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1、作文高分突破概要写作 12021届高考英语主要内容一篇好的概要所具备的特点概要写作中存在的问题案例分析一篇好的概要所具备的特点What is a summary?ashortretellingofthemainideaofatextoratopic.Examples: a news report a description of a movie a blurb on the back of a bookWhat makes a good summary?a. Agoodsummaryshouldinclude:1. the main ideas 2. Important detailsb. A
2、goodsummaryisshort,trueandfair.（客观、准确、公正；不渲染、不加入自己的主观评价或观点）c. Agoodsummaryiswrittenin your own wordsandin a clear order thattheoriginaltextispresentedin.概要写作高考要求评分时主要从以下4个方面考虑： 1. 对原文要点的理解和呈现情况 2. 应用语法结构和词汇的准确性 3. 上下文的连贯性 4. 对各要点表达的独立性情况 提供一篇350个单词左右的文章 （体裁一般为说明文或议论文），要求考生基于该短文写一篇60词左右的内容概要。概要写作要心怀读
3、者，假定读者看不到原文本，你写的文本是否 make sense。写概要时，要想象你是在对你的朋友描述或解释这篇文章。1. Unable to find the structure 2. Unable to find the key points3. Unable to rewrite in your own words 4. Unable to write with beautiful language 概要写作中存在的主要问题1.Read it thoroughly to get the topic and structure of the passage 2.Underline topic
4、 sentence and important details in each paragraph （leave out unimportant details）3.Rely on your memory first to rewrite the main idea of each part 4.Revise it to ensure that your writing is to the point and clear and the language is well written. 概要写作的过程Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestuden
5、tstodo.Studentsgettochoosewhattheywanttoread.Somestudentsmightreadanadventurestory.Othersmightreadamystery.Studentscanchoosetoreadabouttopicstheydonotlearnaboutinclass.Studentscantaketheirtimereadingathomeinsteadofhavingtoreadonlyinclass. 案例分析请阅读下面这段文字并写概要：案例来自于外滩英语Free reading is the best kind of h
6、omework for the students to do. Studentsgettochoosewhattheywanttoread.Somestudentsmightreadanadventurestory.Othersmightreadamystery.Studentscanchoosetoreadabouttopicstheydonotlearnaboutinclass.Studentscantaketheirtimereadingathomeinsteadofhavingtoreadonlyinclass.案例分析Free reading is the best kind of
7、homework for the students to do. Students get to choose what they want to read.Somestudentsmightreadanadventurestory.Othersmightreadamystery.Studentscanchoosetoreadabouttopicstheydonotlearnaboutinclass. Students can take their time reading at home instead of having to read only in class. 案例分析第一句 cop
8、ying第二句 minor details最后一句 confusing order看看下面这篇概要的问题在哪儿？Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestudentstodo.Studentscouldreadadventurestoriesormysteries.Ilikemysteriesbest.Theycanusefreereadingtolearnaboutdifferenttopics.Theycanalsotakemoretimetoreadoutsideofclass.Studentscanchoosewhattheyread.第三句
9、your own opinionFreereadingisthebesthomeworkforstudents.Itallowsstudentstochoosewhattoreadandlearnaboutandalsoensuresthemmoretimetoread.Randomreadingshouldbeacknowledgedasthesuperbassignmentforstudentswhichempowersthemtoobtainmorealternativesandguaranteesamplereadingtime.Studentsshouldhavefreereadin
10、gastheirhomework.Itisimportantforstudentstochoosewhattheyreadandlearnabout.Readingathomecangivestudentsmorereadingtime.主位缺失，逻辑混乱。这篇概要的主位应该是freereading,不是students或readingathome。辞藻华丽，晦涩难懂121. 包含文章所有要点，每个要点独立，逻辑清晰。2. 按照原文出现的顺序，用自己的语言表达，字数60左右。3. 表达连贯，内容客观、清晰，不渲染，不参入自己的观点。4. 语言准确、严谨、简练、高级。总结：什么是一篇好的概要？T
11、opic of the article Part1 Part 2 Part 3 Part4TS 1KD1,2KD1,2KD1,2KD1,2Mi1,如何确定文章的关键信息TS 2TS 3TS 4Mi1,Mi1,Mi1,How to locate the main ideas and important details?Mind Map (overall / big picture of a text, the structure of the text)Group words (words or phrases frequently appearing)Signal words (first，l
12、ast，but, however, for example, besides, therefore, in conclusion，on the contrary, meanwhile, on the one hand, on the other hand, someothers, consequently, ) 确定文章的关键信息几个策略Relationship between sentencesMind Map (structure of a text)M4U2: Chemical or Organic FarmingPara.1： introductionPara.2: problemsP
13、ara.3: solution Para.4: other solutionsproblemscausedbychemicals(damagethehealthofpeopleandsoil)organicfarming(definition,benefits)othermethodstokeepsoilfertilechemicalfertilizers(welcomedbutharmful)Mind Map (structure of a text ） M3U4: Communication : No Problem? Para.1 backgroundPara.2&3 problem-n
14、oticingPara.4 Problem-analyzingPara.5 Problem-solvingMeetinternationalstudentsattheairport(watchingthem)SomemajormisunderstandingsoftheirgreetingbodylanguageNotallculturesgreetthesameway(examples).notgoodorbad2.studyinginternationalcustomsLikeanyotherfacility,keepingaschoolopenrequiresagreatdealofmo
15、ney.Keepingschoolopeninthemiddleofsummerrequiresairconditioning,andthataddssignificantlytotheschoolsexpenses.Besides,teachersmustbepaidforalltheweeksheyareworking.Forexample,ahighschoolinArizonahadacostincreaseof$157,ooowhentheyswitchedtoyear-roundschooling.Someschoolsmaynotbeabletohandlesuchincreas
16、es,andotherschoolsthatcanhandletheseexpensescouldbedoingbetterthingswiththemoney.Group words can indicate the main idea.Genetechnologycanhelppeopletogivebirthtomorehealthyandcleverchildren.Somefamilieshavegeneticdiseases.Thismeanstheirchildrenwillforsurehavethefamilydisease,whichisagreattroubleforthesefamilies.Inthepast,doctorscoulddonothingaboutgeneticdiseases.Butgenetechnologycansolvethisproblemperfectly.Scientistsjustneedtofindthewronggeneandcorrectit,andahealthychildwillbeborn.Group words ca
