卷面美观卷面美观布局合理布局合理逻辑流畅逻辑流畅语言准确语言准确高大上高大上有思想有思想表达形式表达形式丰富丰富凌乱的凌乱的书写写拼写、数、拼写、数、时态等低等低级错误失衡的布局、无失衡的布局、无逻辑性性平淡甚至平淡甚至错误的表达的表达老土的模板老土的模板Dragging factorsDragging factorsContributing factors Contributing factors Factors that influence teachers scoring Factors that influence teachers scoring 第1页，共33页第2页，共33页第3页，共33页第4页，共33页第5页，共33页第6页，共33页卷面糊涂型卷面糊涂型第7页，共33页排版问题型排版问题型第8页，共33页低级错误型低级错误型第9页，共33页Errors in your writing:1.冠词使用错误冠词使用错误2.时态语态混用错误时态语态混用错误3.句子成分残缺句子成分残缺4.习惯搭配误用习惯搭配误用5.名词单、复数不分名词单、复数不分6.基本词汇拼写错误基本词汇拼写错误7.词性使用错误词性使用错误8.标点符号与大小写错误标点符号与大小写错误第10页，共33页。
语言错误：语言错误：1.1.冠词使用错误冠词使用错误I am Li Hua,the middle school student from China.I am Li Hua,a chairman of the Students Union.称呼语、表示头衔或职称的名词前不用冠词称呼语、表示头衔或职称的名词前不用冠词a第11页，共33页2.2.时态、语态混用时态、语态混用(1)I had learned English for 10 years.(2)The International Trade Fair will be hold in our city.(3)Our city will be hold the International Trade Fair.(4)I would be appreciate it if you give me the chance.haveheld第12页，共33页3.3.句子成分残缺句子成分残缺So I writing this message to you.I always watch English films and listen English songs.amto第13页，共33页。
4.4.习惯搭配误用习惯搭配误用I have a gift of English.Im interesting in this activity.forinterestedhave a gift for have a gift for 对对对对有天赋有天赋有天赋有天赋be interested in be interested in 对对对对感兴趣感兴趣感兴趣感兴趣第14页，共33页5.5.名词单、复数不分名词单、复数不分I am glad that you want some volunteer.I get along well with my classmate.volunteersclassmates第15页，共33页6 6.基本词汇拼写错误基本词汇拼写错误1.activity activities 活动活动2.high school student 高中生高中生3.hold-held-held 举办、举行举办、举行 will be held 将被举办将被举办4.prize 奖品、奖项奖品、奖项 price 价格价格第16页，共33页7 7.词性使用错误词性使用错误I can speak English fluent.So I am sure that I can do the job good if I get this position.fluentlywell第17页，共33页。
8.8.标点符号与大小写标点符号与大小写一个完整的句子以大写字母开始，以句点结束一个完整的句子以大写字母开始，以句点结束一个完整的句子以大写字母开始，以句点结束一个完整的句子以大写字母开始，以句点结束第18页，共33页解题误区】1.审题不清，遗漏要点；审题不清，遗漏要点；2.书写不规范或拼写错误；书写不规范或拼写错误；3.句子残缺或结构和语法错误；句子残缺或结构和语法错误；4.词不达意，逻辑混乱；词不达意，逻辑混乱；5.中文式英语；中文式英语；6.语篇连贯不佳语篇连贯不佳第19页，共33页写作步骤：写作步骤：1.审题审题(人称、时态人称、时态)2.拆分要点、拓展句子拆分要点、拓展句子3.列提纲列提纲 （10句话作文）句话作文）4.写正文写正文 （一般分三段）（一般分三段）5.检查检查（1）时态）时态 （2）主谓一致）主谓一致（3）名词单复数）名词单复数 （4）单词拼写）单词拼写（5）动词的过去式、过去分词）动词的过去式、过去分词（6）句子是否完整句子是否完整第20页，共33页求职信的正文：（月考题）求职信的正文：（月考题）第一段：信息来源、身份及目的第一段：信息来源、身份及目的第二段：自身优势（兴趣、相关经历）第二段：自身优势（兴趣、相关经历）第三段：信心与希望。
第三段：信心与希望特别注意：特别注意：1.要点拆分、总起句、拓展句、过渡词要点拆分、总起句、拓展句、过渡词2.分段、篇幅安排、卷面与书写分段、篇幅安排、卷面与书写 第21页，共33页拆分成十句话作文：拆分成十句话作文：一、一、1.1.招聘信息来源；招聘信息来源；2.2.我是李华，我是李华，中学生；中学生；3.3.申请做志愿者申请做志愿者二、表明自己可以胜任某一职位二、表明自己可以胜任某一职位理由：理由：1.1.擅长英语、对英语感兴趣；擅长英语、对英语感兴趣；2.2.英语竞赛获奖英语竞赛获奖3 3.有参加过志愿者工作的经历；有参加过志愿者工作的经历；4 4.个人性格上的优点个人性格上的优点三、三、1.1.对做好志愿者工作的信心和获准参加的愿对做好志愿者工作的信心和获准参加的愿望2.2.期待回复期待回复 第22页，共33页Useful expressions1.major in 主修主修专业专业2.be qualified for (可可)胜任胜任 3.have a good command/knowledge of 精通精通4.apply for 申请申请5.get along well with与与相处愉快相处愉快第23页，共33页。
6.win the first prize 获得一等奖获得一等奖7.be optimistic 对对乐观乐观8.meet your qualifications 满足你们的资历要求满足你们的资历要求9.have rich experience in /be experienced in 在在方面有丰富的经验方面有丰富的经验10.broaden ones vision/horizons 开阔眼界开阔眼界/开阔视野开阔视野第24页，共33页1.从你们的广告中得知你们正在招聘一名从你们的广告中得知你们正在招聘一名I learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a 2.如果能获得这个工作如果能获得这个工作/机会，我会非常感激机会，我会非常感激I would be grateful if I could be given the job/opportunity.套用句式套用句式第25页，共33页3.我相信我是这个职位的最佳人选我相信我是这个职位的最佳人选I am convinced that I will be the right person for the job/position.4.一旦被录用，我将竭尽所能把工作做好。
一旦被录用，我将竭尽所能把工作做好Once hired,I will devote myself to the post.5.我盼望着你的尽快回复我盼望着你的尽快回复I am looking forward to your earliest reply.第26页，共33页Dear Sir or Madam,Dear Sir or Madam,I am glad to have read your advertisement.My name is Li I am glad to have read your advertisement.My name is Li Hua,a student of 16 Hua,a student of 16 from No.1 Middle School of the cityfrom No.1 Middle School of the city.I am.I am writing to apply to work for the International Trade Fair as a writing to apply to work for the International Trade Fair as a volunteer.volunteer.I believe I can do this job well.First I believe I can do this job well.First,I am interested in,I am interested in English and I English and I have a good command of have a good command of English.I won the first English.I won the first prize at the city Middle School English Speaking Contest last prize at the city Middle School English Speaking Contest last year.year.Besides,Besides,I once worked as a voluntary guide for I once worked as a voluntary guide for foreign guests.foreign guests.Whats more,Whats more,I am an outgoing,reliable and I am an outgoing,reliable and helpful person and familiar with the city.helpful person and familiar with the city.With all these advantages,I suppose that if you give With all these advantages,I suppose that if you give me a chance,I me a chance,I will be qualified to will be qualified to be a volunteer for the be a volunteer for the fair.Im looking forward to your reply.fair.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Yours truly,Li Hua Li Hua第27页，共33页。
Practice makes perfect.假定你是李华假定你是李华，你看到某跨国旅游公司在，你看到某跨国旅游公司在中山市当地招聘暑假工的广告，你想利用中山市当地招聘暑假工的广告，你想利用高考结。