用心爱心专心1 高考英语书面表达对比类写作对比类写作已成为英语书面表达中一个非常重要的形式1999 年高考题要求学生根据所给图画介绍学校三年间的新变化;2001 年高考题要求学生比较减负前后的学习情况;2002年高考题要求学生比较“公园要不要收门票”的两种不同观点;2004 年北京春季高考要求学生根据所给图画比较过去和现在的生活变化情况不管在工作学习中还是在日常生活中,对比是人们分析问题和解决问题的重要方法和手段,这就不难理解为什么对比类写作是高考写作中的一个重要形式对比类写作一般有两种方式:一是集中比较或对比(集中说明一个对象的诸种特征);二是逐点比较或对比(一条一条地说明两者的异同)对比类写作可以大致分为以下几种:一、今昔对比在作今昔对比时,要注意时态的变化谈到过去的情况要用过去时态(主要是一般过去时) ,谈到现在的情况要用现在时态(主要是一般现在时)今昔对比的写作格式是:开头(提出什么事情发生了变化)对具体事例作对比结论写作方式既可采用集中比较,也可采用逐点比较在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章:1. 开头常用句型(1) Great changes have taken place. 发生了巨大变化。
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five year. Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China. Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. (2) Things have begun to improve since,自从, 以来,事情有了好转/ 改善 Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. 2. 对比常用句型(1) , used to , , but now,过去常 , ,但是现在 ,(2) , in the past, but now,在过去 , ,但是现在 ,(3) once , but now,曾经,. ,但是现在 ,(4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了。
5) But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了Where the playground used to be now standsanother new building-our library. I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home. Once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but nowwe watch the news and other programs on TV. When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment. 在作对比时,为避免句型重复,可适当变换一些句式,比如:(1) Another change is,再有一个变化是 ,Another big change is in the housing conditions. (2) What s more, ,还有,用心爱心专心2 Whats more , I can go to bed earlier than in the past. 3. 结尾常用句型In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience. 2004 年北京春季高考题范文Changes In Our Life Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life(主题句 ). Take my family for example(过渡句 ). My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home(对比一 ). And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but nowwe watch the news and other programs on TV(对比二 ). Another big change is in the housing conditions(过渡句 ). When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment(对比三 ). In short , changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience(总结句 ). 在写这类文章时,首先要写好主题句。
同学们在审题时要把握全局,把全文要说明的主题在第一句交待清楚然后根据所给材料,展开今昔对比 对比时不要单调地使用同一句型,要稍有变化,并中间要有恰当的过渡句最后写好总结句,即你对这种现象作出自己的理解或判断二、正反观点对比对同一件事情,人们常有不同的看法,即正反两种观点在写作时,常使用一般现在时写作格式一般是:提出问题两种不同观点对两种不同观点的论据(理由)逐项作对比有时题目会要求说出自己的观点,可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由,最好不要重复前面的已谈到的理由写作方式一般采用集中比较在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章:正反观点对比常用句型(1) We have a discussion about,我们对 , 进行了一次讨论We ve had a discussion about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. (2) We have had a survey on,我们对 , 开展了一次调查We ve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to carry mobile phones to schools. (3) Opinions are divided on the question. 在这个问题上意见有分歧。
4) Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. 有两种不同意见5) Others have different opinions. 其他人有不同看法5) Sixty percent of the students are for the idea, while forty percent of the students think otherwise. 有 60% 的学生支持这个观点,然而有40% 的学生则不这样认为6) Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to, but forty percent of the students dont think so. 60%的学生认为 , 是必须的,而40% 的学生则不这样认为7) On the one hand, , On the other hand, ,一方面 , ,另一方面 ,在对某一观点作进一步论证时,可用下列句型:(1) What s more, ,还有就是 ,用心爱心专心3 Whats more, we can get a good knowledge of the culture and social customs of the country where we study, as well as improve our English. (2) Besides, ,除此之外 ,Some students cannot discipline themselves. Besides, its far too expensive to study abroad, which is a load to the family. 当然在提出多个论据时,也可用First, ,Second, , Third, , 来列举论据。
2002 年高考题范文Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks(提出问题 ). Opinions are divided on the question(过渡句 ). 60 of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park should be free of charge(观点一 ). People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away(论据一 ). What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city(论据二 ). On the other hand, 40 think that fees should be charged(观点二 ) because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers(论据一 ), and to buy plants and young trees(论据二 ). They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly Li Hua 可以看出, 这类文章的写作,首先要提出问题, 即双方讨论的问题。
接下来提出观点一,并用一系列论据进行阐明说明完观点一之后,再提出观点二,继续用论据进行说明如果需要。