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1、新编实用英语写作主编主编 蒋蒋 磊磊 蔡季愚蔡季愚北京出版集团公司北 京 出 版 社ContentsContentsBasic Skills of Eassay WritingTypes of Essay WritingEssay Writing inExamination FormCommon Models of Short Essay Writing Practical Writing General Paperwork WritingWriting on Diagrams or PicturesUsing proper WordsMaking correct and Effective
2、SentencesParagraph Structure and QualityParagraph Types and DevelopmentUnit 1Unit 2Unit 3Unit 4Unit 5Unit 6Unit 7Unit 8Unit 10Unit 11Unit 12Comparision between English & Chinese WritingUnit 9III. Whats Good Writing ?II. Why do we write?I. What is writing?An IntroductionI. What is writing?Writingisth
3、eprocessofrecordingcharactersonamedium,withtheintentionofformingwordsandotherlargerlanguageconstructs.Mostoftime,writingaimstoproduceworksthataretargetofreading.Writingisoftenusedtodescribethecraftofcreatingalargerworkofliterature.Writinginthissensecanrefertotheproductionoffiction,non-fiction,poetry
4、andletter.Writing, broadly speaking, can be divided into two parts:1.Creative writing2.School Composition WritingWebeginwithfourbasicclaimsaboutwriting:pWritingmeansconstruction.pWritinginvolvesaconstantprocessofreconstruction.pWritingisawayofthinking.pWritingisdifferentfromtalking.I. What is writin
5、g?Research ProblemResearchQuestionsPractical ProblemResearchAnswerWRITINGmotivatesdefinesfindshelps to solveII. Why do we write? For examplePractical ProblemResearch QuestionResearch ProblemApplication to Practical ProblemResearch AnswerMy clock doesnt work well.How can I get it fixed right away?I n
6、eed to find a nearby in the Yellow Pages.The Clock Shop, 1401 East 55th StreetCall to see when they can fix it. III. Whats Good Writing ? Charles C. Colton The writer does the most, who gives the reader the most information, and take from him the least time.William ShakespeareBrevity is the soul of
7、wit.K I S SEEPTHORT &IMPLEbecause of the fact that at this point in timein a curious manner situated in the vicinity of in the near future in many instances has the ability to singmake contact by personal visit was of the opinion that because nowcuriouslynearsoonoftencan singvisitbelievedAvoid padde
8、d expressionsAvoid Chinglish Glaring error; Clumsy interlingual transfer; Dangling participle; Sentence patterns and expressions; Vaguedistinction of synonyms; Poor vocabulary; Wrong collocations.I couldnt understand what the teacher is saying.I couldnt understand what the teacher was saying.I have
9、becomed a university student.I have become a university student. Not all the things seem to be pleasing. Not all the things seem to be pleased.She is very fat, and in class she often sit on the table.She is very stout, and in class she often sits on the desk.Glaring errorClumsy interlingual transfer
10、 I havent received your letter for a long time. How are your conditions? Is your work busy? Please reply me early. Here life is very nervous because we have to do many things. The teachers give us too many exercises, so we cant read when class is over. We have no method. The teachers can change the
11、situation. How are you getting on recently? Are you busy with your work? Hope to hear from you soon. Weve been hard pressed for time. Our teachers are always assigning us so much homework that we can hardly have any time for our outside reading. We have no way out. Perhaps the teachers would do some
12、thing about it After defeating the “gang of four”, Mr. Smith, a British reporter, came to Shanghai for a three-week visit.After graduating from the school, her trouble began.Dangling participle? Dangling participles “lack clear syntactic connection to another element in the sentence in which it occu
13、rs.” (Websters New World Dictionary, p. 356)After the “gang of four” was defeated, Mr. Smith, a British reporter, came to Shanghai for a three-week visit.Dangling participleAfter she graduated from the school, her trouble began.Sentence patterns and expressions “不知不觉” We didnt know evening has falle
14、n. At daybreak we didnt know we had come back to the village at the foot of the mountain.在上面两句中，didnt know是汉语“不知（不觉）”的翻版，而其实际含义是：（我们）不知道。didnt know不含“不知不觉”（即起先不知，后来才察觉）的意思。根据英语思维，“不知不觉”有其特定的句型： before sb. realizes; find oneself + adj. (present participle phr. / prepositional phr.)Evening came before
15、 we realized it. At daybreak we found ourselves back in the village at the foot of the mountain.Vague distinction of synonyms “我家有一条狗。” My home has a dog. 我家 = My home;有 = has;一条狗= a dog. HOME = 家？(family members / the place where a person, or a family lives)In my childhood, when I did something wro
16、ng, my mother never hit me. hit = 打，打击？ hit强调“打着了”、“击中”，give a blow or strike to; strike an object aimed at (contrasted with miss) hit不是指用手掌或戒尺棍棒去打人 We keep a dog at home. We have a dog guarding our house. In my childhood, when I did something wrong, my mother never beat me.Poor vocabulary He remained alive after experiencing the car accident. After my grandfathers death, my grandmother lived 5 years. He stayed at his friends home, at first he was welcome, but later things changed. Since the boy
