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1、英语写作参考答案I . Write an outline. （20分） 1. Smell , as a means of nonverbal communication, is important. 2. Most people in the West respond negatively to what they consider bad odors such as body odor, breath odor, or clothes that emit unpleasant smells such as sweat. 3. Other cultures have quite differe
2、nt concepts of natural odors. 4. Not knowing cultural variations in attitude toward smell can create uncertainty and even ill feeling.评分标准：每个要点5分。II. Write a note based on the given facts. (20 points)Sample： July 6 Dear Professor Liu, I am sorry for being unable to attend the regular meeting this af
3、ternoon, for I am catching a cold and have to stay in bed with a fever. Please send me the emergency and important messages and Ill try my best to deal with them as soon as possible. Xiao Li评分标准：内容：10分（明确，清楚，全面） 时间：1分 对象(称呼)：1分 签名：1分 句子结构及语法： 5分（有大错扣1-2分，一共不超过5分） 单词拼写及其他：2分III. Compose an essay (60
4、points) Sample: My View on Private Cars With the development of human society, private car has become more and more common in our country, especially in cities. It brings some benefit for us but also causes many problems at the same time.For one thing, private car has increasingly played a significa
5、nt role in our daily life . To start with, private cars provide more convenience as a kind of vehicle, especially for office workers, students and those who usually travel all over the country. Furthermore, with the increase of private cars, the automobile companies can offer more and more job oppor
6、tunities and reduce the pressure of unemployment. Eventually, it is good for us to save more time to improve the efficiency of life. For example, we do not have to wait for a bus when we are in a hurry.However, for another, private car has caused many problems as wellFirstly, the environment would b
7、e heavily polluted if the number of private cars rises too quickly. The gas from cars pollutes the air and causes some serious problems to human health. Moreover, too many private cars will cause traffic jams instead of bringing convenience. Finally, the increase of traffic accidents has threatened
8、the safety of peoples life.As far as I am concerned, as our individuals, we should prefer to choose the public transportations when we go out. And for our government, they should take some measures to limit the increasing number of private cars.评分标准：1. 本题总分为 60分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，
9、然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3. 词数少于 200和多于300 的，从总分中减去2分。所给主题句字数不算在总字数内。 4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 【各档次的给分范围和要求】 第五档 (50-60分) 1. 完成了试题规定的写作内容。 2. 应用了较多的语法结构
10、和词汇。 3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 第四档 (35-50分) 1. 完成了试题规定的内容。 2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足内容的要求。 3. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 4. 应用了简单的语句间的连接成分。 第三档(20-35分) 1. 基本完成了试题规定的内容。 2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 4. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 第二档 (10-20分) 1. 未恰当完成试题规定的内容。 2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档 (0-10分) 1. 未完成试题规定的内容。 2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 6. 信息未能传达给读者。
