Unit 1 5 Writing—An opinion essay about the scientific spirit-教案课件-高中英语选择性必修二

Science and ScientistsUnit 1Period FiveWritingAn opinion essay about the scientific spirit写作训练 弄清文络 写作妙笔生花技法点拨 文体分析 把握写作动脉内容索引写作指导本本单单元元的的写写作作目目标标是是“观观点点”。要要求求就就有有关关科科学学家家的的精精神神进进行行分分析析并并针针对对这这些些故故事事说说出出学学生生的的看看法法。文文章章应应有有一一定定的的人人物物描描写写，主主要要是是介介绍绍某某科科学学家家的的基基本本信信息息及及其其事事迹迹，针针对对科科学学家家的的生生活活、工工作作和和学学习习发发生生的故事，学生发表自己的观点。的故事，学生发表自己的观点。1.人物描写的写作步骤：人物描写的写作步骤：(1)总体介绍。总体介绍。(2)列举主要经历。列举主要经历。(3)发表观点。发表观点。技 法 点 拨文体分析 把握写作动脉2.语言特征语言特征(1)遵循真实性原则，进行客观描述。遵循真实性原则，进行客观描述。(2)简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。3.在在写写作作过过程程中中要要注注意意人人称称的的变变化化和和时时态态的的正正确确运运用用。描描写写人人物物的的外外貌貌、性性格格、兴兴趣趣等等常常用用一一般般现现在在时时，而而描描写写人人物物的的出出生生地地和和出出生生日日期期、教教育育背背景、经历、事迹等常用一般过去时。景、经历、事迹等常用一般过去时。1.He/She was born in China on Nov.13,1968.2.He/She was a great man with the name of.3.He/She was born into a poor family.4.He/She studied at a local high school and graduated from Beijing University.5.He/She is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her.6.He/She devoted all his/her life to the work.7.He/She made great contributions to our country.常用表达8.He/She was highly thought of by many people.9.He/She will live in the hearts of us forever.10.He/She devotes himself/herself to achieving his/her life goal.返 回牛牛顿顿是是世世界界著著名名的的科科学学家家，关关于于他他的的故故事事有有很很多多，请请你你根根据据他他煮煮鸡鸡蛋蛋的的故故事事，以以“A Story of Newton”写写一一篇篇文文章章，并并据据此此发发表表一一下下自自己己的的对科学精神的看法。词数对科学精神的看法。词数80左右。左右。写 作 训 练弄清文络 写作妙笔生花审题审题写作要求是描述牛顿煮鸡蛋的故事。写作时应注意下面几点：写作要求是描述牛顿煮鸡蛋的故事。写作时应注意下面几点：1.确确定定文文体体：这这是是一一篇篇夹夹叙叙夹夹议议，是是学学生生熟熟悉悉的的文文体体，写写作作中中应应注注意意记记叙叙文的四要素，以及学生的评论和观点。文的四要素，以及学生的评论和观点。2.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主，议论部分为一般现在时。主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主，议论部分为一般现在时。3.主体人称：描写，所以人称应该以第三人称为主，议论部分为第一人称。主体人称：描写，所以人称应该以第三人称为主，议论部分为第一人称。审题谋篇谋篇谋篇第一段：概括介绍。第一段：概括介绍。第二段：叙述故事。第二段：叙述故事。第三段：发表观点。第三段：发表观点。核心词汇核心词汇1.最有天赋的最有天赋的_ 2.专注于专注于_3.从事于从事于_4.煮鸡蛋煮鸡蛋 _5.计算计算_6.不仅不仅而且而且_the most giftedbe attentivebe engaged incook the eggscalculatenot only.but also.遣词造句连词成句连词成句1.一个仆人为牛顿做饭。一个仆人为牛顿做饭。_2.他想要出去。他想要出去。_3.你要聪明。你要聪明。_4.你应该专注于你正在做的事情。你应该专注于你正在做的事情。_A servant cooked for Newton.He wanted to go out.You need a clever mind.You should pay full attention to what you are doing.句式升级句式升级1.请用定语从句合并句请用定语从句合并句1和句和句2。_2.把句把句3和句和句4合并成并列句。合并成并列句。_A servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out.You not only need a clever mind，but also should pay full attention to what you are doing.用用适适当当的的过过渡渡词词语语，把把以以上上词词汇汇和和句句式式，再再加加上上联联想想内内容容，组组成成一一篇篇80词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。组句成篇参考范文参考范文A Story of NewtonIsaac Newton is the greatest and most gifted scientist ever.Newton was very attentive when he was engaged in scientific research and often forgot the little things in daily life.Once，when a servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out，he asked Newton to cook the eggs himself.However，when the servant came back，he found a pocket watch was actually cooked in the pot，but the eggs were still in place.It turned out that Newton was absorbed in calculation and threw the pocket watch into the pot.From the story we can see that to be a great scientist，you not only need a clever mind，but also you should pay full attention to what you are doing.If you want to achieve something，focus on it and be determined until you have made it.返 回