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1、大学生英语作文赏析关于如何看待大学生上网的英语作文Internet Surfing-因特网冲浪Nowadays,there is a growing popularity of Internet surfingon college campus.An increasing number of students,majoringeither in science or engineering or in liberal arts,spend manyhours surfing the Internet with keen interest everyday.Internet surfing ha
2、s attracted college students 1 ikemagnets because it is the world of Internet and the world ofglobalization.First,with the global coverage of Internet,wecan reach out and touch anyone at any place of the world.ViaInternet,we can send and receive E-mai 1 s at any t ime much faster,cheaper and more ef
3、fective than conventional means such astelephone,telex and fax.Next,via access to the home pages oflibraries,universities,journals and news agencies,andresearch organizations,we can easily acquire al 1 kinds ofinformation,to know what is going on all over the world.Finally,by clicking the mouse,we a
4、re capable of doing suchimportant things as shopping,finding jobs,making friends,down-loading files and programs,doing business,publishingpapers and freely airing our opinions on al 1 sorts ofinteresting issues.What is more,Internet offhrs manyopportunities.For example,we can work,educate ourselves
5、andcommunicate with others at home via Internet.In the Information Age,it is diff icuh to imagine modern lifewithout Internet.With the rapid development of InformationTechnology industry,successful dot-com companies mushroomedeverywhere.Internet is revolutionizing our economy,oursociety and our life
6、.关于大学生压力的英语作文Directions:For this part,you are al lowed 30 minutes to writea composition on the topic How Should College Students RelievePressure?You should write at least 150 words,and base yourcomposition on the out 1ine（given in Chinese）below:1）当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力2）大学生缓解压力的方式有3）你一般都是如何排解压力的？How S
7、hould College Students Relieve Pressure?关于大学生压力的英语作文-行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提 纲 第1点指出一个问题，提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提 纲 第3点要求阐述“我”的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力；列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。关于大学生压力的英语作文-高分范文How Should College Students Relieve Pressure?Today s college students f ace many pr
8、essures,ma inly f romparents,expectation,study,economy,employment and all kindsof competition.1 Although pressure t o some extent can providemotivation,overdue pressure has a serious negative effect.Pressure can destroy a student5 s confidence.2 More seriously,i t might make some students lose contr
9、ol of their emotions andbehaviors.3 Considering the great damage of overdue pressure,college students should learn to how t o relieve pressure.2First,we should have a right evaluation of ourselves 4soas t o 5make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages.2 Second,we should 6set a clear aim of a stru
10、ggle.The aimcan give us motivation,and make us become act ive.2 Third,7 attending collective activities is an effective way torelieve pressure.2Finally,if you find pressure is nearly8beyond your control,you d better turn to professionalpsychological guidance.2 As to me,my pressure is mainly from fut
11、ure employment.4In order to reduce i t,I asked my parents help me analysemy advantages and disadvantages,and produce a more practicaljob objection.2So my employment pressure was relievedgreatly.Now I become confident in my future,and I 9 dobelieve I can get an ideal job after my graduation.【亮点点评】1 a
12、lthough引导让步状语从句。2过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。“考虑到,鉴于”，介词。4表示目的。5 “扬长避短”。“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。7 动名词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。8 “超出范围或能力”。9强调动词believe。佳句临摹1.佳 句：Although pressure to some extent can providemotivation,overdue pressure has a serious negative effect.临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。2.佳句：Attending
13、collective activities is an effective wayto relieve临摹：学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。3.佳句：In order to reduce it,I asked m y parents help meanalyse m y advantages and disadvantages临摹：为了在激烈的竞争中获得优势，大学生们必须全面发展自己的能力。KEY1.Although a part-time job does much good to us,we shouldnot spend too much time on i t.2.
14、Learning how to deal with people is the first and themost important step to enter into the society.3.In order to get their priority in the fierce competition,college students have to develop their abi1ities关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文 Directions:For this part,you are al lowed 30 minutes to write a composition on
15、 the topicCredit Cards on Campus.You should write at least 150 words,and base your compos i t ion on the out line（given in Chinese）below:1）近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡2）分析产生该现象的原因3）针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议Credit Cards on Campus关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提 纲 第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提 纲 第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判
16、断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状；分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因；针对大学生使用信用卡提 出“我”的建议。关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-高分范文Credit Cards on CampusIn recent years,credit cards have 1gained morepopularity among college students.2With banks more focuson col lege market,3 an increasing number of college studentshave applied for a credit card and begun to consume by i t.4The following three factors can account for thepopularity of credit cards in col lege.5Firstly,a creditcard provides overdrawing service,6which is 7a bigat
