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1、5 5RevisionRevisionA0 What did we learn last class?encyclopaediasdinosaurDiogenesDisneylandABEDGFHCMay,a student from Rose Garden School,would like to take part in the writing competition with the following storydinosaurDiogenesDisneylandabout a boy called Sammy._ _ _ _ _ _ _ADCFEGBH17526483May,a st
2、udent from Rose Garden School would like to take part in the writing competition with the following story about a boy called Sammy.Who？How?What?When/Where?Why?Tense?simple past tenseSammy a dinosaur Diogenes a boss?a manager?in DisneylandWho？How?What?When/Where?Why?simple past tenseclimbed a moutain
3、went for a walkfound an eggbrokeclimbed out ofate lots of foodgrew bigPart 1stared at1.climb the moutain,.go for a walk2.find and egg3.break,.climb out of.,stare at4.eat lots of food,.grow bigbasic details(who,what)descriptive details(when,where)(how,why)One day,with a walking stickin the cave,surpr
4、isedlovely/small,excited/happycome back to.a large amount of,3 times as big as,worriedPart 1Sammy asked a newspaper for help.on the table near the window to.However,.Who？How?What?When/Where?Why?simple past tenseread Daily Newsknew.made a phone call to.told Sammy.got a chequehad a dreamtold/taught.Pa
5、rt 25.read Daily News and know.6.make a phone call to.,.tell.7.get a cheque8.have a dream,.tell.9basic details(who,what)descriptive details(when,where)(how,why)Part 2Why did the man call Sammy and give him a cheque?How did Sammy feel then?When and where did Diogenes have a talk with Sammy what did h
6、e tell Sammy？What did Sammy do with the money and why did he do so?.because.(reason).in order to.(purpose)(feelings)(time,places)(.)1.climb the moutain,.go for a walk2.find and egg3.break,climb out of,stare at4.eat lots of food,.grow bigbasic details(who,what)descriptive detailswith a walking sticki
7、n the cave,lovely/small,excited/happycome back to.3 times as big as,Sammy asked a newspaper for help.a large amount of,surprised(when,where)(how,why)worried5.read Daily News and know.6.make a phone call to.,.tell.7.get a cheque8.have a dream,.tell.9 in order to.(purpose).because.(reason)(feelings)(t
8、ime,places).However,.What did Sammy do with the money and why did he do so?Evaluation table(写作评价表写作评价表)Evaluation aspects(评价方面)scores0-3 clear structure of your writing (beginning,body,ending)0-3with three words:dinosaur Diogenes Disneyland0-4correct usage of transitional words(能正确，恰当使用过渡词表达句意能正确，恰当使用过渡词表达句意)0-1correct usage of tense 0-1correct grammar and no spelling mistakesTotal scoreHomework1.Finish the exercise on Page 842.Improve the short story and complete it on Book 4Thank you
