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1、中考写作话题1校园生活( School life)重要性时态1.Tom的宠物狗已经死了5天了。( have been)(2017宝山一模, 37）_2.一下飞机，所有旅客就会被直接带到酒店。( as soon as)(2016徐汇一模, 38)_3. 因为我有事情要告诉他，我会等到他回来。( until)(2016虹口一模, 35)_4. 直到昨天在瑜伽俱乐部碰面，我才认识这位新同学。（not. until）(2016奉贤二模, 42)_5. 这个运动员正在跑1500米时，突然摔倒了。（while）(2016松江二模, 38)_（考题关联）2016中考真题- Im ready2014中考真题-
2、 This time next year2017浦东二模- I want to be a/an in group work2017普陀二模- Our last class meeting in junior high school2016宝山一模- School uniforms2016嘉定一模- How to celebrate graduation2016长宁、金山二模- Students should not work too hard2015浦东一模- I get from my class life2015崇明一模- Changes in my school请预览后下载！2015虹口
3、一模- My last winter holiday in junior middle school2015金山一模- One problem/ question I met in my English study2014闵行一模- A happy memory in my junior high school2014静安、青浦一模- A suggestion letter to my dear school2014普陀二模- The thing Id like to do most after the entrance examination（真题再现）Write a passage of
4、at least 60 words on the topicChanges in my school.(以学校发生的变化为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a reference。(以下提示仅供参考)What changes have taken place in your school?What do you think of these changes?(注意：文中不得出现任何姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)(2015崇明一模)审(Read)的：简开从作文标题“Changes in my school”中可得知
5、，主要的写作内容应为校园的变化，再根据题干中所给提示：1 .What changes have taken place in your school? 2. What do you think of these changes?可将书写方向定为：1. 校园发生的变化是？2. 我对这些变化的看法是. 然而，写到这里，我们会发现题干中并没有之前所预想的第三点提示，在这种情况下，则要按照传统写作的三大段模式，自行附加结尾，即：3. 对校园生活进行总结提出期望。写( Write)根据之前所讲写作步骤：作文题目一写作框架一添加素材一初稿，初稿作文题目请预览后下载！素材写作框架开篇 中间 结尾 即可进行如
6、下书写步骤的拆解：开篇：The changes have taken place in my school are.中间：I think the changes are.结尾：In conclusion./ I hope my school.1. What changes have taken place in your school?2. What do you think of these changes?3. Conclusion. /Hope.接下来，我们需要思考，涉及到校园生活类话题时，可以应用多少词汇及句式，才会使文章的内容变得更加丰富。可用素材词汇大搜罗名词：1. environ
7、ment(495) 2. health(700) 3. knowledge(836) 4. life(868)5. part(1087) 6. playground(1140) 7. rubbish(1295) 8. school(1318)9. student(1464) 10. teacher(1506)11. thing(1513) 12. time(1546)13. year(1713)动词：1. believe(146) 2. can(224) 3. feel(555) 4. have(659)5.grow(673) 6. help(709) 7. love(896) 8. make
8、(912) 9.pollute(1157) 10. protect)1202)11.say(1316)12.see(1334)13. spend(1430) 14. talk(1497) 15. teach(1505) 16. worry(1705)形容词请预览后下载！1. bad(113) 2. better(154) 3. clean(258) 4. great(667)5.important(763) 6. long(889)副词1. everywhere(509) 2. much(980)3. seriously(1346) 4. usually(1616)连接词及短语大搜罗表时间wh
9、en, while, as表转折but, yet, however表因果so, therefore, as a result常见句型大搜罗1. When we, we, 当我们.，我们.2. We all believe that我们都相信3. In recent years,.在最近几年里4. As we know, 众所周知，.5. As students, 作为学生，.运用以上单词、连接词以及句式，就可以在已写出的文章框架(开篇、中间结尾)的中心句的基础上，添加必要的写作素材，从而形成文章的初稿，如下：初稿：Changes in my schoolWhen we talk about o
10、ur school, we usually have a lot to say, including the teachers, the students and so on We all believe that the school is an important part in our life. It teaches us knowledge and helps us grow up. We love it so much. However, in recent years, the environment there has been seriously polluted, and
11、we feel worried. We could see the clean playground in the past, but now it becomes a “new” one with rubbish everywhere. As we know, the polluted environment is bad for our health. Therefore, we must do something before things get worse. As students,we spend longer time at school. So, love our school
12、 and protect the environment to make it a better one.到此为止，评分标准中的第一个8分已收入囊中，但切勿忘记，考题除了对文章的结构和内容有要求外，文采及语法也分别占有很大的分值比重。为了避免解决文采问题后再产生新的语法错误，故接下来先要进行文章的美化，即包装句式，详情如下：请预览后下载！美( beautify)根据之前所讲的写作步骤：初稿一包装句子Step 2包装句子初稿在进行此步骤前，需要仔细阅读初稿中的每句句子，按照开篇中所讲美化文章的要点，则可发现，文章在句式方面出现了如下问题：初稿：Changes in my school1.When
13、 we talk about our school, we usually have a lot to say, including the teachers, the students and so on. 2. We all believe that the school is an important part in our life. 3.It teaches us knowledge and helps us grow up. 4.We love it so much. However, in recent years, the environment there has been
14、seriously polluted, 5.and we feel worried. 6.We could see the clean playground in the past, but now it becomes a “new” one with rubbish everywhere. As we know, the polluted environment 7.is bad for our health. Therefore,8. we must do something before things get worse. As students,9.we spend longer time
