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1、怎样用英文给老师写感谢信 本期题目在初中三年的学习生活中，你一定碰到过很多老师，现在请你选择其中对你帮助最大的一位老师，给她(她)写一封感谢信，谈谈你对她(她)的印象，回想一下她(她)是怎么帮助你的，并表示你对她(她)的祝福。信的开头和落款已给出，不计词数。提醒词：kind, help, encourage, thanks, hope写作指导本题要求我们给对自己帮助最大的老师写一封感谢信，因为是自己亲身经历的，又是写给自己的老师，同学们一定有千言万语要对她(她)说。在情真意切的同时，我们还要格外注意文章的详略和条理。经过审题，我们能够获知：1. 文章的专题：感谢师恩2. 文章的关键点：对老师的
2、感谢之情，对老师的印象，回想老师的帮助，并表示祝福。3. 文章的体裁：书信4. 文章的人称：you, i5. 文章的时态：因为是回想，因此以通常过去时为主。同学们先把相关短语和词汇整理一下：1. 描写老师的形容词有哪些呢?kind, nice, selfless, patient, easygoing, responsible, be strict with2. 有哪些单词和短语能够表示老师对自己的帮助呢?help me with my english/ maths, explainto me patiently,encourage me never to give up, praise me
3、 when i make progress, have a talk with me, take me to the hospital when i am ill, tell me some good ways to learn接下来，我们看看怎样表示对老师的感谢和祝福吧。1. i want to say thanks/thank you.2. i owe my progress/success to your help.3. i owe you a lot for your help/what youve done for me.4. ill never forget your help a
4、nd i will remember all the happy times we shared together.5. i hope you can be happy/healthy, forever.6. i wish you good luck/health!一般作文dear miss wang:im glad to write to you.you are such a kind and easygoing teacher that we all like you. i remember that at first i hated learning new english words
5、very much and i even wanted to give up. when you noticed this, you had a talk with me. you told me some good ways to remember those words andencouraged me never to give up. ive made great progress in english and now im a top student in english.i want to say thanks. i will work harder in the future.
6、i hope you can be happy and healthy forever.yours,linda点评：本文信息点齐全，层次比较清楚，语言比较通顺，句式也有一定的改变。作者首先用一个sothat 句式将老师随和、善良的特点勾勒出来，接下往返忆了老师是怎样在自己当初因讨厌背单词而想放弃学英语时对自己无私的帮助。结尾处，对于老师的感谢和祝福也就水到渠成，感情真挚、自然。 当然，文章的连贯和语言优化方面也还是能够深入改善的。满分dear miss wang,im glad to write to you. at this moment, words can no longer expre
7、ss my feelings.how kind and responsible can a teacher be? you just gave me the perfect answer. i can clearly remember how much i hated learning new english words at first. to be honest, i really wanted to give up. as soon as you noticed this, you offered to help me by telling me some shortcuts to le
8、arn them. you never failed to encourage me even when i made only a little progress. little by little, my interest in english grew and now im a top student in english.i want to say thanks to you. i will work harder in the future to live up to your expectations. i hope you can be happy and healthy for
9、ever.yoursxiaoming点评：这篇修改后的作文不论在语言表示和文章内涵方面全部是相当优异的。 首先，开头at this moment, words can no longer express myfeelings. 短短的一句话便把作者此时的激动和对老师的感激之情表示得很充足。第二段首句的设问句how kind and responsible can a teacher be? 更是出色。在描写自己起初对英语单词的厌烦时，作者用了一个how 所引导的宾语从句替换原文的一般句式。文章的多个过渡语也是恰到好处: to be honest, little by little等，均在一定程度上增强了文章的连贯性。另外，多个表示法也相当地道、出彩，比如用 live up to ones expectations (不辜负某人的期望)表示自己的决心，使得整篇文章的感情愈加饱满、真挚，给人留下了深刻的印象。
