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1、安徽中考备考：安徽中考英语历年（20212012）满分作文（历年真题+写作指导+满分范文）【真题再现】(2021安徽)假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括:1.事情经过；2.个人感悟。注意:1.词数80 100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:pocket money (n.零花钱);meaningful (d.有意义的)Once I Was Praised 写作思路RoleAudienceFormatTopic李华“我”(确定人称)校英文
2、报(确定读者)投稿(确定体裁)“我”曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬(确定时态、内容要点、语言风格)1.文体:本题要求写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,属于应用文写作。2.人称:以第一人称来行文。3.时态:介绍个人情况,以一般过去时为主。4.注意事项:要求以“Once I Was Praised”为题，结合提示进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍事情经过；第三段描述个人感悟。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。满分范文Once I Was PraisedOnce I was praised because I did something mea
3、ningful with my pocket money.One day, I happened to know some students in a school were hungry for knowledge but they didnt have enough books. I decided to offer my help. With all the pocket money I saved, I bought some books online, and gave them away to the school. My parents were very happy and p
4、raised me when they heard about it. They said I did a meaningful thing.I believe that every little bit helps. I will continue to do what I can to help others.【真题再现】(2020安徽)假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者,请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下:1.熟悉家乡;2.乐于交流;3.擅长英语。注意:1.词数80100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;4.信
5、的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:journalist(n.记者);column(n.专栏)Dear Sir/Madam, Yours,Li Hua写作思路1.文体:本题要求写一封自荐信,属于应用文写作。2.人称:自荐信应以第一人称为主。3.时态:介绍个人情况,主要用一般现在时。4.注意事项:(1)写作内容必须包含所给的三个要点,不能遗漏,且要适当拓展细节;(2)因为是自荐信,所以语言要得体,语气要合理;(3)写作时要适当运用过渡连接词,使文章行文连贯,过渡自然。写作提纲满分范文Dear Sir/Madam,I hear your newspaper needs journalist
6、s for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team.First,I know a lot about my hometown,such as its history and culture.Besides,I used to work as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job.Im easygoing and always ready to communicate with others.Moreover,I have a goo
7、d knowledge of English,and Im skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.Im sure to be the right person you are looking for.Id be thankful if I could get this chance.Yours,Li Hua范文点评such as“例如”,用来举例。used to do sth.“过去常常做某事”;work as“担任”。easygoing“易相处的”;communicate with“与交流”。have a good knowledg
8、e of“通晓;对熟悉”;be skillful at.“擅长”。you are looking for为省略了引导词that的定语从句,修饰先行词the right person。【真题再现】（2019安徽）假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下:1.经常做户外活动;2.很少用电子产品;3.坚持做眼保健操;4.注意:1.词数80100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。Dear Mike,Im sorry to learn tha
9、t your eyesight is getting weaker. Yours,Li Hua写作思路RoleAudienceFormatTopic李华“我”(确定人称)Mike(确定读者)电子邮件(确定体裁)“我”在保护视力方面的一些做法(确定时态、内容要点、语言风格)由于审题问题,很多考生会误将本文写成给Mike的建议。满分范文Dear Mike,Im sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.Id like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my dai
10、ly life.At school,I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.In my free time,I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer.You know,the light they give off is harmful to our eyes.Besides,doing eye exercises plays an important ro
11、le in relaxing my tired eyes.Lastly,I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.I hope youll find my ways helpful.Yours,Li Hua【真题再现】(2018安徽)某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为“Thank You,My Teacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:1.严格要求;2.耐心指导;3.热情鼓励;4.注意:1.词数80100;2.可
12、适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。写作思路RoleAudienceFormatTopic九年级毕业生“我”(确定人称)杂志社的读者,包括要感谢的老师(确定读者)征文(确定体裁及形式)表达对老师的感谢(确定时态及要点一到两个具体事例)满分范文Thank You,My Teacher!Id like to say thanks to my English teacher,Miss Li,because shes helped me a lot.Once,I failed my English exam.When she found I was very worried,she encouraged m
