2011年湖南省高考英语作文评分评分原则： 1.总分25分，按5个档次给分 2.先根据内容和语言初步确定档次 3.评分时应注意内容要点，词汇，语法结构 和准确性，上下文的连贯性和语言的得体 性 4.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面 ，若影响交际，酌情扣分 5.书写较差，以致影响交际，降低一个档次总的给分标准：7+7+5+4+2 描述图片，点明主题，给7分 联系实际，写出启示，给7分 语法正确，用词得当，给5分 内容连贯，层次清楚，给4分 书写工整，卷面干净，给2分补充的评分细则 1、主题要求积极向上，没有政治错误，如：团结就是 力量、部分与整体、人与社会的融合、团队协作、锲 而不舍、成功需要积累、积少成多、环保节约、和谐 、小错可以酿成大错等等无需固定在某一个主题上 主题可以隐含在文中，也可以使用主题句2、全文应该包括图片描述与主题归纳、联系实际与启 示两大部分内容这些内容可以单独成块，也可以融 合在一起只有图片描述，无其它内容，视情况归于 第三档或以下3、图片描述每少一项，扣2分但以归纳或概括的形 式表述三项内容的不扣分4、联系实际可以是个人直接体验或间接经验、集体 行为或某种社会现象。
5、合理使用高级表达（如强调、排比、虚拟、倒装 、复杂句、非谓语结构、格言、谚语等），而且词 汇表达丰富、语言地道的文章加2-3分或取本档最 高分6、抄袭试卷中的成段文字，或者生硬地 套用范文，与主题无关的，归于第1档 7、语法、拼写、标点错误不影响意义传 达的，可以不扣该项分；各信息点中的 语言错误酌情扣分，同一类型错误不重 复扣分，该项扣分不超过5分8、全篇内容之间缺乏逻辑和内在连贯， 视期程度归于第4档或以下 9、全文不具备可读性，视情况归于第3 档或以下 10、字数少于100字，扣1分 11、文章可自拟标题，没有标题不扣分 Here are three real writings in 2011.How many marks will you give them?考场作文,请打分﹗﹗The part and the whole world Some water makes up the sea. The forest is made up of many trees. In our society, the group of people consists of various people. The little things contribute to the whole world. Don’t forget the little things and ignore them, which will cost you a lot.It’s obvious that we look upside down some little things frequently, while look up to several honourable things .However, the common thing is more meaningful than the honourable thing. Normal man as you are, you can create more contributions to the society. It’s what you have done to the society that are really important .With a kind heart to the society, every part of the society is of significance.The more you devote to the society, the more you will gain. Being a part of the whole world, your life will be colorful and meaningful.23分25分What advantages?PowerMany people all know one people power less than more people power. One water add many water is sea. One tree add many tree is a forest. You add me is society. So we are should face on more and more different slope. But we are not give up. As we life , many things give me more and more story. We should not stop sign with ease and I figured I would go a little further, In the future, not only face on everything but also I want to look good. I want to power because it makes me feel good. We should believe myself. I kept giving myself the excuse to stop. We didn’t stop .I wanted to keep going harder, better, faster and stronger.3分What disadvantages?Unity is power 24 Many drops of water can make up a sea. Many trees can turn into a forest. Many people can be combined together to make a society. Everything proves the idea that unity is power.Life is full of ups and downs and there are always many difficulties lying on the road that leads to success. When we come across some difficulties , what should we do to solve the problems? Of course unity can help us a lot.For example, on 5th December,2008,a terrible earthquake happened in Sichuan province. Many people were injured and lots of people died but those who were still alive didn’t lose confidence , because not only the whole nation were united and went there to help them out but also some Individuals and organizations abroad gave their hands to the area. With all the help, Sichuan has been rebuilt well now.Unity is power. It makes us walk together and live better. I’m sure that with the help of unity we can overcome any difficulty. The improved sample思考：2011年作文怎样才能得高分（第五档）？ 1.图表类作文应先简要描述图表 2.按要求写出内容要点 3.语言结构和词汇选用恰当，丰富 4.语言错误极少 5.有效采用不同的连接手段，层次清楚 6.使用较高级词汇和较复杂句子结构 7.书写工整，规范Six steps for writing (写作六步骤）1. Cross-question(审题) ※ Main idea ※ Style ※ Verb tense ※ Person2. Seize the major points /key words (抓要点)3.Arrangement(布局) ！4. Sentences connection(连句)Words/phrases Sentences6. Error correcting( 查错改错)5. Express your opinion (发表观点）Conjunctions/ conjunctive adverbssentencespassage技 巧1. 使用较高级的词汇3. 使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的 多少，也是衡量英语水平 的一个重要标志。
运用得当的句子结构可以 给文章增色不少，从而使 整篇文章因此而生辉 使用恰当连接词，对写一 篇有“英语味”的文章很重 要，能使文章上下衔接自 然、紧凑增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2. 使用较丰富的句式1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.I. 怎样使用较高级的词汇We all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.4.The students there needn’t pay for their books.5. She went to Australia in order to study music. 6. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.She went to Australia for the purpose of studying music. The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.Books are free for the students there.II. 丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加 文章的文采。
1.感叹句 _________________when I received your letter!2.强调句 _______ this young boy___ helped the old granny.3.倒装句 ____________________ solve this problem.4.省略句 They read_______________________________How happy I wasIt waswhoOnly in this way can you while walking or riding on a bus. 5、with短语I saw a young lady walking slowly in the 。