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1、新高三第一课The First Lesson In This Unique Journey一. 交流憧憬中体验高考必考题型（改错及自选）及必备知识点（语法词汇）一）给自己的誓言Oath for Senior 3 Students改错1：As a saying goes, “Its no use cry (非谓语)over the spilt milk”, I havent the right to say “If I were 17 again. Maybe, I have wasted too much time in（介词） some stupid things; maybe I have
2、nt paid enough attentions（名词单复） to my study. Thats nothing at all. Right now, right here, I will take my own responsibility to do something meaningful for my dream.No matter how much difficulty what(从句) I may face on the road ahead. I will keep on fighting till the end like a soldier. I truly believ
3、e: “There can be miracles, when you believe. Though hope is frail, but (连词删)its hard to kill”. I held(时态) the faith that everything is possible for a man with brave heart（加冠词）. Most important(副词), from now on, I will do what I must do for my dream, for my future, for my parents who had done a lot fo
4、r me. From now on I will do as a soldier do（主谓一致）. Yes, we can(代词).二）A Letter to My New StudentsDear, my new students, Universityyour paradise(天堂喻指美好的地方)A:语法填空（自选模块考试题型）University is really a big stage_(关系副词)you can let your personalities(个性) and talents shine brightly. The paradise makes_（代词）possib
5、le to build up your abilities by participating_ （介词）colorful activities. Most _(importance), the school can provide you _(介词) more advanced equipment for you to learn more knowledge. In a word, you can live a colorful and productive life , meanwhile, keep and write your unforgettable memories. So _(
6、go) to an ideal university should be a dream of all of you here.You have been _(prepare) for next June for nearly 2 years, so you are great, because you have never quit. There is one year _(leave) for you, so just make full use of every day, every hour, even every minute. The battle_(关系代词) you have
7、been preparing for _(状语从句连接词) 2 years ago will begin in 2015, so dont be afraid of it, but face it bravely, face it confidently, and get ready to win it. Trust yourself! B:改错2（10处）One month is an(冠) unique journey in that（从句） you are determined to employ your holiday to do something meaningful and a
8、s your special teacher, your friend, on（介词） this summer, I will stand by your side, fight (加词介)you and give you suggestion（名词单复数）.In a word, I would(时态) help you improving（非谓语） your English to get well prepared for next June. I true (副词)believe a bright future is waiting for you, so ，（连词）just prepar
9、e for it, fight for it, and reach for it. May your dreams take wings! Yes, we(代词) can.三）改错3 真题体验 （2014浙江卷 ）I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station. I had （时态）noticed that the carriage was noise（词性） and filled with people.Dear WWF, My classmates and I have been doing some research on endange
10、red animals, including the tiger.We find that the tiger, a national protected animal, is dying out, which raise the concern of the whole world. （引出话题-提出问题） There are several reasons resulting in the situation(主题句) .To begin with, people hunt them for their fur without mercy to get high income. Whats
11、 more, with the development of economy, their habitats are destroyed by humans so tigers dont have enough places to live in. Last but not least, there are not complete laws to protect them.（分析问题，原因） Its high time that measures should be taken to help the tiger.(主题句). So firstly, it would be a good i
12、dea if you can forbid(禁止) people to kill tigers by making laws. Besides, Setting up more nature reserves may also help a lot.But most importantly, developing the awareness of wildlife protection should be put on the priority list.（解决问题：主题句统领，然后由过渡词连接各要点） Only by working together to protect the tiger
13、, only when everyone lends his helping hand, can we save it. At last I sincerely hope my suggestions can be of value/help to you and truly believe that the tigers future will be bright with our ，love, care and joint efforts. (共同的努力) 尾段拿出杀手锏，祭出你的大招，如倒装，强调，或者经典句子，表达希望，信心。There must be one day when we
14、human race can live in harmony with wildlife like the tiger on this planet.(可选) Before long, a train inspector comes （时态）to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but （连词）became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching （介词）the ticket, which was eventuall
15、y found under a seat several rows from his（代词） owner. The person who found a （冠词）ticket smiled with pleasure at his success. No one in the carriage had previous（副词形容词） spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers （名词单复数）their help. If we could show concern to others on （介-固定搭配）need, the world would be a better place to live in.二拿下争分提分大头块-书面表达一备考策略：一）平时多积累语言素材（背佳句，针对性分类精品范文， 然后仿写）二）高分必备要素1.审题正确（时态，人称，要点齐全） 2.篇章结构正确（三段式，主题句，过渡词） 3.语言优美 4.使用高级句型，词汇，语法结构 5.首尾段能吸引因繁重改卷而疲倦的给分者。6.书面整洁优美不涂改。二经典范例一）首段范例首段范例1（以此告诉大家积累运用
