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1、文档供参考，可复制、编制，期待您的好评与关注！ 2013高考英语（书面表达）限时训练（7）谈获得高分的高考英语书面表达第二节 书面表达（满分25分）请你根据以下图表和提示写一篇关于我国手机拥有量变化的报道，并阐述手机给人们生活带来的利和弊。1. 方便，可以随时随地互相了解；2. 许多功能满足不同要求，如发短信，上网等。3. 有时接到打错了的电话并为之付费；4. 电磁中辐射有害健康；注意：1. 100字左右2. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数3. 参考词汇：短信short message 上网surf the Internet 电磁辐射radiation As can be seen from t
2、he chart , great changes have been taking place in the ownership of mobile phones in China . As can be seen from the chart , great changes have been taking place in the ownership of mobile phones in China .At the end of 2002 , there were 20 million mobile phones . By year 2005 , the number will reac
3、h up to 30 million .People have found mobile phones very convenient . They can get in touch with each other whenever and wherever they like . There are many different functions for different needs , such as sending short messages and surfing the internet . However it may also bring us some trouble .
4、 For example , you will have to pay for a wrong number and the radiation from the phone may do harm to our health. In spite of this , the number of people having mobile phones is still increasing steadily .*结束 新颁行的普通高中英语课程标准(实验稿)明确指出,写作教学的目的是通过对学生激活灵感、激发兴趣、整理思路、组织素材、规划结构、遣词造句等基本写作技能的培养,使他们能表达事实、观点、情
5、感、想象力、交流信息,培养规范的写作习惯.。与以往的英语教学大纲中规定的能在日常生活中,写简单的书信和通知,书写格式和行文,以及词语无严重错误的要求相比,新课程标准规定的写作要求提高了一个新的层次,更加突出了对谋篇布局,遣词造句,情感表达的要求。本文依据新课程标准对写作提出的新要求,并结合实际经验,谈谈获得高分的高考英语书面表达五大特性:一、条理性条理性是指要合理布局文章结构,首先,在文章思路、组织材料、叙述顺序等方面要有一定的条理性。例如:题目要求写一篇叙述文,可以按照事情发展的先后顺序来写,若介绍某一场所,可按照空间顺序来安排行文顺序;若是一篇议论文,就应该按照所议论观点顺序来安排结构。全
6、文结构应注意首尾呼应,前后相联。其次,根据需要安排好段落,各段之间要层次分明,每一段落的开头和结尾也要重视,开头语往往是总起句,结尾往往是总结句。例如:2001年高考英语书面表达范文:Dear Dick,How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce the learning load. I dont know a
7、bout others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time, I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. Wha
8、ts more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.Li Hua二、准确性准确性是指要求写出语法正确的句子,包括时态、语态、用词和句法等,但是不少考生由于受汉语思维习惯的影响,在写作时自觉不自觉地产生不规范的表达。要做到准确、地道地表达文章,首先必须要牢记掌握一些常用句型或习惯表达,避免中文式英语,在实践中不断总结中英表达差异,养成用英语思维写作的习惯。试体会下面句子汉英表达上的差异。(1)我等待着你的到来。错误或失误:Im wait
9、ing for you to come.修改意见:Im looking forward to your arrival.(2)现在我详细地给你介绍屋子的情况。错误或失误:Now I am going to introduce the room to you carefully.修改意见:Now I am going to give you a detailed description of the room.(3)工人们热烈欢迎我们来参观农场。错误或失误:The worker welcomed us to visit the farm.修改意见:The worker gave us a war
10、m welcome.(N其次,要多读多背,在精读中汲取营养,对于好的句子最好背诵下来,适时用于写作训练中。其中,英语中的一些常识性语句就是非常典型的背诵材料。如:在写通知时,开头语:Attention, please. / May I have your attention, please? / Ill have an announcement to make.结尾语:Dont forget the time and the address. / Im sure youll have a lot of fun. / Thats all, thank you.在写参观欢迎词时,开头语:Welco
11、me to our city. / Now let me tell you something about our school.结尾语:Im sure youll have a good trip. Thats all. Thank you.写信时,开头语:I am glad to hear from you. / Im writing to tell you somethingabout. / How are you getting along with your studies? / I really dont know how to thank you for your.结尾语:Ple
12、ase give my best regards to. / Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. / Remember me to your parents等。正确牢记这些惯用语,无疑可以增添句子表达的准确性,减少不必要的错误,从而提高书面表达的档次。三、流畅性流畅性是指根据整篇文章意思的需要,有效采用不同的连接手段,以使文章层次清晰,行文连贯。关联词就是常用的连接手段之一:1.表示平行、对等或选择关系and, both.and, as well as, neither. nor, also, not only.but also2.表示转折
13、关系but, yet, however, nevertheless, in spite of, although, otherwise, while3.表示对比关系on the contrary, instead of, on the other hand, just like, unlike4.表示因果关系so, for, therefore, as a result, because, owing to, due to, thanks to, on account of5.表示时间、顺序关系shortly after, first, second., then, next, finally
14、, for one thing, for another thing, in the end, eventually6.表示递进、强调关系besides, furthermore, whats more, in addition, moreover, worse still, above all, to make matters worse7.表示解释、说明关系namely, actually, such as, for example, instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to this8.表示结论in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole这些关联词的恰当使用无疑能使全文过渡自然,令读者对后续的句子产生心理的期待和准备,增强句子间的逻辑性和紧凑性四、简洁多样性
