《2023年英语写作技巧》由会员分享,可在线阅读,更多相关《2023年英语写作技巧(21页珍藏版)》请在金锄头文库上搜索。
1、英语写作技巧W(what);H(how);O(organization)第一、考研写作总论第二、词句基本功第三、短文写作篇第四、应用文写作篇考研写作总论1、命题要求2、评分标准小作文(100-120)大作文(160-200)考人和物之间的关系内容:审题结构:篇章框架和行文思路(描图,阐明涵义,评论)一少,二三长;头尾短,中间长语言:词句基本功描图时用现在时散句变主从将几个简短的陈述句合为一个主从复合句散句变主分保持乐观精神,沿着通向成功的道路前进,你肯定会成功的Be optimistic, proceed along the way towards success, (go forward a
2、long the way to success) and you will get there.(you will surely to make it)Keeping optimistic, and going forward.,you will surly to make it.分词 主语一致I do some shopping and I pay for the bill.I do some shopping ,paying for the bill.My GF., with me paying for the bill.A majority of graduates are gradua
3、ting(stepping into the society) soon, facing a variety of options.With a variety of options lying in front of them.一个句子做主体句,其余句子中的谓语动词变为分词,主动时用现在动词,被动词用过去分词。特殊一次不定式,经常普遍动名词Sp.主动进行 p.p被动完成Being done进行被动Done 现在完成增加修饰语Two disabled men each with one leg ,helping each other, are running forward quickly a
4、nd steadily , with their crutches being left behind them.散句,主从句,改土鳖词,加修饰语。每周两篇,每篇三稿,散句,合并同时词汇升级,增加修饰语左二又六黄金法则:定语1限定词,2单个形容词 中心名词1形容词性短语、2介词短语、3不定式,动名词、4分词、5 定从、6同从The four children are playing a special football game, kicking their aging father like a ball.The four children are playing a special foo
5、tball game, with their aging father crouching like a ball.Two men are seeing the beautiful scenes /sitting in a boat, throwing the rubbish randomly into the lake.Two men are seeing the beautiful scenes /sitting in a boat, with the rubbish being thrown randomly into the lake.Raft 竹筏基本功-句错误归纳谓语动词错误主谓不
6、一致ChinglishMilk 挤牛奶I am tied up tomorrow. 明天很忙The price is just right.价钱合适短文写作篇审题谋篇 (35-40)5min:审题构思;30min:行文;2-3min:检查审图片-得出主题1、抓住图片中的核心元素,忽略次要元素2、借助中文,分析各元素的比喻内涵,判定图片基调3、如果是双图组合,注意是对立还是一致审要求-段落框架负向:alarming ironic sarcastic正向:Encouraging instructive Directions Describe the drawing briefly.Explain
7、its intended meaning,and support your view with an example/give your comments.行文第一段第一层:总体描述 粗线条框架句(包含一个形容词基调)+描图素颜句(图片内容概括)Depicted in the 基调词 picture is /are图片内容概括(核心元素+后置定语)Depicted in the instructive picture are the two disabled men running forward together.As is depicted in this instructive pict
8、ure, +句子第二层:细节描述动作事情发生的状态,程度,方式等用散句变主分第三层:略微引向主题What the picture describes is really thought-provoking.就图写图(心理活动),借助中文 源于主题,又高于主题,带有普世价值的论点。Apparently, they are all reluctant to support their poor aging father.Apparently, the disabled men are benefit a lot from cooperation.Depicted in the ironic pic
9、ture is a boat floating on the lake./are two tourists enjoying their journey in a boat.The two men are sitting in a boat , with the rubbish being thrown into the lake randomly. Apparently/evidently, the phenomenon reflects the serious pollution of the environment.Their misdeed leads to the environme
10、ntal pollution.第二段:第一层:点明社会寓意常用句型The symbolic meaning of the picture/ The purpose of the drawing /is to show us importance should be attached to /due attention should be paid to +包含主题词的名词短语The picture illustrates the real meaning of+主题词的名词短语,by stressing the fact that(这幅画通过强调。这一事实,阐释了。真正含义)如何抽象拔高图片寓
11、意。人:以小见大物:把握其象征意义Oedipus complex 俄狄浦斯情结2022-2022负向:社会弊病 11、09、06、05、03、00个人问题 13、07正向:社会风尚 10、08、02、01人生哲理 12、04第一层:点明社会寓意第二层:展开论证负向:行文思路1、原因分析:-)手掌原则内因(意识,品质,道德,责任感,价值观)Lack awareness of ./self-discipline/self restraint Personal quality/morality Incorrect /improper views /outlook /on the society /v
12、alue /life/ happinessSense of social commitment.外因(法规,政府部门,媒体,社会,教育)Law/regulation/rulesNot so perfect /not so restrainedRelevant administration /authority/department (concerned) lack supervision/insufficient management Media:lack advertisement /propaganda/guidance/education/school cant escape from
13、its responsibility towards this issue/phenomonon.行文思路2、利弊分析行文思路3、欲扬先抑正向:行文思路1、意义分析;正反论证行文思路2、化通俗为哲理论证手段-因果互推This phenomenon involves several complicated factors /reasons.A number of /three ingredients could account for.欲扬先抑大众观点(归因于外)质疑大众(举反例-伪数据)陈述自己的观点(归因于内)1)It is held by a majority of people that
14、.It is generally /widely considered/shared /accepted/agreed/assumed/argued that.2)is that true? No longer3)considering what I mentioned above/ the above situation, my view towards this issue is .意义分析:正反论证1、如果有主题词,那么带来哪一些好处。首先。其次。最后 例如It is due to 主题词 that brings the following benefits. First and for
15、emost, in addition ,last but not least.主题词 is of great benefit to; do good to; be good to Have /exert /exercise a good /positive influence/effect /impact on2,如果没有主题词,那么带来哪一些害处。首先。其次。最后 例如主题词 is of great harm to; do harm to; be harmful to Have /exert /exercise a good /positive influence/effect /impact on论证手段-双向论证It is .that makesWithout .would be 好处 坏处思考分析的角度 和维度个人方面(身心发展,工作,生活,学习)+因果互推(提供动力,积极心态,直面困难)社会方面(发展,和谐,效率,公平)+举例说明化通俗为哲理1)提出名言+解释名言