Unit 4 My city,1. 能合理全面分析调查结果,运用调查报告的形式,完成对周边环境的分析报告 2. 明确说明文写作方式,学习读写结合型作文的写作策略 3. 学会主动关注周边环境,培养城市主人翁精神Learning objectives,1.说明文的写作线索 说明文是以说明为主要表达方式,介绍事物的形状、构造、性质、变化、类别、状态、功能、成因、结果等特征的文章它是一种应用性很强的文体,说明的目的是让读者有所知,给读者提供知识,使之了解客观世界,掌握解决问题的方法以下是说明文的几种常见写作方法: (1)罗列法(listing) 在文章开始时提出需要说明的东西和观点,然后常用first,second,…and finally加以罗列说明2)举例法(examples) 举例法是用具体的例子来说明我们要表达的意思,常用for example, for instance, still another example is…等词语引出 (3)比较法(comparison and contrast) 比较法是对两个对象进行比较,从而进行说明的写作手法比较法又可细分为比较相同点(comparison)和比较不同点(contrast)两种方法。
(4)定义法(definition)定义法也是英语说明文中常用的写作手法,特别是在对具体事物概念进行说明时经常使用定义法的基本要素是定义句5)顺序法(sequence of time, space and process) 顺序法是指按时间、空间或过程的顺序进行说明的一种写作手法比如按照时间顺序介绍一个科学家的生平,用空间顺序阐述逐渐开发西部的重要意义,用过程顺序法解释葡萄酒的生产过程等等 (6)分类法(classification)分类法是将写作对象进行分类说明的一种写作手法2.读写结合相结合类型的写作,读写相结合类型的写作,读是为了写服务的,阅读的 篇章与写作的任务通常有许多的相关性因此,要学 会从以下的途径分析:,③分析文本的语言特征,思考有哪些语言可以灵活迁移至自己的写作中,包括适切的词块、漂亮的句式等①首先要分析阅读的主题②分析文章的篇章结构,包括整篇文章的中心句/段、支撑句/段,总结句/段,同时明晰作者使用的写作方法1.Unit topic languages(单元话题语言) 以连线、标序号等形式列举本单元与本话题写作相关的词块、句子 名词/动名词词块: ①comfortable seats, ②great service, ③best quality, ④best sound,Language box(语言工具箱),动词词块: ①have.in common, ②play a role, ③take.seriously, ④have the best clothes, ⑤sit most comfortably, ⑥buy clothes most cheaply, ⑦show their talent, ⑧come true,Language box(语言工具箱),介词词块: ①in the neighborhood, ②with great service 形容词词块: ①more and more popular, ②much better, ③close to home, ④the most expensive, ⑤(be) similar to,Language box(语言工具箱),名词/动名词词块: ( )最好的声音 ( )最好的质量 ( )优质服务 ( )舒适的座位,Quiz: Read aloud the chunks above and try to match the meaning by numbering.,①,③,②,④,( )实现 ( )展示他们的才能 ( )在.有共同点 ( )扮演角色 ( )认真对待. ( )有最好的衣服 ( )坐得最舒服 ( )以最便宜的价格买到衣服,动词词块:,①,②,⑥,⑦,③,⑤,④,⑧,( )在周围 ( )有优质的服务,介词词块,②,①,( )好多了 ( )最昂贵的 ( )越来越受欢迎 ( )离家近 ( )与.相似,形容词词块,③,②,①,④,⑤,. because. It has. It is . with . It is closest to . Movie City has the best . Talent show is getting more and more . All the shows have . in common. You enjoy your time most quietly at one of .,(2)Patterns(句型),2. Extensive languages(拓展性语言),Famous saying,proverbs, aphorisms and Classical sample sentences(名言、谚语、警句与经典例句),(1)Better city, better life. 城市让生活更美好。
(2)The happiest people are those who can really appreciate the beauty of life. 最幸福的人们懂得欣赏生活的美好 (3)There are no shortcuts to any place worth going. 任何值得去的地方,都没有捷径 (4)Because of these beautiful scenery and memories, I like go back my hometown in summer. 正是因为这些美丽的风景和回忆,我喜欢在夏天回到故乡 (5)People love this city, and they will make it a better place. 人们爱这座城,并将使之越来越好 (6)It used to be a small town, where people made a living by fishing. 以前这里是个小镇,人们靠打渔为生Guided reading(导读):,Reading,“Better city, better life.” Cities offer us a better life. What is your favorite city? What is your favorite city like?,Reading,My favorite city My favorite city in the world is Auckland, New Zealand. It is one of the world’s best cities for living, also known as the “City of Sails” and the Queen City. There are many harbors, beaches, oceans and mountains, among which is the famous Rangitoto volcano. If you like history, you can visit the Auckland Museum, the Auckland War Memorial Museum, the New Zealand National Maritime Museum and so on. If you like shopping, then go to the Queen Street, Parnell Road, and Ponsonby Road and enjoy yourself. If you like nature, One Tree Hill, which is named for its lone,Reading,tree on top of the hill will not disappoint you. At the foot of the hill, there are crowds of sheep and green grass. All is truly the New Zealand countryside style. If you want to learn about Auckland’s education, you can visit the University of Auckland. It's one of the most famous universities in the world. Founded in 1883, it has two campuses. Sometimes you have to take a bus to go to different colleges. Auckland is an English-speaking country, so if you want to visit there, you'd better learn some English, or you’ll have to take a translator with you. Welcome to Auckland and enjoy the great natural view and different culture.,Task 1: Fill in the information.,Auckland,The Queen Street, Parnell Road, and Ponsonby Road,1883,English,Crowds of sheep and green grass,Good words and phrases from the passage _______________________________________________________________,Task3 好词好句,Good sentences from the passage _______________________________ ____________________________,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,Task4 Write down your opinion or feelings about Auckland.,While writing,假设上周你校举办了一次题为“我们城市的靓点”的问卷调查,请你根据下面的表格写一篇英文调查报告。
要求:1. 内容完整,语句连贯,语法准确;2. 词数70个左右写作任务,1. 审题——想一想,填一填审题 体裁:_______________________ 人称:_______________________ 时态:_______________________,第三人称,一般现在时、一般过去时,说明文,①Where is your city? Can you introduce it to other people? ② What do you think is the best part of your city? Tell the reasons. ③ How do you feel about your city? What can you do to make it better?,2. 内容要点——。