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1、板块三 写作板块 应用文写作 读后续写/概要写作 一、满分写作不可不知的阅卷老师的秘密阅卷老师的关注点1阅卷老师首看卷面你必须明白，你的考卷是给阅卷老师看的，让老师看得舒服、方便、清楚，这是非常重要的。不可书写过小、过密或过稀，更不可字迹潦草，乱涂乱改，标点不清。在高强度阅卷中没有谁会辨认书写得乱七八糟的内容，所以你应该呈现一份美观清晰的答卷。2阅卷老师次抓要点阅卷老师对语言内容描述全面与否要求严格，答题时应找准找全写作要点。同时，要注意文章需条理分明，逻辑结构合理。3阅卷老师紧盯错误主谓不一致、动词形式(时态和语态)不对、词组搭配不当、句子结构错误、词序不当、关键词用错等都属于大错；小错主要
2、是指常用词的拼写错误，介词、冠词、标点等的错用；3个小错等于1个大错。虽然有些错误被界定为小错误，但却影响得分档次。时间再紧也要认真复查，尽量减少词汇和句式错误。4阅卷老师眼中的满分卷书写整洁漂亮；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；词汇丰富，文笔流畅，衔接连贯。同样的内容，卷面整齐至少多给35分；如果写得整齐美观而且条理清晰，再多给几分；如果开头和结尾句式高级就可以稳拿满分！阅卷老师的评分要求1按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章内容和语言表达初步确定所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量文章，确定或调整档次。2评分时注意的主要内容：内容要点、词汇应用、语法结构是否准确、上下文是否连贯以及语言是否得体。3如书写
3、较差，影响识读，其得分将降低一个档次。4拼写和标点符号是影响分数的一个方面。英式英语和美式英语拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。板块三 写作板块 应用文写作 读后续写/概要写作二、提升作文档次的技巧让作文靓起来(一)要点呈现多样化，适当扩充要点1追加成分 在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语(从句)、状语(从句)、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等。不仅增加了词数，而且使表达更清晰、准确，主题更突出。住在中国十六年，一直学英语。(2019高考全国卷)First of all,having lived in China for sixteen y
4、ears and having learnt English since I was a child,I have a good command of English and Chinese,which is beneficial to introducing Chinese paintings.2补加语句 根据行文走向，适当增加一些与主题相关的语句，或由要点衍生的句子，既能起到前引后联的作用，又能补充一些相关信息，帮助读者理解所写内容。每一支参赛队伍都非常出色，为比赛做好了准备。(2019高考全国卷)Every participating team is great and ready fo
5、r the game.It can be predicted that this is a close match（势均力敌的比赛）.3添加过渡 根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，甚至过渡句，可以使文章浑然一体，同时能充实文章。first and most important;whats more;in addition;last but not least 话题：对西方绘画艺术感兴趣的原因(2019高考天津卷)Personally，Id want to learn about western painting.Several reasons may account f
6、or my preference.For one thing，Im interested to learn how western painting has developed into what it is today through history，and the most influential artists in each period of its development.Additionally，Im crazy to learn how to appreciate western paintings，and it cant be better if you can tell u
7、s some tricks about how to paint.话题：学生体育运动情况(2018高考全国卷)I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you.You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with,a fabulous new stadium has been built,which has become
8、 the new landmark in our school.As for me,Im intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.All in all,I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.4不忘收尾 书信中“适当的结尾”也是必需的，它不仅符合书信习惯，而且还可增加词数。缺失就会影响文章结构，从而影响得分。书信常用的结束语如下：Im lo
9、oking forward to./Looking forward to./Look forward to.Im waiting for your early reply.Best wishes to you.I would be grateful if you./Id appreciate it if you.(二)词句表达靓一靓何为高级词汇？众所周知，词汇本来并没有“高低贵贱”之分，但某个词一旦得到使用，放在了具体语境中，使用得极为得当，体现了该词的美妙价值，为句子增色，让文章添彩，它就是高级词汇；相反，使用时体现的价值平平，没有创意，它就是低级词汇。巧用4招，以实现由低级向高级的转化。1
10、“语”众不同，避免人云亦云 写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇来表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。I learn English and Chinese well,which is good for introducing Chinese paintings.I have a good command of English and Chinese,which is beneficial to introducing Chinese paintings.(2019高考全国卷)2更新换代，避免重复 写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异
11、，也是高级用法。The team will hold many activities,some of which will appeal to you,including many matches.The team will hold a range of activities,some of which will appeal to you,including many matches.(2017高考全国卷)3单词与短语巧妙互用 一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，亦可“一词传神”。However,we should still prep
12、are for the match,and try to be the winner.However,we should still make preparations for the match,and take pains to be the winner.(2019高考全国卷)短语高于单词，尽量用短语替代动词短语高于单词，尽量用短语替代动词注意 高级词汇的使用一定要遵循“准确、恰当”的原则，一定要注意词汇使用是否合适，并不一定难词就是高级词汇，例如：一大早我们买了一些圣诞礼物。Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas present
13、s.(purchased太过于书面化，改为bought更地道)(三)句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”一、利用复合句式，提升文章档次(一)增加亮点的定语从句1定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次，在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个定语从句，就是从低级到高级的表达。Firstly,the festival will start at 9：00 am.on August 15th，and it will last 3 hours.Firstly,the festival will start at 9：00 am.on August 15th,which will last 3 hours.(
14、2019高考全国卷)2定语从句有多种形式，引导词也有若干，但最常用、最能增加亮点的是as和which引导的非限制性定语从句以及“介词which”引导的定语从句。(1)在表达“正如”这一含义时，我们常用as引导的非限制性定语从句。常见的句式有：As we all know./As is known to all.As he pointed out.As we can see from.As the famous saying goes.As we all know,friendship always comes first.(2019高高考全国卷考全国卷)(2)which引导定语从句时，可以指代
15、某个词，也可以指代整个主句。Further,it is necessary for you to take a good rest,which will provide enough energy for you.(2019高考全国卷)(3)“介词which”引导的定语从句。It makes no difference from ordinary voting events,in which candidates go around to seek supports.(二)吸引眼球的状语从句 在英语写作中，状语从句是经常被用到的，它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。When it comes to
16、 the season I like best,spring will always occur to me in no time.We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books.(三)提升档次的名词性从句1名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句。尤其what,that所引导的名词性从句是写作中常见的高级表达方式。I have good news to tell you that an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus.(同位语从句)(2018高考全国卷 )Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do.(宾语从句)What we need most are popular science books.(主语从句)Today is what we can hold and make use of.(表语从句)2在写作中
