
5、applied the cream all over my body.Then I took my hoe and went with my brother and cousins to hoe the field,where I got rid of some tiger lilies,seemingly ugly with black and small spots.The sun was so strong that even my faces started to burn.By the end of the day,when I came back to the house,my f
6、amily,knowing nothing about the freckle-remover cream,began to say things like,“Ive never seen you with that many freckles before.When I saw myself in the mirror,I dissolved into tears and hid in the bathroom.一一、读Y o u c a n t h a v e p o e t r y a n d d i s t a n c e a t t h e s a m e t i m e,j u s
7、 t g o d o w n t o e a r t h a n d l i v e._具体时间具体时间或或when人人物物或或动动物物地点地点物品物品角色：角色：时间线时间线事件线事件线地点线地点线物品物品I，mom,my cousin-Elisabeth我有雀斑我有雀斑感觉失落感觉失落发现祛斑霜广告发现祛斑霜广告去等快递去等快递包裹到了包裹到了涂祛斑霜涂祛斑霜去锄地去锄地家人发现我很多斑家人发现我很多斑哭了，躲起来哭了，躲起来快递箱快递箱房间房间地里地里家里家里浴室浴室虎尾百合虎尾百合1212岁岁照镜子的时候照镜子的时候ThenThen三周三周三周后三周后第二天早上第二天早上ThenThe
8、n结束回家结束回家照镜子的时候照镜子的时候二、二、思思我对外貌不自信，除我对外貌不自信，除了雀斑，还有其他原了雀斑，还有其他原因么？因么？思路提示思路提示01思路提示思路提示03思路提示思路提示02续写的地点为什么会续写的地点为什么会从浴室转到房间？从浴室转到房间？妈妈的安慰妈妈的安慰起起作作用用了了么么？思路提示思路提示04第二段续写敲第二段续写敲门的人是谁？门的人是谁？ElisabethElisabeth有什么有什么作用？作用？思路提示思路提示05思路提示思路提示06为什么提及为什么提及虎尾百合？虎尾百合？所属所属类别类别识别识别问题问题解决解决途径途径问题问题解决解决人与自我（成长篇）人
9、与自我（成长篇）我因脸上有雀斑而沮丧，买祛我因脸上有雀斑而沮丧，买祛斑霜，斑更多了斑霜，斑更多了发现自己的闪光点，不再因外貌沮丧发现自己的闪光点，不再因外貌沮丧所属类别所属类别识别问题识别问题问题解决问题解决解决途径解决途径ElisabethElisabeth的安慰的安慰确定主题确定主题para.1My mother called me to the dinner table,but I ignored her.阶段结果阶段结果妈妈的安慰失妈妈的安慰失败，我从浴室败，我从浴室跑回房间跑回房间para.2After what seemed a century,I heard a gentle k
10、nock on my bedroom.确定故事大致走向确定故事大致走向阶段结果阶段结果我发现自己的我发现自己的闪光点，不再闪光点，不再为外貌沮丧为外貌沮丧确定每段具体情节确定每段具体情节 Para.1 Para.1发出者发出者与上情节衔接与上情节衔接动作动作情绪情绪微情节微情节1mom微情节微情节2mom微情节微情节3I微情节微情节4mom微情节微情节5I没有听到我的回应 not receiving any response from me来浴室查看我的情况checking on me焦急（加快脚步）quicken her pace anxiously看到我安然无恙in a whole ski
11、n询问发生的事情 ask me what was going on 松了口气breathed in relief听到询问流泪 streaming down，告知 uttered，涂 applied,出现 appeared更难过 like a hammer blow,tossing me into deeper sorrow安慰我 comforted me说话听不进turn a deaf to冲dashing toward 倒在床上 throwing myself in the bed情绪低落down in spirit确定每段具体情节确定每段具体情节 Para.2 Para.2发出者发出者与上
12、情节衔接与上情节衔接动作动作情绪情绪微情节微情节1I微情节微情节2Elisabeth微情节微情节3I微情节微情节4I犹豫了一会儿hesitating for a moment拖着步子去开shuffled across the room难过with tearful eyes and still wet cheeks在门后at the door拿着花，给我花，道歉 with a bunch of tiger lilies in her hand,handed the flowers to me,apologized 沉浸在悲伤中immersed myself in my depressed emo
13、tions听安慰 my devoted efforts while she pay attention to her skin惊讶 surprised me发现自己闪光点shining points in me有斑点却芬芳dotted with ugly“freckles”,smell fragrant01 02根据所给范文的中文进行翻译三、写三、写没没有有得得到到我我的的回回答答，她她焦焦急急地地加加快快脚脚步步走走向向浴浴室室，查查看看我我的的情情况况。看看到到我我安安然然无无恙恙，她她松松了了一一口口气气，问问我我发发生生了了什什么么事事。她她的的话话就就像像一一记记重重锤锤，把把我我扔
14、扔进进更更深深的的悲悲伤伤中中。我我泪泪流流满满面面，用用受受伤伤的的语语气气说说:我我在在脸脸上上涂涂了了去去斑斑霜霜，脸脸上上的的雀雀斑斑越越来来越越多多了了。了了解解我我的的情情况况后后，她她安安慰慰我我说说:“:“十十几几岁岁的的女女孩孩脸脸上上的的雀雀斑斑比比平平时时多多，这这很很正正常常，亲亲爱爱的的，我我在在你你这这个个年年纪纪的的时时候候也也是是如如此此!”!”情情绪绪低低落落的的我我对对妈妈妈妈的的话充耳不闻，冲进卧室，一头倒在床上。话充耳不闻，冲进卧室，一头倒在床上。Not receiving any response from me,she quickened her p
15、ace anxiously to the bathroom,checking on me.Seeing me in a whole skin,she breathed in relief and asked me what was going on.Her words seemed like a hammer blow,tossing me into deeper sorrow.Tears streaming down,I uttered in injured tones that I applied the freckle-remover cream on my face and freck
16、les appeared on my face more and more.Knowing my situation,she comforted me,“It is normal that teen girls have more freckles on their faces than usual,So do I at your time,honey!”Down in spirit,I turned a deaf ear to what my mom said,dashing towards my bedroom and throwing myself into the bed.我我犹犹豫豫了了一一会会儿儿，泪泪眼眼婆婆娑娑，两两颊颊湿湿漉漉漉漉地地拖拖着着步步子子去去打打开开房房门门。美美丽丽的的伊伊丽丽莎莎白白站站在在门门口口，手手里里拿拿着着一一束束虎虎百百合合花花。她她发发现现我我对对她她的的到到来来漠漠不不关关心心，就就把把百百合合花花递递给给我我，并并为为我我的的“意意外外”道道歉歉。正正当当我我还还沉沉浸浸在在压压抑抑的的情情绪绪中中时时，伊伊丽丽莎莎白白接接下下来来说
