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1、How to Adapt to the College Life精修范文一:作者:潘艳张泊青刘欣欣(管理加强班)College life is very important in our whole life, But how to adapt to the college life is a serious problem for all freshmen. Here are some suggestions that may help you. Firstly, you should view yourself as a member of the big family that cons
2、ists of all of your classmates. Only if you regard other students as your brothers or sisters will you love your new family in your university. Secondly, tell yourself that you will soon have many good friends. The feeling of loneliness will kill you if you are really afraid of being alone. Good fri
3、ends will relieve your loneliness to some degree and help you adapt to the college life soon. Thirdly,you should realize that the society is unmerciful. If you cant adapt yourself to a new environment in a short time,you wont be accepted the new world better. In a word,tell yourself you can adapt to
4、 the college life soon, then you will really adjust to the it in a short time. Therefore, follow the above suggestions,you can enjoy the happy college life earlier.Comments:内容选取恰当,解释充分。条理清晰,较好地运用了解题法展开说明。句子通顺,语言错误较少。很好!不足之处是结尾句没能较好地回归主题。精修范文二:作者:唐晖彭梦霞(2011化学加一)Essay Score:4.2 out of 5 Organization:
5、4.5 Development: 3.7Sentence Structure:5 Word Choice/Grammar Usage:3.7Mechanics: 3.7After entering college, we found, to our surprise,that differences between high school life and college life are so great,so it is necessary that we learn to adapt to the college life as quickly as possible. Here are
6、 some of my suggestions. First,get familiar with the campus. You should spend one or two hours by yourself or with your classmates going around the campus so that you can know the new life environment. Next,try to be independent. College is free, and here nobody will urge you study hard, you must ha
7、ve good self-control and learn to be independent. For example,you ought to learn to make decisions on how to spend your time,how to spend your money,and wash clothes on your own. Furthermore, form good study habits. You should talk with your classmates and learn from their good habits. Finally,be ac
8、tive. You ought to take part in all kinds of activities so that you can exercise yourself and get on well with your classmates. Follow my advice,and I believe you will adapt to your college life quickly,and have a happy and unforgettable memory.Comments:木文语言简练,条理清晰,论述充分,较好地运用了解题法来展开说明主题, 开篇与收尾简洁明了,而
9、II句子通顺,语言错误较少。很好!参考范文1:作者:冯杰张瑞博陈雪艳郭碧图(管理加强班)After entering college,we will found that there are many different between college life and high school life. Therefore,many freshmen don not know how to adapt themselves to college life quickly. And they can not live in college comfortable and freely. So
10、how to adapt to college life becomes a serious question. For this situation,I have three suggestions for the freshman. First,get familiar with main building on the campus, and spend some time to go around the campus so that you can adapt the new environment. Second, it is necessary to make friends a
11、s more as possible and take active part in connective activities. Then, communication with your new friends and classmates or teachers often. It will help you are smoothly integrated with your new environment. Beside,it is very important that you should be independent,learn to do things depend on yo
12、urself. After entering college,you have become an adult, whatever you do, by yourself. Only by this way can you adapt yourself to the college life.参考范文2:作者:刘慧洁焦晓露张倩(20H物理加一)Essay Score:4.2 out of 5 Organization: 5 Development: 5Sentence Structure:3.3 Word Choice/Grammar Usage:4.2Mechanics:3.3Nowaday
13、s, it seems increasingly difficult for college student to adapt to college life, so they often suffer form depression,fear or loneliness. But as we know,it is necessary to adapt to the new life. So, how to make it? Here are some suggestions. Firstly,getting familiar with the schools main buildings i
14、s necessary. You can spend one or two hours by yourself or with your classmates to go around and familiar with the school environment,especially some important places as the library,the dinning room,the classrooms. It is easily to decrease your feeling of strangeness. Secondly, you should learn inde
15、pendence. Wash clothes on your own,make a plan for your study and life,know how to spend your money, and make some decisions by yourself. In addition, you should get on well with your classmates, make many new friends and learn form their good habits. And try to take part in different kinds of activ
16、ities with your friends. This can make your life more splendid and interesting. I think if you can do as these suggestions,you can adapt to college life quickly. And you can find your college life will be meaningful and filled with happiness.Comments:木次写作有不少同学参考了一些其它范文,如果能结合我们规定的主题及 提纲修改这些范文,为自己所用,也不失为一种学习的途径。参考范文3:作者:孙莉杰张煜杭刘瑞云(2011教育加一)Essay Score:3.3 out of 5 Organization: 3.5 Development: 3-5Sentence Structure:2.7 Word Choice/Grammar Usage:3