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1、1 1.学会一些描写人物的词汇和句型； 2.能够用英文介绍一个你最敬佩的人。 你能认出上面图片中的伟人吗？伟人总是给我们榜样的力量，那么，我们如 何对伟人做人物简介呢？人物介绍是高中生基础写作任务中常见的一种话题类 课堂课堂 5 5 WritingWriting 先 学 目 标先 学 目 标 定个小目标 自 主 探 究自 主 探 究 发现新知 2 型。它涉及人的出生、家庭背景、教育、生平经历、成就和评价等。同学们要注 意其文体应该是记叙文，同时还要注意人称和时态的合理使用。 人物简介的一般步骤可以概括为 5 个字：概、貌、育、平、评。 人物传记是高考书面表达考查频度较高的话题之一。属于记叙文的
2、范畴。人 物写作侧重人物的介绍，可以用第一人称（如写求职信） ，也可以用第三人称。 写人的记叙文要求我们抓住人物的典型事例、典型行为来刻画人物的特征。行文 中要把握好时间、地点、人物、事件等记叙文的要素。时态常常用一般现在时和 一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。写作过程中要注意以 下几个方面的问题： 1.人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、 特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但英语写作需要严格按照写作要求来写，要包括 学 习学 习 进 阶进 阶 心中有框架 3 所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。 2.对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好
3、写作顺序，突出重点信息。重点信 息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职信要重点突出学历、经历，新闻报道要重点 突出事迹，介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点等。 3.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。 4.注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描 写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹等常用一般过去时。 【2020全国 I 卷】 你校正在组织英语作文比赛， 请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的 人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1.人物简介；2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。 The person I respect There are m
4、any respectable people around us. 【谋篇布局】 真 题 演 练真 题 演 练 真枪实战 4 【遣词造句】 完成句子： 1.我身边最敬爱的人是我的老师李老师。 The most beloved and respected person around me is my teacher, Ms Li. 2.她教英语已经二十年了。 She has been teaching English for twenty years. 3.她仍然热爱教学。 She is still passionate about teaching. 4.她像我们亲爱的妈妈一样, 对我们和蔼体
5、贴。 She is kind and considerate towards us just like our dear mother. 5.我们都尊敬她，因为她总是尝试新的方法使她的课生动有趣。 We all respect her because she always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting. 6.她工作努力，知识渊博。 She is hardworking as well as knowledgeable. 7.她是我们学校最好的老师之一。 She is one of the best teach
6、ers in our school. 8.当我们有问题时，我们会向她寻求帮助。 When we have a problem, we will turn to her for help. 9.她总是耐心地和我们谈话，并且帮我们找到解决办法。 She always talks to us patiently and helps us find a solution. 5 10.在我们眼里，她不仅是我们的老师，也是我们最好的朋友。 In our eyes, she is not only our teacher, but also our best friend. 11.这就是她值得我们尊敬的原因
7、。 These are why she deserves our respect. 句式升级： 12.用让步状语从句合并第 2、3 句 Though she has been teaching English for twenty years, she is still passionate about teaching. 13.用分词作状语合并第 6、7 句 Hardworking and knowledgeable, she is one of the best teachers in our school. 【完美成篇】 The person I respect There are ma
8、ny respectable people around us. The most beloved and respected person around me is my teacher, Ms Li. Though she has been teaching English for twenty years, she is still passionate about teaching. She is kind and considerate towards us just like our dear mother. We all respect her because she alway
9、s tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting. Hardworking and knowledgeable, she is one of the best teachers in our school. When we have a problem, we will turn to her for help. She always talks to us patiently and helps us find a solution. In our eyes, she is not only our teacher, bu
10、t also our best friend. These are why she deserves our respect. 请你根据提示，用英语写一篇关于著名科学家钱学森的简介。 钱学森，1911 年生于上海，1935 年赴美留学，成绩优异，受到当时的著名 科学家冯卡门（Von Karman）的赞誉；1938 年在美国获航空、数学博士学位； 典 型 例 题典 型 例 题 6 1950 年获悉新中国成立的消息，克服了美国政府的百般阻挠，于 1955 年回到祖 国；从 1958 年起长期担任航空航天研究工作，为新中国的航天事业做出了巨大 的贡献，被誉为“新中国航天之父” ；2009 年于北京去
11、世。 参考词汇：航空航天科学技术 aerospace science and technology 【构思谋篇】 1.时态：过去时为主。 2.人称：第三人称。 3.结构：首先介绍其基本信息；其次介绍其主要事迹；最后作出评价。 【关键词汇】 1. be regarded as 被认为是 2. be born in 生于 3. go toAmerica for further study 赴美留学 4. be highly thought of 受到赞誉 5. be devoted to 全身心地投入到 6. contribute a lot to 做出巨大贡献 7. because of/as
12、a result of 由于 8. receive the respect and admiration from 受到热爱和尊敬 【连词成句】 1.钱学森被认为是中国航天之父。 Qian Xuesen is regarded as the father of Chinas space program. 2.钱学森于 1911 年出生于上海。 Qian Xuesen was born in 1911 in Shanghai. 3.1935 年赴美留学，成绩优异，受到当时的著名科学家冯卡门（Von Karman） 7 的赞誉。 In 1935, Qian went to America for
13、further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman because of his great achievements. 4.1950 年获悉新中国成立的消息，并于 1955 年成功回到祖国。 In 1950, he heard New China had been founded and succeeded in returning to his homeland in 1955. 5.由于他对祖国的热爱以及所做出的巨大贡献，钱学森受到了人们的热爱和尊敬。 Because of the love for his country and
14、the great achievements, he has received the respect and admiration from people. 6.用过去分词作状语合并句 1 和句 2。 Qian Xuesen, regarded as the father of Chinas space program, was born in 1911 in Shanghai. 【连句成篇】 Qian Xuesen, regarded as the father of Chinas space program, was born in 1911 in Shanghai. In 1935,
15、Qian went to America for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman because of his great achievements. In 1938, he obtained his doctors degree in aerospace science and mathematics in the US. In 1950, he heard New China had been founded and succeeded in returning to our homeland in 1955 th
16、ough the American government tried to stop him. Since 1958 he had been devoted to the research into aerospace science and technology and contributed a lot to the cause of Chinas aerospace. In 2009, he passed away in Beijing. Because of the love for his country and the great achievements, he has received the respect and admiration from people. 作 文 模 板作 文 模 板 8 9 自测提升 假定你是李华，是重庆一中高二学生，你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校 报写一篇人物介绍。请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物居里夫人。 Marie Curie 基础基础训练训练 培优培优训练训练 10 假定你是李华。 最近你市电子科技博物馆正在征集我国古代科学家的英文
