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1、读后续写高分作文的写作方法指导（以衡水中学四月联考英语作文为例）2020江苏省丰县中学上课讲义正文指导版本一：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Theceilingofthickbranchesshutouttheskyandcoveredthepathindarkness.Janelookedaroundblankly,ashiverofalarmgoingthroughher.Soonthefullmoonrose,large,r
2、oundandclear,shininginthedeepblue.“WhynotpickstonesfromthestreamandmakethemintheformofSOS?”criedJaneexcitedly,determinedtosaveherselfindependently.Havingfinishedit,shefeltsoexhaustedandsleptbesidethestones.Tomorrowwillbeanotherday.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Birdswerechirping,thebranchesswayingtothe
3、rhythmofthewind,andtheleavesflutteringlikegracefulbutterflies.Arayofhoperosenaturallyinherheart.Suddenly,thebuzzingofthehelicoptercameoverheadagain.ItdidsawherwavingyellowblouseandmostimportanttheSOS.Uponitslanding,sothrilledwasshethatshethrewherselfatTomandhuggedhimtightly,tearsofjoywellingupinthei
4、reyes.“Imissyousomuch.Haveyoufoundthespot?”“Yes,inourheart.”版本二：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Thetreescrackedandgroanedinthedark.AthrillofalarmcamethroughJane.Eventually,shedeterminedonspottinganopenarea,awaitinganotherhelicopter.Shestumbledherwaythroughthehorribleforestsandclimbe
5、dtoahighplace.Notimetowaste.Aftersheflaggedheryellowblouse,Janesanktotheground,anguishedanddefeated.Gazingatthesky,JanerecalledTomandtearsblurredhereyes.Terrifiedasshewas,shefellfastasleepinthewild.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.And,asluckwouldhaveit,ahelicopterjustcameby!Janeyelledandskipped,wavingher
6、yellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopternoticedherandlanded.WhatastoundedhermostwasthatitwasTomwhosatinthehelicopter!OutrushedTom.AhugesmilespreadacrossJanesfaceandthecouplehuggedtightlyforalongtime.ItwasthenarrowescapethatmadeJaneperceivethatlovewaspriceless.Overthenextyears,achangecameoverthecoupl
7、e.Reasoneddiscussionreplacedfierceargumentsandpolitenessreplacedcontrariness.Theytreasuredthelifeandlovemore.结论是：1.首先要找到conflict在哪里，然后最多五句话说清楚solution。解决方案不包括心情和环境描写。第一篇昨天文章里已经分析过，下面只说第二篇：Solution:Shestumbledherwaythroughthehorribleforestsandclimbedtoahighplace.ahelicopterjustcameby.OutrushedTom.看起来
8、就非常简单，无非就是：找空地失败；天亮飞机又来了；夫妇重逢。2.其次围绕solution，进行心情和环境描写的铺垫，以上两篇都是非常好的例子。第一篇昨天已经分析过，第二篇的分析：第一段：环境描写烘托恐惧：Thetreescrackedandgroanedinthedark.AthrillofalarmcamethroughJane.心情描写：Janesanktotheground,anguishedanddefeated.Gazingatthesky,JanerecalledTomandtearsblurredhereyes.Terrifiedasshewas,shefellfastaslee
9、pinthewild.第二段：心情描写：AhugesmilespreadacrossJanesfaceandthecouplehuggedtightlyforalongtime.但这篇的结尾太多的议论不合适，需要大胆舍弃部分，这样也不会超出太多的字数。实战：（衡水中学四月联考卷）Paragraph1:OntheChristmaseve,Cathrynreceivedacall,whichsaidtoreturnthepettoherattheparkgate.Praagraph2:JustthenMaryrecognizedthethiefwasherboyfriend.写作指导一、情节构思：
10、Conflict-Solution本文的conflict:findthethief;howtotreathim，而solution就要分两种：forgiveornottoforgive?无论选择哪种solution，都要用最简洁的3-5句话：1.Mary陪Cathryn去。2.小偷出现。3.他们走上前去。4.小偷解释。（小偷为什么这样做？联系breakup，同时一定要注意开头weakdog）5.Mary回复（是原谅还是让他去警局解释，这就要表现表现Mary的性格了，刚正不阿还是温柔善良）。二、细节铺垫：心情描写、环境描写（Cathryn接到电话后的兴奋；Mary的怀疑，这里要表现她的性格特征，
11、为下文回答铺垫）1.Mary陪Cathryn去。（公园门口的环境描写：阴沉）2.小偷出现。（小偷胆怯害怕；认出小偷后Cathryn的愤怒）3.他们走上前去。（直面小偷的愤怒）4.小偷解释（挽回爱情，把狗治好）5.Mary回复（照应开头她的性格）具体过程：第一段：激动怀疑环境描写Action-Response第二段：跑过去Action-ResAfeelingofexcitementranthroughherbody,herheartthumpingfiercelyandthephonefallingtothegroundwithaloudbang.Butwithacloudofsuspicion
12、hangingoverher,Marycouldntstandanycrimeanddecidedtoaccompanyhermomtothepark.Athickmistenvelopedtheparkwithdeadleavesflutteringslowlyintheair.Suddenly,ayoungmancameintosightwholookedaroundcarefullyandtiptoedtothegate,acutedogtheirLabradoodleinhisarms.“Hewastheverymalethatday.”Cathrynblurtedoutinanger.
