读后续写素材积累1 2019.10.16一、环境描写的素材 环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度:客观为从环境事物本身入手,主观则从观察者 角度描写通常在描写时主客观交替进行,主观描写比重稍大客观环境描写：Part 1环境描写的adj要求:有声,有色,有质感,有味道the blue sky （蓝天）the songs of birds （鸟鸣）the thundering clouds （电光闪雷鸣）the fragile flowers （娇嫩的花）;（the dark, raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚）the green grass（青草）the fragrant roses（艳丽的玫瑰）;the setting/rising sun（落日/冉冉升起的 太阳）...Part 2环境描写的verb （vi&vt）要求一） .Wind （blow/click/howl/wail/roar）1. A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,...一阵风吹,吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条,就像卷起的窗帘。
2. The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope .风,轻柔却寒冷,轻点着树枝,搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛3. A cool breeze blew through the quiet park .凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园4. A cold breeze wafted through my hair.（冷风吹拂过我的头发）The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift.（今日正是放风筝的好天气,强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升二） .Water （flow/travel/move/meander/enter）声音:1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.在某处,潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响颜色 2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface .水是深蓝色的,阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。
3. A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank. 离此不远,有一条小溪,在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀4. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother.似乎它在温柔低语,就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语faction, sound, colour）三）.Sky （stand/ appear/turn）1. The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.天空是浓浓的灰色,伴着拥挤的朵朵云2. Blue skies stood tall and far蓝蓝的天空高高耸立主观环境描写：1.Sb found sth adj/doing/done某人发现某物（状态/动作/被）...2.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done某人看到/听到U/感到/闻到某物（状态/动 作/被）3.lt was so adj that we find/feel 它是如此....以至于4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed/景物使我如此陶醉/惊讶/sth held sb entirely in their power 景物让我完全惊呆了5.It looked/seemed/appeared/felt like ...景物看起来像...二、场景描写的素材（来自原著:追风筝的人）1. At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky, like paper sharks roaming for prey. Within an hour, the number doubled, and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun in the sky, A cold breeze wafted through my hair, The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift, make the sweeps easier.（放风筝的场景描写,从各个角度,立体描述）空中已经挂着至少二十来只风筝,如同纸制的鲨鱼,巡游搜猎食物。
不到一个钟头, 这个数字翻了一番,红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞,熠熠生辉寒 冷的微风吹过我的头发这风正适宜放风筝,风速不大,恰好能让风筝飘浮起来,也 便于操控2. The water was a deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface. 湖水澄蓝,波平如镜,阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉3. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky. They danced high above the trees on the west end of the park, over the windmills, floating side by side like a pair of eyes looking down on San Francisco, the city I now call home.（场景、比喻）我抬起头,望见两只红色的风筝,带着长长的蓝色尾巴,在天空中冉冉升起。
它们舞 动着,飞越公园西边的树林,飞越风车,并排飘浮着,如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金山,这 个我现在当成家园的城市4. Blue skies stood tall and far, the sun l ike a branding iron searing the back of your neck. Creeks where Hassan and I skipped stones all spring turned dry, and rickshaws stirred dust when they sputtered by.（场景、比喻）天空一碧如洗,阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂,到了夏 天它们也干涸了黄包车嗒嗒走过,扬起阵阵灰尘5. Somewhere, a branch snapped, an owl hooted. The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope. And from below, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音,还有猫头鹰的叫声。
寒风微微拂动树枝,吹 过山坡上的灌木丛而下面,水流在山谷淌动,传来阵阵微弱的声音6. By three o'clock, the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. A cool breeze blew through the park.（天气）到三点时,雨停了,铅灰色的天空阴云密布,一阵寒风吹过公园7. The sun was beginning to set, glittering red through the cracks between the ramshackle buildings.（景象）太阳开始下山,那些摇摇欲坠的房子的裂缝中,渗出闪闪的红色斜晖三、描写时间,动作,心理和情感一）、情感好词：1.喜乐① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发 光② A smile of understanding flashed across his face .他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵激动声穿过他们。
④ Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure .他的眼睛闪烁着快乐⑥ A wild gaiety （快乐）took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile .令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光,嘴角保持着稳定的微笑⑧ I was wild with joy,我欣喜假设狂⑨ I was pleased beyond description,我高兴得难以形容⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face .她脸上带着灿烂的笑容⑪Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整个房间⑫She shed tears of joy .她高兴得流下了眼泪⑬Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds .她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
⑭ She was overflowing with happiness .她洋溢着幸福⑮ Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红⑯Joy welled up inside her .她心中涌起喜悦⑰I was floating on air .我漂浮在空中⑱Amusement gleamed in his eyes .他眼睛流露出愉快的神情2.愤怒：① I was seized by anger .我充满了愤怒② He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆③ His anger boiled over .他的愤怒爆发了④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage .他几乎控制不住怒火⑤ He was breathing fire and fury .他充满着怒火⑥ His voice trembled with anger .他的声音因愤怒而颤抖⑦ He gave me a l。