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1、高考英语训练专题写作训练：图表式作文写作指导（带课件）今年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试山东卷考试说明-英语 ：第四部分书面表达第二节：写作，满分 30 分。要求考生根据题目的提示（包括情景、图画、图表、提纲等）和要求，用英语写一篇120-150个单词的短文。写作步骤1.仔细审题，把握主旨2.列出提纲，合理布局3.注重联系，适当发挥4.连词成句，连句成篇高考作文的核心任务：在 15 秒内取悦阅卷老师优秀高考作文应具备的六个基本特征：1.层次不乱2.句式多变3.亮点若干4.巧妙串联5.蠢错不犯6.整洁卷面命题特点纵观近年来全国各地的高考试题及模拟试题，图表类作文是写作部分的常见题型之一，体裁多为议
2、论文和说明文。议论文通常要求考生通过分析图表中的数据，就图表中所反映的问题阐述自己的观点，并得出自己的结论（如北京卷及湖北卷）；说明类作文要求考生通过图表所列举的变化对比及产品介绍等，对图表进行描述（如浙江卷）。图表式作文的几种形式:一是以表格形式，将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来，即统计表。二是以图形形式：A 表示数据变化的曲线图；B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异的条形图；C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图。一、写作例题请根据下列图表及文字说明用英语写一篇短文，内容应包括中美高中生零花钱的主要来源、比例、差异及原因，并发表自己的观点和看法。要求： 1.120 词左右； 2.可
3、根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。【思路点拨】1.写作任务分析审题：这是一篇解说事物的图表说明文。（格式体裁、内容要点、人称、时态）2.安排篇章结构文章可分为3 段，使层次分明。Para 1：_清楚的介绍比例、差异(按顺序列出要点，但不要过多的罗列数字)注意百分比的表达：例35%的零花钱 _ Para 2： _1)美国高中生比中国高中生能获得更多的获得奖学金或打零工的机会。_ 2)美国高中生没有中国高中生那么依赖父母。0%10%20%30%40%50%60%70%80%90%100%AmericanstudentsChinesestudentsscholarshipspart-time j
4、obsparents精品学习资料 可选择p d f - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 1 页，共 4 页 - - - - - - - - -_ Para 3：_ 3.选用恰当的连接词及过渡句，以使文章更有连贯性和逻辑性。高级词汇表达和句法结构表对比关系的连接词：_ 表递进关系的连接词：_ 【范文展示】Pocket Money Sources for High School Students The pocket money sources for the American and Chinese high students come almost the same w
5、ay: money from their parents, income from part-time jobs and scholarships they can get, but the percentage of each is quite different. Half of the American students pocket money is from their parents, 35% from part-time jobs and 15% from scholarships, while the Chinese students get 90% of their pock
6、et money from their parents and only 10% from part-time jobs and scholarships. It seems that there are two reasons for this difference. One is that the American students have more opportunities to do part-time jobs or get scholarships than the Chinese students. The other is that the American student
7、s depends less on their parents than the Chinese students. As far as I am concerned, we high school students should depend more on ourselves rather than parents. For instance, we can grasp the opportunity to do part-time jobs, which not only reduces the burden of our parents, but also broadens our v
8、iew. 【技巧指导】图表式作文写作分三步: 第一、开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题第二、分析数据间的主要差异及趋势,然后描写第三、归纳总结或发表评论。有时第三步可省略【写作常用套语】（一）点明主题：开头常用套语:1.The graph (chart , picture ,table )above shows/describes/represents/ tells that 2.As is shown by the graph / in the chart, 3.As we can see from the table/graph/chart/picture, 4.From the graph
9、 / chart above, we can see 5.From the figures given in the table, it can be seen / noticed that6.The chart/table shows the differences between （二）描写变化及总趋势特征、分析差异：数据说明常用套语: 在描写变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式 或 对比式 以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由。1.There was a great /slight increase /rise in 2.The number /rate has nearly doubled, co
10、mpared with that of last year. 3.The number is times as much as that of. 4.It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by （三）原因说明常用套语: 1.The reason foris that3.The change results from the fact that 4.There are several causes for this significant growth in . First,.Second,5.This brings out the important fac
11、t that 常用词汇有：1.Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, . 精品学习资料 可选择p d f - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 2 页，共 4 页 - - - - - - - - -2.Secondly, . Besides/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover,. 3.Finally/ Last but not least/, . 4.This is because . The reason for . is that . That is why . （四）结尾常用套语: 1. in
12、my opinion/ Personally/ as far as I m concerned/ in short/ in brief/ in a word/ in conclusion/to conclude/ in summary 2. It seems clear that / It s clear/evident from the chart that / We can know/learn that The results seem to suggest thatWe can draw the conclusion thatFrom what has been discussed a
13、bove, we can draw the conclusion thatObviously, if we want to ,it is necessaryThere is no doubt that attention must be paid二、真题再现例一 : 湖北卷受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇 100 词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种调查范围：湖北省的10 所中学调查对象：高中生调查人数： 1000 调查方式：访谈调查结果：（见下图）Read
14、ing Interests of Senior Middle School Students Recently, a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students._ 安排篇章结构文章可分为2 段，以使层次分明。Para 1：引出话题：说明调查内容、调查范围、调查对象、调查人数、调查方式；Para 2: 说明调查结果：注意在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种。【范文展示】Reading Interests of Senior Middle S
15、chool Students Recently, a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. In this sruvey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed.They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories o
16、f English articles, news, tories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods. The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twenty- sixpercent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However,the number of students who enjoy reading popular science 精品学习资料 可选择p d f - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 第 3 页，共 4 页 - - - - - - - - -articles d
