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1、1 2011年 12月英语四级考试作文真题及范文For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times. You should write at least 120 words but no
2、 more than 180 words. Outlines:1. 坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命3. 学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才(I)Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will No great work can be performed without will. We envy famous men and imagine that fame was due to some trick of luck. But when we know their histories, we find that it
3、is long years of will and constant effort that have brought about their success. Just as we cant reach the top of a mountain without climbing, wecant achieve success without will. The modern society provides people with more opportunities than before, and there are stories which tell us the possibil
4、ity of becoming successful overnight. Actually that is not the case. Before these people become successful, a lot of hard work has been done, unnoticed mostly. What we usually see is the result, but what we ignore is a long process of struggling forward and wrestling with internal or external obstac
5、les. Take “quitting smoking” for example, which is , to most people , a difficult task, so people always give up the idea for they dont have the strong will.In a nutshell, strong will is an important condition or role of the success the individual should desire to maintain forever. There is no insta
6、nt success in this world. Strong will is the best policy to make your life distinct and your dreams come true.2 Analysis paraphrase of the thesis statement + synonyms of the key words in the thesis Succeed Strong will - unclear organization (esp. para. 2) (1 ts) No great work can be performed withou
7、t will. (paraphrase of the thesis statement (2 ds) We envy famous men and imagine that fame was due to some trick of luck. (3) But when we know their histories, we find that it is long years of will and constant effort that have brought about their success . (4 cs) Just as we cant reach the top of a
8、 mountain without climbing, we can t achieve success without will.(1) The modern society provides people with more opportunities than before, and there are stories which tell us the possibility of becoming successful overnight . (2) Actually that is not the case. (3)Before these people become succes
9、sful, a lot of hard work has been done, unnoticed mostly. (4) What we usually see is the result, but what we ignore is a long process of struggling forward and wrestling with 与。搏斗internal or external obstacles . (5) Take “quitting smoking ” for example, which is , to most people , a difficult task,
10、so people always give up the idea for they dont have the strong will. (1)In a nutshell (In short), strong will is an important condition or role of the success the individual should desire to maintain forever. (2)There is no instant success in this world. (3) Strong will is the best policy to make y
11、our life distinct and your dreams come true . (Conclusion: paraphrase of the thesis statement; emphasize)(II)Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillIt is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. One of the most typical example
12、s is that many people give up or fail to quit smoking just because of their poor willpower during the process. A variety of factors may account for this phenomenon as follows. 3 For one thing, no one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing ones task. It is of importance
13、for people to stick to their original aim. A great number of smokers would stop smoking a couple of days after they have made their determination, but only a few of them may succeed in the end. For another, those who cannot quit smoking may easily be affected by the circumstance and surroundings. In
14、 that case, people tend to fail to resist various temptations around them. From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future. Analysis+ various patterns and o
15、rganizational markers + well organized (1) It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. (2) One of the most typical examples is that many people give up or fail to quit smoking just because of their poor willpower during th
16、e process. (3) A variety of factors may account for this phenomenon as follows. (transferring sentence) (1) For one thing, no one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing ones task. (2) It is of importance for people to stick to their original aim. (3 eg) A great number of smokers would stop smoking a couple of days after they have made their determination, but only a few of them may succeed in the end. (4) For another, those who cannot quit smoking may easily be affe
