提高英语作文得分之策略-简单句变高级句 在高考书面表达中,如果能写出几句语法结构比较复杂的句子,这就为书面表达增加了几处亮点,就等于给了阅卷老师打高分的理由;要是再能熟练地运用非谓语动词、倒装句、强调句、虚拟语气、主语从句、定语从句、宾语从句、表语从句等高级的语法结构,这样的考生可说是寥若晨星因此,谁能在作文中使用高级句型、高级词汇,谁就能抢到先机现列举方法如下:一、巧用非谓语动词1.现在正在建的那座漂亮的大楼是教学楼普通句:Thebeautifulbuildingwhichisbeingbuiltnowistheteachingbuilding.(限制性定语从句)高级句:Thebeautifulbuildingbeingbuiltnowistheteachingbuilding.(现在分词被动语态作定语)2.站在校门口的那个女孩是我小学时的同班同学普通句:Thegirlwhoisstandingattheschoolgateismyclassmateintheprimaryschool.(限制性定语从句)高级句:Thegirlstandingattheschoolgateismyclassmateintheprimaryschool.(现在分词短语作定语)3.今天发的信或许后天她能收到。
普通句:Aletterthathasbeenpostedtodaywillprobablyreachherthedayaftertomorrow.(限制性定语从句)高级句:Aletterpostedtodaywillprobablyreachherthedayaftertomorrow.(过去分词短语作定语)二、巧用it作形式宾语的句子1.我认为学生遵守校规是很重要的Ithinkitimportantforthestudentstoobeytherulesofschool.(it作形式宾语,不定式复合结构forthestudentstoobeytherulesofschool作真正的宾语)2.我觉得开车这么快是危险的Ifinditdangerousdrivingsofast.(it是形式宾语,动名词短语drivingsofast作真正的宾语)3.我们认为和他争吵是在浪费时间Wethinkitawasteoftimearguingwithhim.(it作形式宾语,动名词短语arguingwithhim作真正的宾语)4.他让公众明白了这一点,他做了一件好事Hemadeitcleartothepublicthathedidagooddeed.(it作形式宾语,从句thathedidagooddeed作真正的宾语)三、巧用倒装句或强调句1.玛丽亚的妈妈直到上周末才从美国纽约来到北京。
普通句:Maria’smotherdidn’tarriveinBeijingfromNewYorkofAmericauntillastweekend.高级句:NotuntillastweekenddidMaria’smotherarriveinBeijingfromNewYorkofAmerica.(倒装句)高级句:ItwasnotuntillastweekendthatMaria’smotherarrivedinBeijingfromNewYorkofAmerica.(强调句)2.只有改变我们的生活方式,我们才能拯救地球普通句:Wecansavetheearthonlybychangingtheway,welive.高级句:Onlybychangingthewaywelivecanwesavetheearth.(倒装句)高级句:Itisonlybychangingthewaywelivethatwecansavetheearth.(强调句)四、巧用虚拟语气有些句子如果能用上虚拟语气的话,会使句子更加生动、形象1.我不是一只小鸟,所以我不能在天空自由飞翔普通句:Iamnotabird,Ican’tflyfreelyinthesky.(陈述语气)高级句:IfIwereabird,Icouldflyfreelyinthesky.(虚拟语气)我要是一只小鸟,我就能在天空自由飞翔。
高级句:WereIabird,Icouldflyfreelyinthesky.(虚拟语气)2.我不知道你的号码,所以我昨天没给你打普通句:Ididn’tknowyourphonenumber,soIdidn’tcallyouyesterday.(陈述语气)高级句:IfIhadknownyourphonenumber,Iwouldhavecalledyouyesterday.(虚拟语气)我要是知道你的号码,我昨天就给你打了高级句:HadIknownyourphonenumber,Iwouldhavecalledyouyesterday.(虚拟语气)五、巧用独立主格1.完成工作,我和朋友们到海上游泳普通句:Aftermyworkhasbeendone(or:AfterIhavedonemywork),Iwentswimmingintheseawithmyfriendstogether.高级句:Myworkhavingbeendone,Iwentswimmingintheseawithmyfriendstogether.(独立主格结构,相当于时间状语从句)2.放学后我就回家,从不进网吧普通句:Afterschoolisover,Igohomeatonce,neverenteringinternetcafe.高级句:Schoolbeingover,Igohomeatonce,neverenteringinternetcafe.(独立主格结构,相当于时间状语从句) -全文完-。