2022北京高考英语作文范文:情景作文 作文题目 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元 注意:1.词数:100左右: 2.参考词汇:房租Tent(n.)范文一:DearBob, I"mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter,andI"mgladtohearthatyouwillgotoChinatolearnChinesehere.Ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.ItisonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyouthere,anditisonestopbeforetheChineseSchool.Theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms,oneofwhichisbedroom,theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.Thereareabed,asofa,adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallfiat,andtherentis500yuanpermonth.Maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwish,butI"lltrymybesttomeetyourneeds.Ifitisnotsuitableenough,writetomeandIwilllookforanotherbetterplace. Hopeyouwilleheresoon! Allthebest! Yours, LiHua 总分值理由:本文格式正确,意思表述完好,行文流畅自然。
作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以which,"引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次清楚,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作范文二:DearBob, WeletoChina!Youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou. IhavefoundanapartmentonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorandthere"rethreeroomsinit:abedroom,akitchen,andabathroom.Thereisabed,asofa,adeskandachairinthebedroom.Thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth. Alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.JusttaketheNo.11busatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast,willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive?ThenI"Ubeabletomeetyouattheairport, seeyou. Bestwishes! Yours, LiHua范文三: 总分值理由:本文格式正确,内容完好,表述清楚,衔接严密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。
DearBob, Howareyouthesedays? I"msogladtoknowthatyou"lletoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.NowI"vefoundonewhichIthinkisprettygood.TheplaceisonFangCaoStreetwhichisneartheNo.11busstop.It"sjustonestopawayfromJianxinChineseSchool. Therearethreerooms,akitchen,abathroomandabedroom.Thoughitisnotverybig,only25squaremetres,Ithinkitissuitable.Bytheway,therentis500yuanpermonth.Ihopeyou"lllikeit.Ifnot,I"lltrytofindanotherplaceforyou. Yours, LiHua 总分值理由:本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。
由外及内,层次清楚,错落有致同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再篇构造完好,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备范文四:DearBob, I"msogladthatyouareingtolearnChinesehere.I"vealreadyfoundyouahousenearourschool.I"dliketotellyousomethingaboutit. YoumaygetonNo.llbusatFangCaoStreetandthenextstopisjustJianXinChineseSchool.Thehouseisneartheschool.Itisabout25squaremetres.Inthebedroom,thereisabed,asofastandingagainstthewallandatablenearthewindow.Youmayfindalightonthetableandachairnexttoit.Therearetwootherroomsconnectingthebedroom.Theleftoneisabathroomandtherightoneisakitchen.Soyoumaycookbyyourself.Therentforthehouseis500yuanpermonth. Hopeyou"llenjoystayinghere! Yours, LiHua 总分值理由:本文内容详细,详略得当,表述方式很有创造力和新意,长短句并用,语言构造富于变化,错落有致,顺畅圆润,尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到,为文章增色不少。
范文五:DearBob, I"mgladtohearfromyou. Weletoourcityinseptember.I"vefoundasuitablehouseforyou. ThehouseisonFangCaoStreet,notfarfromtheJianxinChineseSchool.IfyoutaketheNo.11bus,itisjustonestop. Itisaflatonthethirdfloorofabuilding.Ithasthreerooms,aliving-room,abathroomandakitchen.Youcancookyourself.Themirror,thebasinandthebathtubareveryconvenientforyou.Intheliving-room,thereisabed,asofaandadeskwithchair.Thedeskisnexttothewindow.Itwillbegoodforstudy.Thetotalsizeis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanamonth. Willyoubesatisfiedwiththisflat,oryouwantanotherone?Justletmeknow.I"lltrymybesttohelpyou. Yours, LiHua 总分值理由:本文内容详实,描绘详细细腻,用词适当准确,如suitablehouse、notfarfrom""等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。