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高考英语备考:万能模板—记叙文之写人型

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高考英语备考:万能模板一记叙文之写人型模板①介绍人物舫特征I have made many good friends. (弓 I 出人物)is one of them. Sheis (总体给人的感觉)-She is tall and (身材).Herhair is (头发).She always wears (表情)and gives usthe impression that (给人的印象).介绍人物的性格特征并记叙Y典型精例期原望 is always willing to ('性格).She is good at(特长)• Whenever I have problems I . Once (弓 I出事例).To my surprise, .We will : but I hope (表达愿望).模板②人物介绍(年龄、外貌、身份、性格等)is a nine-year-oki boy. He is veryand He is very naughty And he典型事例(说明性格、品质等). He often One day he人物评价(喜爱、夸赞等情感). like him very much. I think he【写作注意事项】a. 写人主要从人物外貌、年龄、身份、籍贯、性格、兴趣爱好、特长等方面描述;b. 要注意最好使用不同句式以免句式单一;c. 在描写人的外貌时,常用一般现在时,人称常用第一人称或第三人称;d. 要抓住所描写人物的典型特征。

发挥在前两个方面,主要用i般现在时,最后一方面,可以用将来时的句式写作中注意选择自己熟悉的句式,适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系Hello, everybody! My name is Li Hua. I, m from the Hope Middle School.I am very happy to stand here to talkabout myself. I am a kind and helpful person. At school, I am always readyto help others who are in trouble. I cansing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school party.At home, I often help my parents dohousework. I think doing housework is not only my parents dutyI can sing and dance well, I think they make me feel relaxed, and I oftengive performances at our school party. That makes me very well-known in myschool. Also, I like reading, I think reading not only give me knowledge butalso open my eyes to the world.In the senior high school, I will get on well with new classmates andteachers, and I will study harder, I hope I can learn how to learn better, sothat I can enter a good university. That* s all.Thank you!【写作亮点】这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。

文章脉络清晰,自然流畅同时,文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语,这为文章增色不少在学习中注意积累,掌握一些常用句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理二)(2017 -海南)梁玲同学是你校初三(1)班的学生她家境贫寒,但她勇于面对困难、主动承担家务且刻苦学习,大家都很喜欢并敬佩她作为学校英文报刊记者,你对她进行了采访请根据下面的采访笔记写一篇关于她的报道 from a poor familysc«nething about her car^ 件'study hardsanethingwe canleam: face difficultly,要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;2. 必须包含所给提示,并做适当发挥;3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;4. 词数80左右短文的开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数)Liang Ling, a 14-year-old girl, is a student in Class 1, Grade 9. She comesfrom She is great. Let' s wish her a better future.【思路分析】短文是介绍梁玲同学是你校初三(一)班的学生,她家境贫寒,但她勇于面对困难、主动承担家务且刻苦学习,大家都很喜欢并敬佩她。

所以人称应该用第三人称,时态可用一般现在时,要注意主谓一致写作时不要遗漏信息,要使用自己熟悉的单词及短语写作中注意语意通顺,符合逻辑关系,上下文之间可以适当使用一些连接词,如 but, so, then 等Liang Ling, a 14-year-old girl, is a student in Class 1, Grade 9. She comesfrom a poor family. Since she was alittle girl, she has cared for her family Every day Liang Ling helps withthe cooking, cleaning and washing. I asked her whether she was tired of doing so much housework. " Not real 1 y. " Shesmiled. "I've got used to it.'Though she is busy, she studies hard and gets good grades. What's more,she is always ready to help othersEveryone 1 ikes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she always facesdifficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she never gives up.She is great. Let1 s wish her a better future.【写作亮点】短文用了一些短语和句式,如:I asked her whether she was tired of doing somuch housework.我问她是否厌倦了做这么多的家务活,这是一个whether引导的宾语从句,whether 表示"是否"。

Though she is busy, she studies hard and gets goodgrades,虽然她很忙,但她努力学习并取得好成绩.注意though,虽然,后面不能和bu〔连用Writing 1你是Simon,以下是你的个人情况请根据提示写一篇自我介绍NameAgeNationalityS i mon Adams15AustralianOccupationFavourite subjectsHobbystudentPhysics, Music自拟Weekday activitiesWeekend activitiesFuture plan自拟自拟自拟要求:1.需涵盖全部所给信息;2.词数90左右,可适当发挥My name is SimonAdams.Looking forward to your reply.【思路分析】这篇作文要求我们以Simon的身份,根据所给的信息,写一篇自我介绍这是一篇介绍自己的短文,类似这样的文章,在平时的学习中接触比较多,所用到的句型、短语学生们会感觉比较熟悉,所以写作起来比较得心应手难点有三个:一个是要系统组织题目中所给的信息,不要杂乱无章,也不能遗漏要点;其中有些内容是需要学生自己来充实、补充的,如业余爱好、周末的活动、未来的计划等,这就需耍学生们自己发挥想象力来组织语言;第二个难点是使用正确的语法,英语句子和汉语不同,学生写作时,要注意从整体考虑,不能逐词翻译;最后就是为了提升文章档次,在短文中要使用一些较好的句型、连词和短语,使上下文的意思连贯、表达流畅。

参考范文】My name is Simon Adams, I am an Australian student. I am fifteen yearsold My favorite subjects at schoolare Physics and Music. I am a good singer. I love doing sports very much. Iam good at swimming and playing rugby. On weekdays, I study very hard.Usually I have a walk with my parents after supper. On weekends. I oftenhave parties. I like making friends. After a week's hard work, I like stayingat home and watching TV on Sundays. I have a dream. I want to be the leaderof Australia. I know it's not easy, but I will try my best to make my dreamcome true. 【写作亮点】这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者根据题目要求和所给的信息,介绍了自己的一些情况。

首先短文内容完整,包含了题目中所有的要点,需要自己补充的内容也进行了完善,符合整篇文章的节奏信息量足,且非常有条理;其次作文里使用了正确的时态和人称,谓语动词的形式和用法都很准确,语法合乎英语的表达需要,不是汉语式的英语;最后短文中使用了较多的短语和句型,如My favorite subjects at schoolarc Physics and Music.、I am good at swimming and playing rugby> After a week' s hardwork, 1 1 ike staying at home and watching TV on SundaysI want to be the leaderof Australia, I know 。

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