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1、读后续写：一次难忘的远足 台州三地三模6月（原创 课件）感谢本期分享者：罗丽梅老师（市网络三项评比一等奖；省教育协会微 课一等奖；多次开设市级公开课等）本文主要讲了一个热爱远足的父亲 Mr. Taylor满怀期待地和两个儿子 Joel和Harry 一起徒步旅行的故事。旅途一开始两个孩子一直在争吵， 错过了沿途的风景，也没注意沿途的路线。父亲正要教训他们的时候， 不小心被草根绊倒摔进了河里。所幸他只受了轻伤，却因此丢了眼镜。不难预测，父子三人克服困难，重新上路，并开始享受这次旅途。由于前文内容简单，课上处理较快，本节课主要侧重段首句处的衔接以 及续写语料方面的指导。本节课的特色：1精心挑选语料：
2、素材很多来自于教材，引导学生回归教材；2精心挑选来源小说心理描写和环境描写的多种写作素材；3提供了心理描写的写作思路，便于学生仿写。简要教学步骤：1呈现原文和段首句，合理预测故事情节；2根据相关情节，补充语料； 3根据本文故事，适当改写语言。 题目： 三地联考 台州新昌乐清2020/6/18 第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Mr. Taylor checked again: water, food, bandage, medicines, acompass,and a map wrapped in plastic . Bingo! He
3、put all that he prepared for thecoming hiking into his backpack.Mr. Taylor was fond of hiking, this time in particular, for it was the firsttime for him to hike with his two sons, Harry and Joel. Joelliked reading books about explorers and Harry joined the hiking club in hisschoolthis term. It will
4、bean unforgettableexperience,definitely. he whispered to himself,unconsciously a smile spreading over his face.Harry and Joel, however, argued for the first three miles of their hiking trip.Harry accused Joel of wearing smelly old shoes. Joelblamed Harry forusing all of the bug spray（喷雾防虫剂）.Harrytol
5、d Joel hesmelled terrible , Joel called Harry a coward（ 懦夫）.Will the two of you just quiet down and enjoy our hike together?theirfather said. “Youre missing all of the beautiful scenery! “It was true. Neither Joel nor Harry hadtaken notice of the bear their father had spied at the start of their tri
6、p.They hadnt looked up at the eagle he pointed out overhead. Worst of all, they hadntpaid any attention to the turns and twists along the way while they continuedtheir argument.“Joel threw a stick at me! Harry screamed.“Thats not true! Joel shouted back.Mr. Taylor could no longer contain his anger.
7、And both of you need to stoparguing! he erupted. As he turned to face them, his left foot caughton a root. He slipped backward and down muddy bank, falling into the riverthat ran alongside the path.Harry and Joel raced to their fathersassistance. They helped him up out of the water, and then dragged
8、 his wet backpackup onto land.Fortunately, their wet-through father found himself just slightly injured.注意1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:But his glasses came off when he fell in the water.Paragraph 2“Just calm down. “Mr. Taylor
9、shouted, Without my glasses, we need to worktogether to find our way. 配套课件：有动画有覆盖An unforgettable hike台州三模续写罗丽梅松阳县第一中学Mr Taylor checked again: water, food, bandage, medicines, a compass, and a man wrapped in plastic. Bingo! He put all that he prepared for the coming hiking into his backpack.Mr. Tayl
10、or was fond of hiking, this time in particular, for it was the first time for him to hike with his two sons, Harry and Joel. Joel liked reading books about explorers and Harry joined the hiking club in his school this term. It will be an unforgettable experience, definitely. he whispered to himself,
11、 unconsciously a smile spreading over his face.Harry and Joel, however, argued for the first three miles of their hiking trip. Harry accused Joel of wearing smelly old shoes. Joel blamed Harry for using all of the bug spray（喷雾防虫剂）.Harry told Joel he smelled terrible, Joel called Harry a coward（懦夫j.W
12、ill the two of you just quiet down and enjoy our hike together? their father said. Youre missing all of the beautifulscenery!It was true. Neither Joel nor Harry had taken notice of the bear their father had spied at the start of their trip. They hadnt looked up at the eagle he pointed out overhead.
13、Worst of all, they hadnt paid any attention to the turns and twists along the way while they continued their argument.“Joel threw a stick at me!” Harry screamed.“Thats not true! Joel shouted back.Mr. Taylor could no longer contain his anger. And both of you need to stop arguing! he erupted. As he tu
14、rned to face them, his left foot caught on a root. He slipped backward and down muddy bank, falling into the river that ran alongside the path.Harry and Joel raced to their fathers assistance. They helped him up out of the water, and then dragged his wet backpack up onto land.Fortunately, their wet-
15、through father found himself just slightly injured.Predict the plot -1Paragraph 1:ButViis glasses came off when he fell in the water. problemMr. Taylor: couldnt see clearly = no one guided the wayJoel & Harry : couldnt calm down = panicked?Argued again?、.n /further problemParagraph 2: /rJustcalm dow
16、n Taylor shouted, nWithout my glasses, we need to work together to find our way/Predict the plot-2Paragraph 2:Just calm down. Ms. Taylor shouted, Without my glasses, we need to work together to find our way.Using the compass and the map guiding the way and working together, Joel and Harry managed to find their way.
